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Title: melzilla
Reviewed By: spookeymelichan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 23:41 EDT
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Soooooo I was way behind on reading this fic cause things have been so insane for me this summer so I printed out about 10 chapters took em to my local coffee shop and sat and read for a while. Anyway I was so incredibley thrilled to see you have gotten yasha and kagome together YAY!!!!!!! Anyway I realise life can be a bigger drama then fanfic at times so I totally understand why you haven't updated in a bit but even so I look forward to reading more. Inuyasha and kagome are so cute together. And congrats on having over 500 reviews.
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Title: come back!
Reviewed By: xXDarkLadyXx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 20:02 EDT
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its been a while since you've updated i'm worried! and i miss it and i've even recruited more readers for your story! who now as they read tell me their fav quotes lol. so update soon we're all waiting!
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Reviewed By: stareatamemory On: August 22, 2006 10:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love you... update as soon as possible i am dying for you to delve more into their relationship. and i also want to add that your song choices for this fic have been amazing. your taste in music is just flawless overall. thanks for making me happy with this story :)
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: August 22, 2006 00:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your such a meanie! *pouts* Sorry. I'm just being a brat now. Seriously, please update soon. Your killin' me here! I can't wait to see what happens next. I think it's great that you didn't rush them into things right away though. It's more beleivable and I think it will make the actual lemon that much hotter. :)
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 05:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
An amasing fic! very good descriptions. Normally I don't like songfics or any fic that has songs and lyricses in it, but yours made me change my mind. All the song are so well chosen! Before starting to read a chapter I make sure that all the right songs are ready to be played in the right moment, even if that means having to download them) I really hope that you update soon and that won't be your only Inuyasha fic))
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: Laurell-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 14:43 EDT
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Another great chapter, quite a joy to read as well! I'm glad Inuyasha finally dealt with Kouga properly, he had that coming for awhile now :) I hope in the next chapter we'll find out where the four of them are going! We haven't seen a lot of interaction between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru, especially not in a double date setting so I'm a bit giddy by the thought of it hehe. I'm sure we'll have some interesting conversation, oh and Rin is adorable btw ;) Thanks for the update! (And that really wasn't that long of a wait hehe, I didn't think so at least :D)
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Reviewed By: cd On: August 16, 2006 05:11 EDT
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Lovely. The action scenes could use more spice, but other than that your story was absolutely lovely!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 17:57 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! I'm glad Sesshomaru put the bastard in that place! Now Inu and Kags can be together in peace. Well hope you update soon and keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 23:15 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I would like to start by saying I'm sorry it took me so long to read your story. It is amazing. I found it by chances a while back and I thought I saved the link to look at it later but a fate would have it I didn't and it became lost in the world of spam fics. But I have found it again and I loved every chapter. You really made the characters your own while having them still remain slightly true to there orginial personalities. Oddly I feel slightly sorry for Koga. Not that he didn't deserve is ass kicking but it is sad that his demon nature caused him to loose his "true love". I was a bit mad at Inuyasha for putting unessary distance between him and Kagome. But once again you brilliantly explain why he is doing this thus making it okay. I also wondered how long it was going to take Kagome to figure out why Kikyo called her a replacement. Does it still bother her in the back of her mind or is she truely over it? And poor Yash. I felt so sorry for him when Sango mad the rest of the girls torture him. *laughs* " Kagome had told someone about their kiss. Someone... evil. Someone that was probably parading around backstage in her red fishnets, cackling merrily at his misfortune." A lot of funny things happened in this story (to the point where I had to cover my face and read, laugh, read, chuckle hard, calm down, and read again!) but I got a good cackle out of this one! *laughs again* "Someone... evil"! Usually I would consider Sango a bit too forward but you make it work in your story so don't change a thing. I do wonder what there is left to write about in this story. Koga and Kikyo have been dealt with but you are the author. Don't listen to me and stop. Do what you have planned. I also like the background music you give at the beginings. The whole band thing in fan fics is usually an early sign of a plotless story but I admire the way you have weaved it into your story. Not the main focus but definitly an important part. Well I could continue gushing but I have an update to write myself since my sprained thumb is now back in action. Well...right after I add this to my favorites...
