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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 09:47 CST
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I don't know how you can be such a sadist writing this, but it is good. Izayoi being a totally negligent bitch, and a father who's insane, makes sense to make Inuyasha the way he is with both his parents still alive. Anyway, I like this story, despite the abuse, a-hole Yash, naive as hell Kagome (always was, always will), and abandoning Sesshomaru. Of course, 2 years into the story, and you haven't even really started, you say, where are you going form here? Scarface-ville, or something near realistic? It is a valid question, afterall. Anyway, like I said, the torture, emotional, physical, and the amnesia, realistic, and well written. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. The ending almost made me cry!! Update soon please cause I can't wait for more. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 14:02 CST
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Oh! Such a good chapter! Inuyasha is so very vell dne even if a bit OOC, but he's still very, VERY well thought through) Keep it on, and update soon!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 17:21 CDT
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Great chapter! I wonder what's up with Shippo? I can't wait for the club scene! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 12:17 CDT
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This is such a great story! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Update soon please!!!
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Reviewed By: nana o. On: October 17, 2006 04:06 CDT
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i can't wait for the next chapter, update soon please
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was looking for this story I read the first couple of chapters and stop waiting for the update but forgot the name. Then I read the summary and was really glad I found it again (and yes I wrote it down so I won't forget it again...thanks mom ;) Anyways great story and love this chapter ....I love how Kagome stood up for herself with Inuyasha and figuring out the sweet and innocent was not going to get Inuyasha's attention. I also love the verbal sparring (sp?) with Sango that was funny. I can't wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 01:48 CDT
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I'm REALLY enjoing it! you're a great writer)) Though I wish you updated oftener.. But still great story, and I't really amazing how the chars are so in caracter! (does that sound right?? lol) Anyway, keep it on)
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz update want to read more and for that to happen you need to do some serious updates for your stories k. plz
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Title: ?
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you going to put Sesshomaru back into the story. I just kinda wondering what really happen to him. will he come back for Inuyasha? plz update
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Title: weird
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude you have to update so gotta know whats going to happen. need to know what happen at the party. plz update update update and soon.
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Reviewed By: Tai-san On: September 05, 2006 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the new chapter. Awesome angst. can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amasing story! i really really like it! and i hope you update soon)
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 04:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoing this! I hope you update soon) though you might wanna consider a beta-reader since you have many spelling and grammar mistakes.. It's really a shame that such a good story is spoiled with such things! Other than that great fic! Keep it going))
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