| "Lonely, Lost, and Unloved" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: MizzMinxx On: May 12, 2006 22:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
please update i wanna read more
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Title: it's just 2 swwwweeeeettt!!!!
Reviewed By: LADY SILVER FOX A.K.A. MYCHELLE79 On: May 04, 2006 20:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more please good story!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 03:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon.!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 17:19 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Title: oh yea
Reviewed By: rain dance [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 19:43 EDT
Comment/Review:
it's Kuronue is in it?
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: rain dance [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 19:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's fucking funny man. please write more chapters.
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: March 06, 2006 20:56 EST
Comment/Review:
Please, please update real soon. Was it Kuronue? What is he in the human world? Wonder how long they think they could hide from Kagome, before she finds out she's being watched. Is Sesshomaru going to be in this and if so, will he be protective of Kagome, like brother/father type. Please update real soon.
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Title: The mystery man is
Reviewed By: Inu_chick24 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 17:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY . The mystery demon is kuronue. please add some lemons soon
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Title: Lonely, Lost, And Unloved Or So It Seems
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 15:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Hiei and Kagome please?
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Reviewed By: Irish Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 15:49 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon that was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: crazyasswhitegirl On: January 03, 2006 22:19 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
allright here's what i think: u got a good story, i like it, but i hate cliffies. u will update *sigh* i hate waiting. well update soon.
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Title: It's me ^_^
Reviewed By: DragonOfDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 17:03 EST
Comment/Review:
First off, I want to thank you for that lovely compliment you sent me a while back. I'm glad you enjoy my fanfiction enough to where you'd specifically request a review from me. *warm fuzzies all around* I like the way that this story is headed so far and I hope you update soon. I just have two suggestions to make: 1) Hmmm, you might want to check over your grammar at least one more time before posting a chapter. Mostly it's just your verb tense that is a little mixed up, but nothing too serious. 2) Apparently I'm going to be the first one to suggest a Hiei/Kagome pairing. I guess I'm a little biased because I love Hiei so much, but you should only do it if you're up for the challenge of writing Hiei both in love and in CHARACTER. So yeah, I'm gonna go read your other fics now. Good luck! ~Ali
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Title: LEMONS!!!!!
Reviewed By: LADY SILVER FOX A.K.A. MYCHELLE 79 On: December 11, 2005 17:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MAKE IT A YOUKO(KURAMA)AND KAGOME STORY!!! ALSO ADD LEMONS,LEMONLIME,LEMONADE ALL AROUND!!!! MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!
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Title: kinky kitsune!!
Reviewed By: LADY SILVER FOX A.K.A. MYCHELLE 79 On: December 11, 2005 16:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more please!!!! hahaha that was funny hehehehe!!! youko(kurama)is hott he so sexy!!! MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Leigh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 05:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fic so far please make a kurama/kagome/yoko fic its one of the best pairings also loved the part where kurama told yoko if he would force him to watch all those show i was rotf lmfao because it was so funny well hope you up date soon keep up the good work bye
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