| "Shadows of the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 139 ] |
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Reviewed By: fusionHA [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2002 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic indeed! I normally stray away from G/V fics (more of a T/G preson myself) but this one got me! The whole buissness about Vegeta's past, beautiful and touching! Perfect. I do wish that yo hadn't teased us quite SO much though. They're together. They're appart. They're together. They're appart......AAAAAHHHHHHHH! I understand that there's going to be a little angst here (as there should be) but around the 6th or 7th time, I started yelling all kinds of foul language at the computer.
I am really looking foward to reading the last chapter! I've spent many hours guled to the screen here and if you don't finish it... well, let's just say that you'd better! ^ ^ I'm looking foward to reading more from you! |
Reviewed By: ysa-chan On: September 24, 2002 06:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... that was awesome! This is the best yaori fic I’ve ever read. The story line was truly unique and you wrote the characters personalities down rightly. It was written beautifully, the way you described their feelings was just brilliant. |
Reviewed By: LostDreams On: September 23, 2002 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this. I don't usually like Goku/Vejita pairings but only because Goku's an idiot. I liked how he wasn't an idiot in this. I loved this latest chapter. Especially how it ended. I can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Yasha'sGirl On: September 22, 2002 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just have to commend you on this fic! I love it! I wasn't really a big fan of Vegeta/Goku stories, but man, you sure know how to change a girl's mind. Keep up the awesome work! I can't wait to read Chapter 17!! |
Reviewed By: Shivvlan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2002 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I just found this fik, okay, didn't /just/ find it cause I read it before I reviewed and I can not believe I just spent 9 hours absorbed in this fik!! MORE! You can't leave it there!! O_O. I'll go insane! MORE!! |
Reviewed By: Nao-chan On: September 17, 2002 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is the greatest fic I have ever read! I can just wait to see the ending! Do us all a favor and never stop writing Alithiel-san 'cause you're the greatest!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2002 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAAAA!!!!!! ANOTHER CHAPTER! VEGETA LOVES GOKU! GAHHHHHHHH!!!!! ^^^^^^________^^^^^^^ YOU HAVE KNOW IDEA HOW HAPPY MEH ISH! |
Reviewed By: Casey Emerilza On: September 14, 2002 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read your story for awhile and I think it is simply one of the best out there. (OK..mabye it is THE best)*grin*
Well..keep up the great chapters. Can't wait..this fic is simply awsome! By the way..I LOVE your artwork as well. |
Reviewed By: gundam200x [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2002 11:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! this chapter was so sweet!! ^_^ I got all tingley at the end I just hope Veijita's not to late :(
I can't wait until the last chapter |
Reviewed By: Dark Serapha On: September 06, 2002 05:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got the rating system mixed up! I'm from Germany and we ussually have the 1 as the best possible mark!
PLEASE FORGIVE ME!
This is of course what I really think of your story! |
Reviewed By: Dark Serapha On: September 06, 2002 05:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffles* I love this story! And finally I have found another chapter!
Alithiel, you can't possibly know how much I envy and worship you at the same time. You have such great talent, you story is so full of little beautiful details, like the iirlanth and the saiyan names for stars.. It'S always my greatest pleasure to reread this story again and again.
Thankyou, thank you, thank you for writing this! |
Reviewed By: Azurite On: September 05, 2002 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! I was sooo hoping you got up another chapter, and I was so afraid you wouldn't continue this magnificent fic anymore... What a loss that would have been... You've made me a gibbering happy heap!
I encourage (not at all selfishly :P OF COURSE ^_~) you to write that last chapter quickly! |
Reviewed By: SilverSun101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2002 18:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
AHH! That was an evil cliffhanger! I;m so loving it though! I hope that you get the next chapter out soon. |
Reviewed By: vin On: September 04, 2002 04:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is the best. you have talent dammit so please keep writing. the emotions of the character are so real and so like them |
Reviewed By: Gaia Faye On: September 03, 2002 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I've never seen this site before. It's quite lovely.. o_o ::cough:: ANYway, I'm sure you've heard this a million time, but... I LOVE THIS STORY! ::squeals mindlessly:: I've been reading it since the beginning when it was posted on the Saiyan Slash group, but I've never commented about it because... Well, I felt weird posting 'cause I hadn't really been there since the beginning of the mailing list. It's all very psychological. lol What am I talking about? O_o I'm here to tell you about the fantastic job you're doing with this story. I sincerely hope you are considering a career in writing, because your talent really knocks me over. I literally squeal with excitement whenever I see that a new chapter has been posted. You have excellent character development and an interesting plot that completely draws me into the story. You fully explore the psychological side of the characters (for example, Vejita's loneliness because his real home is gone and Goku's loneliness because he cannot get Vejita to emerge from his seemingly solid shell of grief and anger) in order to explain why they act the way they do. (I hate it when people say what their characters do, but why, as if there doesn't have to be a reason. =P) All in all, as, once again, I'm sure a million others have told you, this is a GREAT story, and I cannot wait to read the next chapter and epilogue. I hope you write another DBZ fic some time, as I and others are sure to enjoy it! ~los besos, Gaia Faye |
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