| "Shadows of the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 139 ] |
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Reviewed By: Juuhachigou Sedai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2002 00:21 CST
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That father son part was adorable! This is so good! *grins* as soon as we get our computer stuff completely back up i'll be trying to get the last couple chaps of my fic, and you know what? it still doesn't have a title! anyway, I'm so into your fic! can't wait till you get more out! |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2002 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god, i just can't think what to say! That was just......beautiful. I am deeply touched, i feel so different and inspired now. You have reached my soul, thank you soooooooooooo much!! |
Reviewed By: Malychyte On: February 22, 2002 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have an incredible talent! You are so gifted! I just have to say for the sake of all us fans out there, please don't stop writing! |
Reviewed By: Sosoru-san [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2002 19:15 CST
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I'm not really into yaoi fics...as a matter of fact, this is the first one I have read. But, I must say, it is very well-written and quite interesting. |
Reviewed By: EB On: February 19, 2002 22:11 CST
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This is one of the best dragonball love stories I have read. I actually have read and reread it. I want more! I've been a big fan of bulma/vegeta fics (wanting to be in Bulma's shoes) but you have made this love affair so wonderful in that you have allowed a relationship to develop. Not just an excuse to describe these two having wild sex but a loving affair. Thank you! |
Reviewed By: Juuhachigou Sedai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2002 15:57 CST
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Yay! I love this story so much! ^_^ its so well written and the actions of Goku and Vejita are quite like a real relationship! IT's so good! |
Reviewed By: Juuhachigou Sedai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2002 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is great! i really really like this so far! |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2002 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS ROCKS! I'm usually not one for Guy/Guy things but this was awesome! Great job! |
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2002 13:50 CST
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i've read this fic on another website and i just finished looking at the pic that goes along with it. 14 chapters, you says? please, i beg you to hurry up with them. this fic is awesome! i really love it! you're an awesome writer and i am so very anxious to read more!^_^ |
Reviewed By: AngelKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2002 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhh!!!!!!! I've fallen in love with this story!!!!!!!!!!!! It's SOOOOOOOOO going into my favorites!!!! But you left it hanging! On a clifhanger!! PLEASE if you don't finish soon I'll go crazy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Skipbillion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2002 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alithiel, this is definately my favorite fanfiction on the website. I can't tell you how many times I have read it since the beginning of June 2001! There is not one thing here I can critize you about, and that's a damn good thing. I hope to see a new chapter sometime soon in the future, and not to mention the art!
=Skipbillion |
Reviewed By: Juu-Chan On: February 01, 2002 06:36 CST
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I already read your fic on other sites, and I only have one thing to say.... IT ROCKS!!!! The way you portray them is absolutely magnificent and you manage to keep them all in character. Keep up the good work!!! |
Reviewed By: Juuhachigou Sedai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2002 01:12 CDT
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*is trying to find her ablity to make a coharent sentance* Goten...oh god...... |
Reviewed By: chatcat On: April 23, 2002 13:10 CDT
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0_0 Goten.........oh my, i had tears in my eyes reading this, please don't let him die *sobs* |
Reviewed By: SilverSun101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2002 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew!! Kick ass, I love your story. I cannot wait till you get out the next chapter, it's wonderful. ^__^ |
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