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Title: Ch 1 - 26
Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: August 08, 2006 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! This is actually my 3rd review (and it is much shorter.) The first two would not go through. The story is great. I noticed there was no Shippo (understandable since most of the story takes place around or in a strip bar.) I do not remember the Shikon jewel appearing as of yet (though I have not really missed it.) Just curious, how many chapters are you shooting for? Again, I am really enjoying the story. Cynbad146
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 19:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this chapter. You crack me up by having Sesshoumaru send Kouga to Antarctica that was just too funny. Maybe Sesshoumaru could send Kikyou there too (LOL) Anyways keep up the great work. can't want till the next chapter.
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Title: Chapter 26
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 17:23 EDT
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I know you said you weren't happy with this chapter but I thought it was a nice way to wrap up Kouga's incessant interference. Sesshoumaru was funny, sending Kouga to Antarctica in secret, lol. The shower scene was a nice tough and I liked the KagsxInu interaction. ^^ I could just picture Inu and Sess staking out Kouga on that rooftop and you kept them in character so well. The fighting scene was good between Inu and Kouga seeing as how Inu was doing hsi best to go easy on him for Kag's sake. I look forward to the next chapter! :)
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Reviewed By: Photographing Poetry [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2006 05:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm guilty to say I read all of this in one day! I could barely tear myself away to take a shower! Great job on the personality of the characters. Hmm, Inuyasha with a tongue piercing? Would he do something like that? Maybe... . At least he doesn't smoke- it'd kill his senses. Haha. Uhm, the whole Kagome-the-virgin thing put me off, however, because it's done in every story... but it can't be helped, I suppose. I'll be looking forward to your next update- something tells me Kouga's getting his ass whooped.
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Title: Absolutely wonderful
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 04:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing! For your first Inuyasha AU fanfic I am very impressed. ^^ You did a great job creating the modern setting and world they all live in while still keeping the magic from the feudal era. I love how, using characterization so well, you have managed to make all of the characters so deep and with such interestings pasts. It's refreshing to read an Inuyasha fanfic that has the youkai world completely concealed making it liek a secret organization. I can only wonder what would happen to Kikyou if she started telling people. That's another thign that interested me about the you kai world, we learn it as Kagome does. It's a very nice touch and keeps the intrigue of your readers. Not to mention the excellent way you write the personalities of Inuyasha and Kagome. I have to say, it was truly a pleasure watching them struggle with their issues to the point where they are now just starting out a new relationship. Now that the focus is more on Kags I wonder what Inu has in store for Kouga in the near future, lol. On a slightly more perverted note, I hope Kags gives Inu oral someday simply b/c it seems from your story that it'd be a pretty deep gesture to Inuyasha. At least before they have actual intercourse. JUst my opinion, although I'd LOVE to see how the Inuyasha in your story reacts to it! ;) Your story is very creative and original and I found it refreshing again when you talked about youkai mating and how it was different for each sub-species of youkai when concerning their ritual. You do an excellent job with the lemons by the way! :) I only hope that you write many more before the story is over! hehe As you can tell I enjoyed being immersed in your story very much and I do hope you continue writing it and continue to be inspired to keep writing. Hmmm, as for suggestions to improve your story, there were only minor grammatical errors I could find. Other than that I felt it flowed very well. I suggest trying to not skip too much time in the story in between chapters. It leaves us wondering what happened in that time since the last chapter. Other than that I can't think of anything which just goes to show how good your story is. Your chapter length is perfect and all I could ask for would be longer chapters. ;) Keep up the excellent work and I hope to read more soon!
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Reviewed By: Saori Kasamatsu On: August 02, 2006 03:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...my...god!! This is the BEST fanfic I've ever read! I just started reading it today and couldn't stop! Your an amazing writer, I LOVE YOU! ^.^ Thanks sooo much for this amazingly awesome story, pleaseeeeee update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Krystine On: August 01, 2006 01:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I am always left impressed by your marvelous writing abilities! I have to say that their little rump was very interesting...I hope to see many more! *chuckles* I have read sooo many fanfics and I've never been hooked on them till I read yours...and that's the truth. Finally!!! Inuyasha has shown the courage to be with Kagome! Koga is such a fag, though hot, but still a fag...ugh. I liked this chapter...a million Kudos for you!!! ^_^ Hmmm...I have a very big idea for a chapter if you'd like to hear it. Email me at kryshana@verizon.net if you'd like. It involves the strip joint and valentines day together...I'm sure you'll find it fascinating. Hehe. Let me know.... Keep up the great work!
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Title: *bows down*
Reviewed By: Bri-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 22:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You never cease to suprize me! I thought forshure that Inu Yasha would go further than that. But that's one of the reasons why i like you soo much, originality. And many Kudos for putting a Nine Inch Nails song in there (they are my favorite band). Wow, i almost forgot, i knew i didn't like Jonathan from the begining. can't wait for chapter 26^^.
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: July 31, 2006 12:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter! I just love this story. Kouga's sudden appearance was somewhat of a surprise. I thought that he would have more of his minnions come after her before he made an appearance. But now that Sess and Inu are both going after him, I don't think that he will stand much of a chance. Inu's behavior toward Kagome is truly sweet. Doting. That isn't a word that you hear often today, but it is a great work and an even greater feeling. While New York is strange, Kagome is happy. I hope things stay that way. One of the best lines in this chapter was Dog, bitch, dog. It just cracked me up for some reason. I usually read during lunch at work. I cracked up at that line and then had to explain it to the nurses that were sitting and giggling at me. (but at least I wasn't singing that song:) ) Last but definately not least, I loved the citrus content in this chapter. Inu wants to please Kagome so much, but it seems that he is still nervous about that final comittment of sex or nervous about how Kagome will react. I look forward to more chapters! Thanks so much for writing for us all. It's a treat. Caitriona
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Title: Savvy
Reviewed By: kittenplush66 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 22:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rated your story the way I have, because its the best story I've ever read!I love it, keep writing chapters when you can.I look forward to it!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 03:33 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, can't Koga take the hint that Kags doesn't wast him?! But thank god that Inuyasha is there to save the day and Kilala too. So I hope you update soon. And keep it up.
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 00:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
I love it I hope you update soon YOU ROCK
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Reviewed By: CD On: July 28, 2006 13:19 EDT
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Hello again! I'm so glad you updated again! That was wonderful...and your story is so addicting to read! I am so in love with the way you've created their relationship, it's ridiculous! I feel I'm becoming obsessed...hehe. Anyways, keep up the awesome work...see, I have to criticism for this work because I can't seem to stop myself from gushing about how freakin sweet it is!! Thank you for being a writer! coarse dareei
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Reviewed By: Inu_Does_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 23:27 EDT
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Ohhhh! I just squirm with desire when you add your personal flavour of wonderful Inu/Kag smuttness to the plate...errr chapter! And Yasha touching himslef?! God, made him a shrine!!!! For sure! Just got to love Yash banging Kags ne? Lol! Its the hentai blood in me talking. You understand right bitterness-girl? (::smirk::) Besides the IY and Kaggie loving, another big sucsess to for another chap! Well written! I like mine done that way, Lol! Koga is such a nasty buggar and johnathan is now on my suspicion list. I would have not have thought of him of more than a human out for Kagomes heart. Good thing for having InuYasha. What a man, what a sexy hound! And a MEOW for Kirara here! She can kick some Koga ass for breakfast. heheh. Wish ya luck on next eppi! May you have no baka-blockness! ^_^ cioa!
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Reviewed By: Geany 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 19:16 EDT
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i ove your fic its so good.update soon please.
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