| "And The Sky Mourns" Reviews/Comments [ 127 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chantel On: January 01, 2006 16:53 CST
Comment/Review:
no offense injured angel but seriously you're the one sounding like the bitch, so don't lecture me.
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Reviewed By: injured_angel17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls pls pls update iam dieing here i dont mean 2 rush u but I WANNA KNO WHAT HAPPENDS NEXT!!!! P.S THIS GOES TO DA HATER CHANTEL STOP HATING JUST BECAUSE U HAVE NO FEELINGS AN SUCK IN KNOWIN A GOOD STORIE DOESNT MEAN U HAVE TO HATEIN ON OTHERS PEOPLES STORIES. ALSO IF U DIDNT LIKE IT WHY DID U READ IT STUPID AND KIKYOU SUCKS ASS SHES A MAJOR BITCH!!!!!
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Title: can't wait
Reviewed By: Darkness4eva On: December 24, 2005 14:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so sad do can't wait for the next chappie hope u update soon Does naruto really die? or does Kagome save him? or is he reincarnated? gotta know Ja ne
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Title: hey dood
Reviewed By: kazikid [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 03:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a very welll written fan fiction if I do say so myself. Another thing, screw the haters and post another chapter soon, it was good stuff. Also, I agree with what that one fellow said, the long chapter really captivated me. Keep writing and good luck. P.S Any idea when the next one is going to be up? Please send me mail if you do! Thanks.
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Title: T_T (cries)
Reviewed By: silver_kinsune On: December 24, 2005 02:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffle* first thing i want to say is WOW. this fanfic is now the very first story to make me cry. secondly i would like to point out that i dont offen review a story no matter how good it is(cause im lazy)and for me to WANT to review this says something(and it is a good something). and finally with all that said i would like to ask a request. PLEASE WITH ALL YOUR HEART AND CHAKERA UPDATE!!!!! PLEASE!!!!! P.S. Happy Holidays!!
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Title: T_T (cries)
Reviewed By: silver_kinsune On: December 24, 2005 02:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffle* first thing i want to say is WOW. this fanfic is now the very first story to make me cry. secondly i would like to point out that i dont offen review a story no matter how good it is(cause im lazy)and for me to WANT to review this says something(and it is a good something). and finally with all that said i would like to ask a request. PLEASE WITH ALL YOUR HEART AND CHAKERA UPDATE!!!!! PLEASE!!!!! P.S. Happy Holidays!!
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Title: k
Reviewed By: J-M On: December 22, 2005 06:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey plz update soon thiz story is awsome
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Reviewed By: BlackJudgment [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 01:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!! So Sad!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! Post next chappy!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: asha112 On: December 21, 2005 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love all the details i hope u keep doing that with the rest of ur chapters.PLZ! update soon
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Reviewed By: jazzrocks On: December 20, 2005 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I believe that this is the best Naruto fan fiction crossover that I have ever read on this site. Most of the fanfictions here are centered around Kagome and Sasuke in some impossible scenerio and a whole lot of OOC. But, you actually centered this around Naruto (finally!) and how it must have been to grow up hated. I believe that Naruto's growing up would be like this and I liked how you made Naruto smarter and stronger than most fanfictions. I nearly cried at the end, but, I'm too sick to do it! Self-sacraficing his life for his team mates' life sounds so like him! And the part when you introduce Kyuubi...PURE GENIUS! Although, I really hate that 'believe it' phrase in the American Anime (is it just me, or is the American Naruto abusing it just a TAD?) and I was really happy when you used it only twice. Yay! I am MOST curious on how you are going to introduce the crossover in this story! I know that Naruto is dead...so how would Kagome and her gang be introduced? Oooh, I can't WAIT! And if you churn out another 11 page chapter, I will literally fall off my chair and run around my house screaming happily!!! I love reading long chapters because it tells me that the author spent a lot of time and care creating everything!! But, PLEASE, take time on the Kagome/Naruto relationship! Don't make them fall in love at first (well, Naruto can have SOME lust for her, hehe!), stretch it out...I'm assuming that Kagome is angsty as well. Am I right? Well, I'm rambling, I know...Great f |
Reviewed By: Chantel On: December 18, 2005 21:38 CST
Comment/Review:
k, MKIKO. guess wut. I read the fucking story. and i was soooo bored. happy now, i read it and to tell you the truth im usually quite sensitive but holy crap i didnt cry i just blankly stared at the computer
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Reviewed By: InuKaShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
where does InuYasha come into this? please update
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Reviewed By: Fan person-thingy On: December 18, 2005 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Next Chappy! Next Chappy! I love this, and I don't think that constructive criticism is even warranted. Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: jytjjy On: December 16, 2005 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more please its a good story
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Reviewed By: Kiros_angel (not logged in) On: December 16, 2005 11:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very sad. :( Please continue soon!
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