| "Bane of Existence/Love of A Lifetime" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lily_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2009 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know why you're so worried about your stories. They're so fresh, even with the fact that the pairings are, admittedly, rather commonplace. I think it's the new spin you put on the ideas of Kagome meeting the YYH gang. Needless to say you've caught my attention quite easily, and I'm known to be notoriously picky about the fics I read, especially x-overs. If you're still looking for someone to look over your fics I'd be more than happy to. I'm already a beta reader for someone on ff.net and I have a lot of free time on my hands, so I'd be able to devote plenty of attention to editing or just coming up with suggestions. *sighs* Sadly, I seem to be quite good at raising plot bunnies.XD I could always let you have some, of course. Feel free to contact me if you want.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 14:55 CST
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i think that this is a good story as it is, please update it soon
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 21:42 CDT
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this is a great story so far please continue it.
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 21:52 CDT
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PERFECT! YOU ARE BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!!!! I love this fic you need to pdate immediatley!
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so good please please update
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Reviewed By: Hieis_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 01:58 CST
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A man, did you have to stop there it was getting very good
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Reviewed By: Hopelessly Hopefull [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 06:14 CST
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this story is simply amazing. there are so many qualities in here ranging from humor to tragedy. you have wonderfully captured their characters and i hope that you continue soon. much love always hope xxx
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still simply fantastic! Just read it again, and I am SO anxious for an update! I really enjoy your writing, and I am a true FAN. This story is the perfect example of how to pull off a threesome (or is it a foursome? ha!) that works. Love the humorous moments, too. I'm really looking forward to the coming confrontation with Inu, (Though i hope he lives to regret it!), and to the guys seeing her in battle to get a different type of respect for her abilitites. And of course, let us not forget the upcoming breaking of the seal on her powers and the mating! (Yay!) It's been a while since you've updated, and I hope you get a chance to do so soon. This is just so good!
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter. Update again soon. Can't wait to read Inuyasha explaination of what he did to Kagome and how Sango and Mirkou take it.
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Reviewed By: kizuna4me [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please update. this is such a great story and i love the *ahem* "pairing." I love finding stories with threes!!! anyways, update update update!!! i will give you a cookie...
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Reviewed By: lcar101 On: August 22, 2006 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more why did you stop more,
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 16:55 CDT
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Well, while I'm happy Yusuke and Kurama are going to share Kagome, I am pretty sure, that the decision, who'd be her first man, Yusuke, Youko or Minamino Shuichi is up to Kagome herself and not for them. Mating? Allright, it's a demon's thing and who'd be her first and who - second "official" mate they could work out between themselves, but to choose for Kagome her first sexual partner? It's plain wrong!
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Title: Update!
Reviewed By: Inubecca123 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update! I luv this story, its awesome that there will be a Kagome/Youko/Yusuke Pairing so please update! I begging you with all my heart!!!
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
P. S. Suppose, Kurama is the one she should marry in the human society - his family definitely would be happy! For Yusuke's mother, on the other hand, his matrimonial status wouldn't mean that much (if she even noticed her son married)
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 15:10 CDT
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I saw your story around since the day you've started to post it here and now I can only wonder, what the hell took me so long to read it! This is one of the rearest stories, where a threesome looks quite natural and workable, not forsed for a plot sake. It seems like you've decided to edit the fic? I just hope you'll update soon as well. Cheers!^_^
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