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Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2006 14:38 EST
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oooooh I hate that Yukio!! I'm glad Kagome found it in herself to fight back and knee him in the groin, that jerk! I was surprised that Inuyasha told Kagome to go to the bus stop alone (he's so protective). I bet he won't be doing that again! Great job! Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 19:22 EST
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What a good way to get her naked and them talking. It's good to get those things out in the open... and they were bothering her so it's a relief to her to know that she'll always be beautiful to him (just like he will be to her). Lovely!
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Title: Another great chap!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 21:15 EST
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Unfortunately Kags is going through some stuff, but at least she's back with her second family. They'll make sure she's ok. So Kikyo's gone, eh? Can't say i'm disappointed....
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Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 18:54 EST
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Yeah.. I wonder who will purify the Shikon no Tama now! Maybe they can brink Kikyou back again ..hehe yeah right! She'd be REALLY ticked off then! XD Shippou asked if Tama was hanyou!! XDDDD Aw he's so cute! Inuyasha's reaction would have been priceless! The look on his face.... Anyhow, I can't say I'm not disappointed that Kagome's miko powers are gone, but it does make for more suspense in the end. Great job, Xak!
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Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 00:08 EST
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That was cute when Inuyasha overheard the phone conversation! And Kagome didn't seem to react at all to the "zainin incident"... which was kind of fun in itself. If Kagome's friends have heard that she had a baby, I wonder if Yukio will know... and if he'll want to stake his claim on the child. He probably won't, but you never know! Great chapter, as always!
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Title: Great chap as always!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: January 03, 2006 19:45 EST
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I'm glad kagome wasn't mad about the whole carving thing. Served the little fucker right. Now we get to see kagome get her life back.
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Title: Sweet!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: December 23, 2005 07:48 EST
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That was so lovely. I'm very proud of InuYasha. With all he's been through, he just showed up millions of men in Kagome's own time. Not many guys would step up the way he did. Now, they just have to settle on an era.
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Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 00:52 EST
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I'm so glad Kag's okay! That was a very sweet chapter. They are so right for one another! It's very true that life would be terribly difficult for Kagome and Inuyasha if neither of them have a proper education in Kagome's time, but it wouldn't be impossible for Kagome to return to her schooling if Souta and her mom were to help out with watching Tama. It'll be interesting to see where you take the story from here!
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Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 13:24 EST
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OMG I thought that would happen! Damn that Yukio! Will you be elaborating on exactly how Kagome disappeared into thin air? She was scooped up by slave traders in the middle of a battle?? I know this chapter had a few more urgent issues that took precedent ... but I'm very curious! POOR KAGOME! My heart goes out to her. It just doesn't seem to stop. The part with Souta was a really effective way to survey the scene and still keep it on a personal level, and Souta needed some attention too! Poor little guy has to see his sister mistreated like that it must be really tough for him. Kagome will probably want to keep the child too - that will be interesting considering the quest for the shards and all. Great job on this story! I wait with bated breath for the chapter updates! ^__^
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Title: Nice Souta Edition
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: December 19, 2005 03:25 EST
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I liked the way you did this one. Letting us see it from poor Souta's POV. Preggo heh? I knew that was coming. Interesting time jump too. So when do we find out what happened to her?
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Title: Highly Enjoyable
Reviewed By: conchita [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 02:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read what you have so far and it is a very interesting story. I hope you let us know what happened to Kagome that she made it into the hands of slave traders but even if you don't the story is still a good read. Good luck on future chaps.
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Reviewed By: Inu4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 15:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read all of the posted chapters in one sitting..this is an excellently written story with a well thought and developed plot-line. I eagerly await your update!
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Reviewed By: steelfether11 On: December 17, 2005 03:55 EST
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moremoremoremore!!!!!!!! please!!!!!!!
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Title: Gasp! So short!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: December 17, 2005 01:24 EST
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But where's Ka-go-me? Xakana!!!!!! Tell us! Tell us! ^_^
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Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 00:36 EST
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Ack so short! Such frustration! Now the mystery begins... Is Kagome her own ancestor or something? Is there an anomaly in the Space/Time Continuum? Who knows? Only Xakana does! The rest of us puny mortals will just have to wait for the next installment.
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