"And The Sky Mourns" Reviews/Comments [ 127 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mrs cake On: December 16, 2005 00:07 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: UPDATE please! I love naruto/kagome fanfics there really ain't enough of em' and most of them really suck but i do like your fanfic so Pleaseeeeeeeee update!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mrs cake On: December 16, 2005 00:04 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You rock! PLEASE write soon ( mumbles something to self ) *laughs nervously* anyways PLEASE update and i'll...i'll..give you a..a..a cookie ya thats it!
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Reviewed By: Mkiko_Yoru (not signed in) On: December 15, 2005 13:25 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is one of the best!!!!!!! i just read all of the reviews and i gotta say that, that chantel person who didn't even read your fic is a bitch! this is really awesome love the description. i was acttaully crying in this fic cause its so sad! please please please update! i got sick and stayed home from school and i decided "hey why not read some xovers fics!" this one is much better than the regular yu yu hakusho and inuyasha fics. But i just gotta say you have talent. "being able to devote yourself to something is a talent." - Alphonse Elric (fma) i'd say you should live by these words cause they're so true. please update!
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Title: - _ - Reviewed By: Chantel On: December 13, 2005 18:31 CST Comment/Review: k i dont even need to read your story. Many people look at your type of summary and go, NO WAY, its a waste of my time. And believe me if naruto and kagome were together it would be a catastrophe. I fucking hate kagome and kikyo rox. i talked to my friends about it and some of them even like kagome but they thought the pairing was wack. no means of offense but man thats a little to weird
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Reviewed By: injured_angel17 On: December 12, 2005 01:01 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: omg its so sad u have to write another chappie please an i luv u more than yesterday lol jk its so sad dont let it end their please
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Title: Wow Reviewed By: Leo_the_Lionus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 14:37 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow...absolutly wow. I was crying so hard towards the end that I had to stop to collect myself. This is truely sn amazing piece of work and I really can't wait to see how it continues. My only complaint is the way you centered the writing. I can understand for the lyrics but the rest made it a little difficult to read. At least for me. As for grammar and spelling well I really couldn't notice anything through my tears. Maybe later I will go back through it for the little details but I know if I read it again right now I will just break down. Again amazing job and please continue. I can't wait for the next part! If you want to chat sometime feel free to e-mail me leo_the_lionus@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 12:59 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: please update ASAP!!!! LOVE THE STORY!!! 1 OF THE BEST SO FAR!!!
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Reviewed By: InuDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 19:59 CST Comment/Review: NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU KILLED NARUTO!!! I hope more chaps are coming soon!!!! InuDragon
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Reviewed By: kumanamo On: December 04, 2005 16:33 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: write more please i beg of you
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Reviewed By: inuyashagirl5 (nli) On: December 04, 2005 03:40 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oooh!! I was looking for a good Naruto/Inuyasha crossover fic! I've been wanting to write one of my own, but I wanted to read a few others first. I definitely like yours and I definitely look forward to more chapters! It was so sad, but still a great beginning too! Please update soon! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: black_hole On: December 03, 2005 00:49 CST Comment/Review: oh my god i have never been this sad before! how... how could they after everything he did for them what about jiraiya or or tsunade?!?! argh that was so depressing... please update soon. it's just too good to stop
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Title: sob Reviewed By: rabidkagomefan On: December 02, 2005 22:40 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i read this on fanfiction.net and it was so awesome!! i could of cried! i love the naruto/kagome pairing! there just aren't enough! and this is by far the best naruto crossover i have ever read! naruto is so mistreated! damn those villagers! lease update! me and gimny are counting on you!thank you sensei!!!!!!!!ja ne
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Reviewed By: kougalover123 (nsi) [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 18:03 CST Comment/Review: this is great so far please keep updating i can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: madame shannon On: December 01, 2005 15:15 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: oh yeah, thanks alot! now i'm sitting in the middle of an internet cafe with tears just streaming down my face and into my earl grey. people all around me are staring at me like i just grew an extra two heads and have clowns sticking out of my back. wow that was a wonderful story, truly. i can't wait to see where this is going. i feel totally in love. here a rose for you @--^--- thanx
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Title: First Installment Reviewed By: Shadow Maiden (NOT LOGGED IN) On: December 01, 2005 01:09 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is a very well written Naruto/Inuyasha crossover. Love the Naruto/Kagome pairing, I feel bad for Naruto, poor thing, to have suffered so much, yet everyone else doesn't seem to care, in fact they despise him...Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see more! ~Kage
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