| "Intertwined Permanently" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: deathsangel4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 16:03 CST
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Goos story, and you really do have to update soon. I can't wait until the next chapter comes out. ~DA
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 10:03 CST
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im sorry but the oocness of shippo, sango, inu, etc is jus unbelievable.
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 15:03 CST
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That was pretty good, please do update soon! WOOOO!
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update!
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Reviewed By: SilentPredator [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
You lost me the moment every character on the show turned into a bunch of heartless OOC shell's of their former selves. I can't even tell if I'm supposed to take the opening of this story seriously or not.
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Reviewed By: Anonymousfanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 16:32 CST
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Please update real soon. Sorry if you have already answered this question. Why was it important to Koenma that Kagome was saved? What will happen to ex-friends of Kagome's? Will Inuyasha and the group ever knwo the real truth about Kikyo? Wonder when that will sink in to Hiei about him and Kagome being interwind till death to them apart? Since all he seem to care about was getting his mission over with. please update right away. This is really great.
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Reviewed By: Chezlesea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 11:34 CST
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... Can I stab Sango, Miroku, Inuyasha, Shippou and Kikyou? Please? They just make me wanna... IT'S SO DAMN TEMPTING! Anyway, lurved the chap, update ASAP!
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Reviewed By: sesshomaru babe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 13:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so cool please try to update as soon as you can and try to put it all in past refferences like :"'i wish he was here' kagome tought." i love the story and i hope you finish it.
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Title: Awwwww
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 11:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kagome. Why would Kagome's 'friends' want Kagome dead for? your going to tell us, right? plz update soon! this better be a Hiei/Kagome fic!! I mean it!! Update, quickly!
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 09:46 CST
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WoOOOOOO! I love the pairin!
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Reviewed By: Anonymousfanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 02:08 CST
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Poor Kagome. What happened to Miroku, Sango, and Shippo for wanting Kagome dead? What about Kaede? Does she want Kagome dead as well? Will Sesshomaru be in this and if so, will he be like a protective brother fro Kagome or be like the rest of her friends and go against her? Wonder why it was so important for Koenma to send Hiei to save her? If you already explained all these in the chapters sorry. Wonder how the others Spirit Detectives will react when they find out that Koenma send Hiei on a mission without telling them about it. How they will react when they meet Kagome and found out about what her so called friends tried to do. Hiei/Kagome, Hiei/Kagome/Kurama, or Kurama/Kagome Please update, real, real, real soon. This is really, really great start. Cant' wait to find out what happens next.
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Reviewed By: deathsangel4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 22:59 CST
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Love the story, please write longer chapters if you can though.
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! ^_^ LOVE THE STORY SO FAR!!! but could u make the chapters longer!!! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Vermilion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 12:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whee! You updated, ja rock outloud! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Vermilion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 12:03 CST
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Ah! I like it! Please continue! ^__^
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