| "Shadows of the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 139 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ed On: March 23, 2002 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fic. I love DBZ stories, but I haven't read one like this before. Reading this type of fic for the first time makes me want to read more. I'm officially hooked! Please write more soon! |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2002 14:23 CST
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That was fantastic! You are truely an amazing author if there ever was one! This fic totally rocks! You keep them in character so well and add new twists all the time, I love it! Can't wait for more! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Juuhachigou Sedai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2002 20:48 CST
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wow, this is good i did like how you added that comic in there, i have a copy of it so i recognized it right away. this last chapter is pretty intence i love what your doing with this story! |
Reviewed By: Spacefille [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2002 03:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I have! :D This was the second GokuxVegeta epic I ever read, and of the same sort of high quality as this fic.
The first time I read it (as in this fic here, Shadow of the Past), I had read it on a different webpage and it only went up to chapter 5. I thought it was strange that it only went up that far because you didn't leave it off on a lemon. Anywho, then I found the Stack of Stuff website and read upto chapter 14, and really enjoyed it, especially the angst (write moooore... Onigai??) Which makes this the third time I've found your fic online. *lol* I really do enjoy your writing, it's about the best out there, and I've been reading yaoi fanfiction for what? Five years? Anyway, keep up the good work! :) |
Reviewed By: Juuhachigou Sedai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2002 00:21 CST
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That father son part was adorable! This is so good! *grins* as soon as we get our computer stuff completely back up i'll be trying to get the last couple chaps of my fic, and you know what? it still doesn't have a title! anyway, I'm so into your fic! can't wait till you get more out! |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2002 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god, i just can't think what to say! That was just......beautiful. I am deeply touched, i feel so different and inspired now. You have reached my soul, thank you soooooooooooo much!! |
Reviewed By: Malychyte On: February 22, 2002 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have an incredible talent! You are so gifted! I just have to say for the sake of all us fans out there, please don't stop writing! |
Reviewed By: Sosoru-san [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2002 19:15 CST
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I'm not really into yaoi fics...as a matter of fact, this is the first one I have read. But, I must say, it is very well-written and quite interesting. |
Reviewed By: EB On: February 19, 2002 22:11 CST
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This is one of the best dragonball love stories I have read. I actually have read and reread it. I want more! I've been a big fan of bulma/vegeta fics (wanting to be in Bulma's shoes) but you have made this love affair so wonderful in that you have allowed a relationship to develop. Not just an excuse to describe these two having wild sex but a loving affair. Thank you! |
Reviewed By: Juuhachigou Sedai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2002 15:57 CST
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Yay! I love this story so much! ^_^ its so well written and the actions of Goku and Vejita are quite like a real relationship! IT's so good! |
Reviewed By: Juuhachigou Sedai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2002 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is great! i really really like this so far! |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2002 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS ROCKS! I'm usually not one for Guy/Guy things but this was awesome! Great job! |
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2002 13:50 CST
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i've read this fic on another website and i just finished looking at the pic that goes along with it. 14 chapters, you says? please, i beg you to hurry up with them. this fic is awesome! i really love it! you're an awesome writer and i am so very anxious to read more!^_^ |
Reviewed By: AngelKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2002 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhh!!!!!!! I've fallen in love with this story!!!!!!!!!!!! It's SOOOOOOOOO going into my favorites!!!! But you left it hanging! On a clifhanger!! PLEASE if you don't finish soon I'll go crazy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Skipbillion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2002 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alithiel, this is definately my favorite fanfiction on the website. I can't tell you how many times I have read it since the beginning of June 2001! There is not one thing here I can critize you about, and that's a damn good thing. I hope to see a new chapter sometime soon in the future, and not to mention the art!
=Skipbillion |
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