| "Lonely, Lost, and Unloved" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: vampitty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2012 23:18 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please hurry and post the next chapter soon!!!! :D |
Reviewed By: Just Dropping In On: September 11, 2010 22:44 EDT
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*cough* "Your"....,I obviously would not be the best beta reader, lol!
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Reviewed By: Just Dropping In On: September 11, 2010 22:42 EDT
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Hi. I was just reviewing to say that your story concept may be good, but have you considered getting a beta reader of some kind? you sentences are full of incorrect grammar/word use and I think if you found a way to improve on that, your story would be even better than it is now. Don't get me wrong, I'm totally not bashing your story! I'm only suggesting a little more careful editing.
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Reviewed By: Irish Rebel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2010 22:17 EDT
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i really hope you update this story soon, and that it is a kurama/kagome story:) I like the story so far and i can't wait 4 da nxt chapter. Keep up the good work!!! xx
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 18:24 EST
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poor kagome, having to live with youko. if demons from the feudal era can go through to kagome's time then why cant shippo? i think kagome should introduce shippo to her mom and he can be spoiled to death, in fact she can leave him in her time where it's safer.
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Title: kagomeofthesouth
Reviewed By: KagomeoftheSouth [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 16:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur a good author please update ur story as soon as u can. i cant wait to read the next chapter!
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 00:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Update soon. Can't wait to see how Kurama handles being in the same house as Kagome, what Naraku plans to do, and how the SD defeats him.
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 22:46 EDT
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Ohh nice story keep going its really good
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Reviewed By: MizzMinxx On: May 12, 2006 22:46 EDT
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please update i wanna read more
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Title: it's just 2 swwwweeeeettt!!!!
Reviewed By: LADY SILVER FOX A.K.A. MYCHELLE79 On: May 04, 2006 20:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more please good story!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 03:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon.!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 17:19 EDT
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Title: oh yea
Reviewed By: rain dance [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 19:43 EDT
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it's Kuronue is in it?
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: rain dance [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 19:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's fucking funny man. please write more chapters.
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: March 06, 2006 20:56 EST
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Please, please update real soon. Was it Kuronue? What is he in the human world? Wonder how long they think they could hide from Kagome, before she finds out she's being watched. Is Sesshomaru going to be in this and if so, will he be protective of Kagome, like brother/father type. Please update real soon.
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