| "And The Sky Mourns" Reviews/Comments [ 127 ] |
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Title: a good fic!
Reviewed By: Tatsudoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 00:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic! You MUST update soon! I hope NAruto and Kagome go back to Konoha and secretly visit the Hokage to let her know he's alright. She also loved him afterall. I would also have loved to see the looks on the others faces when Kakashi, Sakura, and Sasuke tell the villagers that Naruto really DID save them! That would be great! Well, update soon please!
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 20:18 CST
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I...i think i love you. Thank you, thank you so much for writing a story that is such a welcome respite from the sugary, inprobable, cliche scenarios that are overtaking both the IY and naruto fandoms. I am completely in love with your version of the kistune youkai, and am very very impressed with the way you are writing naruto. Not many authors can write such angst without making it tedious. Far from being the depressing mess it could have been, i get a great sense of strength and perserverance from naruto. I really don't know what else to say about your characterization of him, other than it's one of the best i've ever read. Perhaps not exactly true to the cannon, but wonderful nonetheless. This is one of the best fanfics i've run across in a long time, and i had just about given up on finding any descent naruto/iy crossovers. I'm not going to push you to update quickly. Rather, take your time, and treat us to another chapter as fantastic as the first two.
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Reviewed By: Mkiko_Yoru (not signed in) On: January 12, 2006 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
go injured angel!!!!!! this is one of the best!!!!! Oh yea, chantel if you dont like the fucking story dont read it ya bitch. if you think your sooooo damn perfect come up with a fucking story! but with your certain...bitchyness... all you probably could come up with is crap!!!!!!!!! and leave hieiisminetoglomp out of this. not her fault your such a bitch. ahh im very satisfied with this...i think ive made my point clear but if you dont know its "CHANTEL IS A BIG FAT BITCHY ATTENTION WHORE!!!!"
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (not signed in) On: January 12, 2006 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought the first chapter was great but you came with an equaly awsome second chapter. Can't wait to see the changes in Naruto and how kags effects him. Keep up the good work and update soon. You have half as many reviews as my one story, but my story's chapters are in the teens. Heck i know stories that are longer than mine that don't have as many reviews as yours. So you know you got a good fan base. Be proud... ^_~
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Reviewed By: ...i didn't do it On: January 11, 2006 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this. the writing style was totally unique and i liked how you included little snippets of songs instead of in big blocks. that always annoys me in songfics. you should up date asap and get kagome in there. i can't wait and i'll probably be checking daily.
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Reviewed By: kage ryu On: January 11, 2006 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon please! another totally awesome chapter! is one of the voices kagome's? please update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: sashagsged On: January 11, 2006 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kagomes voice. good story please continue
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Reviewed By: madame shannon On: January 10, 2006 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow thank you for the update! i was really looking forward to it and you did not disapoint. please update again, don't give up on the story. that would make me cry (and trust me thats not pretty) here, you deserve a rose @--^---
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Reviewed By: BlackJudgment [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congrats!!! I am now a loyal fan of yours! I Love This Story! Plz post next chappy soon! Remember: To be forgotten is worse than death.
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Reviewed By: Sin spider On: January 10, 2006 13:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story ALL THOUGH you need to work on updating the suspens kills me when i cant read the whole story but besides that ITS AN AWSOME STORY AND PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon(er)
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Title: Post New Chapter
Reviewed By: winged Dragon On: January 09, 2006 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have to update REALY soon ok?! this is a great start and i love it how u made him beable to talk to the fox! now becareful how u make him come alive again and how u introduce Kagome to the story ok? thanks cho
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Reviewed By: BlackJudgment [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 07:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congrats!! This is THE FIRST FIC on the ENTIRE INTERNET that has made me cry. Im normally a cold heated ass but this fic made me cry!! Post next chappy soon.
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Reviewed By: Raito On: January 07, 2006 04:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so sad please hurry and make another chapter
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Reviewed By: ebit333 On: January 06, 2006 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome please write more i love it PLEASE write more soon!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: BlackJudgment [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz post next chappy! This is so dark, I gotta see what happens next. This is the best Naruto fic i've read on mediaminer!!!!
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