| "Lonely, Lost, and Unloved" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: vampitty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2012 23:18 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please hurry and post the next chapter soon!!!! :D |
Reviewed By: Just Dropping In On: September 11, 2010 22:44 EDT
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*cough* "Your"....,I obviously would not be the best beta reader, lol!
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Reviewed By: Just Dropping In On: September 11, 2010 22:42 EDT
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Hi. I was just reviewing to say that your story concept may be good, but have you considered getting a beta reader of some kind? you sentences are full of incorrect grammar/word use and I think if you found a way to improve on that, your story would be even better than it is now. Don't get me wrong, I'm totally not bashing your story! I'm only suggesting a little more careful editing.
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Reviewed By: Irish Rebel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2010 22:17 EDT
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i really hope you update this story soon, and that it is a kurama/kagome story:) I like the story so far and i can't wait 4 da nxt chapter. Keep up the good work!!! xx
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 18:24 EST
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poor kagome, having to live with youko. if demons from the feudal era can go through to kagome's time then why cant shippo? i think kagome should introduce shippo to her mom and he can be spoiled to death, in fact she can leave him in her time where it's safer.
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Title: kagomeofthesouth
Reviewed By: KagomeoftheSouth [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 16:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur a good author please update ur story as soon as u can. i cant wait to read the next chapter!
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 00:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Update soon. Can't wait to see how Kurama handles being in the same house as Kagome, what Naraku plans to do, and how the SD defeats him.
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 22:46 EDT
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Ohh nice story keep going its really good
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Reviewed By: MizzMinxx On: May 12, 2006 22:46 EDT
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please update i wanna read more
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Title: it's just 2 swwwweeeeettt!!!!
Reviewed By: LADY SILVER FOX A.K.A. MYCHELLE79 On: May 04, 2006 20:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more please good story!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 03:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon.!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 17:19 EDT
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Title: oh yea
Reviewed By: rain dance [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 19:43 EDT
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it's Kuronue is in it?
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: rain dance [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 19:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's fucking funny man. please write more chapters.
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: March 06, 2006 20:56 EST
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Please, please update real soon. Was it Kuronue? What is he in the human world? Wonder how long they think they could hide from Kagome, before she finds out she's being watched. Is Sesshomaru going to be in this and if so, will he be protective of Kagome, like brother/father type. Please update real soon.
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Title: The mystery man is
Reviewed By: Inu_chick24 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 17:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY . The mystery demon is kuronue. please add some lemons soon
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Title: Lonely, Lost, And Unloved Or So It Seems
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 15:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Hiei and Kagome please?
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Reviewed By: Irish Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 15:49 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon that was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: crazyasswhitegirl On: January 03, 2006 22:19 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
allright here's what i think: u got a good story, i like it, but i hate cliffies. u will update *sigh* i hate waiting. well update soon.
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Title: It's me ^_^
Reviewed By: DragonOfDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 17:03 EST
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First off, I want to thank you for that lovely compliment you sent me a while back. I'm glad you enjoy my fanfiction enough to where you'd specifically request a review from me. *warm fuzzies all around* I like the way that this story is headed so far and I hope you update soon. I just have two suggestions to make: 1) Hmmm, you might want to check over your grammar at least one more time before posting a chapter. Mostly it's just your verb tense that is a little mixed up, but nothing too serious. 2) Apparently I'm going to be the first one to suggest a Hiei/Kagome pairing. I guess I'm a little biased because I love Hiei so much, but you should only do it if you're up for the challenge of writing Hiei both in love and in CHARACTER. So yeah, I'm gonna go read your other fics now. Good luck! ~Ali
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Title: LEMONS!!!!!
Reviewed By: LADY SILVER FOX A.K.A. MYCHELLE 79 On: December 11, 2005 17:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MAKE IT A YOUKO(KURAMA)AND KAGOME STORY!!! ALSO ADD LEMONS,LEMONLIME,LEMONADE ALL AROUND!!!! MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!
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Title: kinky kitsune!!
Reviewed By: LADY SILVER FOX A.K.A. MYCHELLE 79 On: December 11, 2005 16:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more please!!!! hahaha that was funny hehehehe!!! youko(kurama)is hott he so sexy!!! MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Leigh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 05:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fic so far please make a kurama/kagome/yoko fic its one of the best pairings also loved the part where kurama told yoko if he would force him to watch all those show i was rotf lmfao because it was so funny well hope you up date soon keep up the good work bye
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Reviewed By: me On: November 26, 2005 02:33 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this was really good.. plz write more
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Title: WHY THE HELL DO EVERYONE WANT KAGOME/KURAMA PAIRING?!?!?!!?!?!!?!?!!?!?!?!!!!????!!?!?!?
Reviewed By: Late nights, playin' in the dark And wakin' up inside my arms Sess, you'll always be in my heart andI can see it in your eyes You still want it So don't forget about us!! On: November 16, 2005 21:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's funny......but you really need to update Love Between Differences!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mistress_of_Dragons [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 17:16 EST
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The guy is Kuronue. Ha Ha. I think so. Please hurry and update again.
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 16:36 EST
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Kuronue/Kagome\Kurama|Youko ITS Kuronue!
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 16:23 EST
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Kagome/Kurama
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Title: Kuronue???
Reviewed By: KawaiiKoneko89 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 16:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would guess that is Kuronue??? Well anywho I would love it to be Kurama/Kagome/Youko or maybe a little Kuronue in that mix. :3
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Reviewed By: Animeotakubara [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 18:07 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Nice please update soon
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