| "And The Sky Mourns" Reviews/Comments [ 127 ] |
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Reviewed By: asha112 On: December 21, 2005 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love all the details i hope u keep doing that with the rest of ur chapters.PLZ! update soon
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Reviewed By: jazzrocks On: December 20, 2005 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I believe that this is the best Naruto fan fiction crossover that I have ever read on this site. Most of the fanfictions here are centered around Kagome and Sasuke in some impossible scenerio and a whole lot of OOC. But, you actually centered this around Naruto (finally!) and how it must have been to grow up hated. I believe that Naruto's growing up would be like this and I liked how you made Naruto smarter and stronger than most fanfictions. I nearly cried at the end, but, I'm too sick to do it! Self-sacraficing his life for his team mates' life sounds so like him! And the part when you introduce Kyuubi...PURE GENIUS! Although, I really hate that 'believe it' phrase in the American Anime (is it just me, or is the American Naruto abusing it just a TAD?) and I was really happy when you used it only twice. Yay! I am MOST curious on how you are going to introduce the crossover in this story! I know that Naruto is dead...so how would Kagome and her gang be introduced? Oooh, I can't WAIT! And if you churn out another 11 page chapter, I will literally fall off my chair and run around my house screaming happily!!! I love reading long chapters because it tells me that the author spent a lot of time and care creating everything!! But, PLEASE, take time on the Kagome/Naruto relationship! Don't make them fall in love at first (well, Naruto can have SOME lust for her, hehe!), stretch it out...I'm assuming that Kagome is angsty as well. Am I right? Well, I'm rambling, I know...Great f |
Reviewed By: Chantel On: December 18, 2005 21:38 CST
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k, MKIKO. guess wut. I read the fucking story. and i was soooo bored. happy now, i read it and to tell you the truth im usually quite sensitive but holy crap i didnt cry i just blankly stared at the computer
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Reviewed By: InuKaShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
where does InuYasha come into this? please update
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Reviewed By: Fan person-thingy On: December 18, 2005 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Next Chappy! Next Chappy! I love this, and I don't think that constructive criticism is even warranted. Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: jytjjy On: December 16, 2005 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more please its a good story
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Reviewed By: Kiros_angel (not logged in) On: December 16, 2005 11:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very sad. :( Please continue soon!
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Reviewed By: Mrs cake On: December 16, 2005 00:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE please! I love naruto/kagome fanfics there really ain't enough of em' and most of them really suck but i do like your fanfic so Pleaseeeeeeeee update!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mrs cake On: December 16, 2005 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You rock! PLEASE write soon ( mumbles something to self ) *laughs nervously* anyways PLEASE update and i'll...i'll..give you a..a..a cookie ya thats it!
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Reviewed By: Mkiko_Yoru (not signed in) On: December 15, 2005 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best!!!!!!! i just read all of the reviews and i gotta say that, that chantel person who didn't even read your fic is a bitch! this is really awesome love the description. i was acttaully crying in this fic cause its so sad! please please please update! i got sick and stayed home from school and i decided "hey why not read some xovers fics!" this one is much better than the regular yu yu hakusho and inuyasha fics. But i just gotta say you have talent. "being able to devote yourself to something is a talent." - Alphonse Elric (fma) i'd say you should live by these words cause they're so true. please update!
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Reviewed By: Chantel On: December 13, 2005 18:31 CST
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k i dont even need to read your story. Many people look at your type of summary and go, NO WAY, its a waste of my time. And believe me if naruto and kagome were together it would be a catastrophe. I fucking hate kagome and kikyo rox. i talked to my friends about it and some of them even like kagome but they thought the pairing was wack. no means of offense but man thats a little to weird
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Reviewed By: injured_angel17 On: December 12, 2005 01:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg its so sad u have to write another chappie please an i luv u more than yesterday lol jk its so sad dont let it end their please
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Leo_the_Lionus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 14:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...absolutly wow. I was crying so hard towards the end that I had to stop to collect myself. This is truely sn amazing piece of work and I really can't wait to see how it continues. My only complaint is the way you centered the writing. I can understand for the lyrics but the rest made it a little difficult to read. At least for me. As for grammar and spelling well I really couldn't notice anything through my tears. Maybe later I will go back through it for the little details but I know if I read it again right now I will just break down. Again amazing job and please continue. I can't wait for the next part! If you want to chat sometime feel free to e-mail me leo_the_lionus@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 12:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update ASAP!!!! LOVE THE STORY!!! 1 OF THE BEST SO FAR!!!
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Reviewed By: InuDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 19:59 CST
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NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU KILLED NARUTO!!! I hope more chaps are coming soon!!!! InuDragon
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