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Reviewed By: Kags521 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2009 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a really good fanfic... I never read any Inuyasha/YuYu Hakusho fanfic but now I'm about to....great fanfic but yu still caught me off guard with a ending....it juss ended so suddenly....but it wuz yur first and I like it! Good luck!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2009 15:36 CST
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this was a good story, i do wish you would write an epilouge or sequel where kagome meets inuyasha, shippo, sesshomaru, jinji, kouga, ect in modern times.
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 17:40 CDT
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Ohhhh, you changed the wave to flame... i was gonna say something but I wasn't sure if he had an attack named that... didn't want to risk sounding like a jakcass...lol, well, beybey... again...lol
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Reviewed By: alwayshiei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 17:01 CDT
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Thank you so much for pointing my error out DarknessChild! I knew something was wrong with what I called his attack, but, I couldn't figure it out!! Also, thank you for reviewing on the other site. And, I know the action scene was pretty dumb, but, action's never been my thing. Never-The-Less, thanks for the pointers.
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Reviewed By: darknesschild [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 12:11 CDT
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I think you could have done much better on that fighting sene with Hiei. Also Hiei's attack is called 'Dragon Of Drakness Flame,' Not 'Dragon Of Darkness Wave'. ^^; Sorry, but i felt a need to point that out. Also I'd just found your stories on FF.net, so I'll be reviewing there as well, as DarkendKagome. ^^; Keep up the great work with your other stories and update soon, onegai!
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 23:25 CDT
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! That was a very tasteful ending! So sweet! I [Kagome's] speech, "I loved you we met"... when they held hands, when we ate at the chinese place...twice...lol. That was so NICE! I'm sad though, it's over... I guess all good things must come to an end, and this was a VERY good thing...lol. Well, I hope to see more soon! lol BeyBey... [not misspelled]lol
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Title: Alright
Reviewed By: Suzki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories i was wondering if you can email me and we be computer friends u know if u want to email me at micanochi@yahho.com peace out!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 17:50 CDT
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Hehe! Leave it to Yuske to make Hiei admit his feelings! This is such a cool story! Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read more. Ja ne! ~.^ Michiru
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 19:32 CDT
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awwwww, that was cute, i can't believe the odds that they would be at the same place that hiei n kags were... wasn't that convinient?! lol I wonder where he's dragging kagome too, she is after al the victim of circumstance. . . lol, but probably for the better. . .lol
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 20:53 CDT
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Oh, she died, thaz so sad, but what happened to Miroku and how did she meet Kuronue? Awww, one more thing, was her grave on the side of the road? Just hoping you could clarify that, update soon please!
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 21:35 CDT
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Hes starting to get all mushy-ushy! IZ SO CUTIE-PUTTY! lol, wut if kagome and hiei just left the park wanting to let kurama an d yukina be alone?! Dat would be funny!lol
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 11:51 CDT
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i think its fine the way it is because they need to get together. And personally Im not really good with action myself. I liked it. They're so coniving trying to get them all together and what not. thanxie poo for updating. And I think I know how you feel about the length. My Time Traveling screws everything up story, I need to end its going onto like 32 chapters! its way too long!!! lol, but i think my other ones are gonna be not as long... lol... update soon, bye!
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Nurse Witch [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story.
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 14:07 CDT
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Awwwwwwww, I feel special... I made a diffrence...lmao...I'm gonna cry, I feel so giddy...lolBut seriously, I would like to tank God for this great honor..SIKE! Tankie poo, I really like this story, n I c how u'ze is gettin Yukina n Kurama to get Kagome and Hiei together...wouldn't it just be funn if it back fired n then Yukina n Kurama got hooked up instead of Kagome n Hiei...Haa dat was a hoot...lmao... P.S. don't be alarmed, I'm just really hyper...lol
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 21:22 CDT
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U-Pee-Dee- A-Tea-Eee....dats wut I said n u can't stop me, u should do it cuz I said n cuz ure story is da best
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