| "Shadows of the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 139 ] |
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Reviewed By: the schizophrenic On: October 26, 2002 18:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
quit wasting time. post now. we're waiting impatiently :) |
Reviewed By: hinokumo On: October 25, 2002 07:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*puurrrs in bliss* I have so missed you, Alithiel!! *huggles author and her fic* I LOOOOVE this story!! I'm so excited, I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Banance [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
grrrrrrrr................................ more... I'm sobbing! Wah! *blows her nose* Your storie is too damn emotional! I can't wait til there's more though! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Wipes her nose again, and wipes away the last straggling tears* |
Reviewed By: DBZ chick [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2002 09:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! That chapter was worth the wait! *jumps up and down happily* And I so want to draw a pic of the scene, where Trunks is laying his head on Vegeta's shoulder! *LOL and rubs the back of her head self-conciouslessly, like Goku* Yeah, actually I have this entire story printed out! It's in size 8 font, which is the size I read for all my printed out stories, and I've gone through and cut as much empty space as I could to make it smaller. In all, after this chapter it comes out to just about a full 92 pages! ^_^ I LOVE this story! You are so talented! Anyway, keep up the great work AND FOR KAMI'S SAKE, UPDATE ASAP!!! I can't wait to find out how this story ends! *parents look at her funny for yelling at the computer* ^_^; |
Reviewed By: Callisto Firestarter On: October 17, 2002 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damned Ff.net -kicks the thing- anyway! I love this fic! You should hurry up and get the next chapter up to feed all our reveiwrs needs of V/G YAOI!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^ Oh and do you mind drawing another Vegeta and Goku piccy? and if you do AND when you get the next chapter up PLEASE email me at alaroche@msn.com !! |
Reviewed By: Mizz Bonez On: October 16, 2002 06:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ermm goku and vegeta...?? I didn't read the whole fic hehe...
>)
It's good written, that's for sure. You have talent...
Be safe friend and keep up the good work...
Mizz Bonezz |
Reviewed By: the schizophrenic On: October 14, 2002 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
We're waiting for the next chapter!!! Don't leave us hanging!! |
Reviewed By: Kellendraysia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fanfic, it has to be one of the best that I have read, three days worth of being glued to the screen in what little snatchs of free time that I have should be a good test to that! Your style of writing is beautiful, I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story so please continue. Your illustatrations for it are great! I hope that eventually more images will show up as well as the chapters.
*Anxiously waiting for more*
~Kel |
Reviewed By: Crafty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! What else can I say? This is one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. I keep coming back to reread it. I *love* when Goku and Vegeta use the Playstation. I was laughing out loud when I read it. Please update soon. Pretty please? ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Zara the Pirate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2002 17:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
::huggles::
Ah love yo~u....::purrs contentedly:: |
Reviewed By: Lithrall On: September 29, 2002 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O...I swear..I was crying about through out the entire thing. That was amazing. Nothing short of breathtaking, between sobs, of course. |
Reviewed By: fusionHA [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2002 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic indeed! I normally stray away from G/V fics (more of a T/G preson myself) but this one got me! The whole buissness about Vegeta's past, beautiful and touching! Perfect. I do wish that yo hadn't teased us quite SO much though. They're together. They're appart. They're together. They're appart......AAAAAHHHHHHHH! I understand that there's going to be a little angst here (as there should be) but around the 6th or 7th time, I started yelling all kinds of foul language at the computer.
I am really looking foward to reading the last chapter! I've spent many hours guled to the screen here and if you don't finish it... well, let's just say that you'd better! ^ ^ I'm looking foward to reading more from you! |
Reviewed By: ysa-chan On: September 24, 2002 06:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... that was awesome! This is the best yaori fic I’ve ever read. The story line was truly unique and you wrote the characters personalities down rightly. It was written beautifully, the way you described their feelings was just brilliant. |
Reviewed By: LostDreams On: September 23, 2002 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this. I don't usually like Goku/Vejita pairings but only because Goku's an idiot. I liked how he wasn't an idiot in this. I loved this latest chapter. Especially how it ended. I can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Yasha'sGirl On: September 22, 2002 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just have to commend you on this fic! I love it! I wasn't really a big fan of Vegeta/Goku stories, but man, you sure know how to change a girl's mind. Keep up the awesome work! I can't wait to read Chapter 17!! |
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