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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 21:35 CDT
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Hes starting to get all mushy-ushy! IZ SO CUTIE-PUTTY! lol, wut if kagome and hiei just left the park wanting to let kurama an d yukina be alone?! Dat would be funny!lol
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 11:51 CDT
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i think its fine the way it is because they need to get together. And personally Im not really good with action myself. I liked it. They're so coniving trying to get them all together and what not. thanxie poo for updating. And I think I know how you feel about the length. My Time Traveling screws everything up story, I need to end its going onto like 32 chapters! its way too long!!! lol, but i think my other ones are gonna be not as long... lol... update soon, bye!
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Reviewed By: Nurse Witch [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story.
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 14:07 CDT
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Awwwwwwww, I feel special... I made a diffrence...lmao...I'm gonna cry, I feel so giddy...lolBut seriously, I would like to tank God for this great honor..SIKE! Tankie poo, I really like this story, n I c how u'ze is gettin Yukina n Kurama to get Kagome and Hiei together...wouldn't it just be funn if it back fired n then Yukina n Kurama got hooked up instead of Kagome n Hiei...Haa dat was a hoot...lmao... P.S. don't be alarmed, I'm just really hyper...lol
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 21:22 CDT
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U-Pee-Dee- A-Tea-Eee....dats wut I said n u can't stop me, u should do it cuz I said n cuz ure story is da best
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Reviewed By: alwayshiei [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 21:33 CST
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Thanks everyone for your dearly valued reviews! I'd like to just say that Ookami-san is right, in what she wrote. I did have a feeling that this story was rushed, and I apologize for my doing so. I will, at least try to slow it down a bit, and make the story more understandable. This is my first story and I realize its lack in the written area, and I will put effort into fixing that. At any rate, thank you Ookami-san, for writing a review stating it to be like so, which has made me actually pay attention to that point.Also, currently, I basically update once every weekend, in case anyone's wondering. Please, if you have a complaint, or find something to be unsatisfactory about this story, then write a review telling me so, and I will try to fix it. Thank you for time, Alwayshiei
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 09:10 CST
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well, I'd have to say take your time writing this, it seems as if you rushed through it, elaborate more, i don't see where the bit with hiei liking kagome came from, there was too little interaction for me to go 'finnaly!' or 'yeha i can see that.' but anywho, just a friendly comment, please though, put a little more effort and time into your story, show the reader what you see, don't expect them to automatically know. although i think that thats something that take a long time to pass, i've yet to get good. but i hardly know the first thing about writing, Anyways, - from yours sincerly and with all due respect, Ookami san the animelover
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Reviewed By: sesskags_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 17:54 CST
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That really sucks for Kagome! I guess Kagome's three friends aren't that dumb as they seems, that sucks! I wonder if Hiei will be jealous of what Eri, Ayumi and Yuka are planning ... ... ... so ... update ... damnit... ...
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Reviewed By: alwayshiei [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 10:58 CST
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I forgot to write my disclaimer in the story so here it is:I do not own Inuyasha, nor do I own Yu Yu Hakusho. Thank you for your time! Seeya!-Alwayshiei
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Title: Intertwined Permanently
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 07:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That really sucks for Kagome! I guess Kagome's three friends aren't that dumb as they seems, that sucks! I wonder if Hiei will be jealous of what Eri, Ayumi and Yuka are planning ... ...
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Title: ...............
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 11:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it me or is Inu-Yasha and his companions stupid? I mean, come on, they choose Kikyo over Kagome! What's the Hell is wrong with their brain?! ~PureMiko_Kagome69ner~
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Title: Continue
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 11:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! Do continue! Is it because kagome's annoying friends were in the restaurant?? or works in it??
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 18:40 CST
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I likeit but this is the part where things usually get cheesy...s'ight
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Title: YES
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 07:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Do continue!
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Reviewed By: Darkness Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 03:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update Please and when you mentioned the Sims Bustin' Out I got REALLY interested!!I have that game and I need to fullfill the Jock job and I'm done with the whole game and let me tell you a strange coincidence(sp)I made an ugly guy and ALSO named him Kuwabaka!!^_^Well update soon please!!!
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