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 18:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! I absolutely ADORE this story. I am so freaking attached to the characters already. Everything about it is fantastic. The character development and back stories are excellent, the dialogue is great (of which I am usually picky and I'm loving this), the plot development is also perfect. Yes, the torture of them getting together was exquisite, BUT after so many chapters of anticipation that first lime was pretty damn worth the wait. Besides, I think the plot calls for time. You have a great story line and there's no need to rush it and make it cheap and you've done a perfect job so far. The friendships are sweet and you've captured everyone so well. Now I just get to freak out about what hellacious situation is going to occur when Kikyo finally decides to get her ass back in everyone's life. Turmoil is what I suspect, lol. Ok, now I'm rambling, but like I said, I adore this story and you've had me hooked from the first chapter and it has only grown more intriguing. Thanks so much for your time spent on this and I greedily await your next update!!
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 15:30 EDT
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Updates! I am simply in love with this story at the moment. Three cheers fo "Savvy" and it's wonderful plot, great characters, and hot ass limes that (I hope) will turn into lemons. Anyways, great update and I wish you luck and prosperity.
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Title: chap.26
Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 01:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH! You updated! I thought I'm gna die... tsk tsk. Anyways, me like this chap! Laughs... really really really REALLY AWESOMEEEEE ... n sweet.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Does_Me (not logged in, sorry) On: August 09, 2006 16:21 EDT
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OMG!....Can you imagine my mouth droping open? Cause it is! Even my tounge is rolled out!!! LoL! Maybe a little drool too. Ruins the keyboard however. heheh. That shower was STEEEAAMMMY! Whew. I had to take one just to cool down. At first I thought that you would do the smut action right in the shower, which puzzled me. Since you say Kagome is a virgin Im sure Yash would make it special. Getting your fuck on in the shower is for after the first time. (::smirk::) Another shocked-out-of-my-pants was that Kagome was calm to get in her birthday suit Inu, with no explanation and jump into it. They zipped off the clothes and got commando, so very casual that I didn't expect such forwardness. I think it was because I got the impression that the characters were caring and in love but shy at doing something bold. But its better this way. Its a good sign that they are getting more comfortable and open. I say it was the best thing to do!!!! To have that shower scene that showed love, emmotion and devotion between the two without the sex made it awe inspiring. They just held eachother close and told their love. You really dug into it and Im SO SO happy for you! Know now that you got one HUGE HENTAI uber pleased!!!! I officially can't hardly wait for the real sex-bouncing chapter to be up! For me, if you could add a tinge of Yasha-tounge-ring in it, I would be extatic!!!! And hey, Koga's getting his ass flown to Antartica. Brrrr. Keep your legs warm Koga, can't wear the wolf skin skirt anymore. Now if only you had sailed kikyou there too. She wouldn't be able to get drugs and that would be a benifit.......well one of the benifits on my mind. Lol! Shess and Rin are doing dandy too! Hope they arn't planning to bang and break anything. Geez its Kag's place afterall. I'm sure she wouldn't be thrilled. BUT who is she to know. She herself is butt-naked with THE 'InuYasha'!!!!! I would be numd from my head to the place between my legs, lol! It was preety cute that Rin was scrared too but believed in what Shess had said. Awww! Post again when you can! Love the song 'Broken', its a fav of mine! Ohhh, and I haven't forgotten about the secret surprise Yasha has in store! What the hell is it???? On the edge of my love seat here! Take care bitterness! Chat later? ^_^ Cioa bella.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 03:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EWWWW! There gonna do it in Kagomes apartment?!? LOL. Anyway good luck to Kouga, NOT!
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Reviewed By: InusBasket [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 22:39 EDT
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Awesome keep up the gppd work!!
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