| "And The Sky Mourns" Reviews/Comments [ 127 ] |
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Reviewed By: waikan On: January 23, 2006 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good, i may have put your story on my favorites on Fanfiction.net, and please continue this story!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mrs cake On: January 22, 2006 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just ignore me chantel i have a big mouth... But really who cares it's not real it's just a fanfic *holds up peace sign* can't we all just get along? *Laughs phyco like* /people stare at me oddly/ what? Mrs cake.
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Reviewed By: Mrs cake On: January 22, 2006 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm baaaaack! I LOVE your story i just decided to check up on your story today and found out you updated! YAYNESS! i really hope you update soon!!! everything you right is awesome!!!! Uh... *scratches head* And Chantel is a fun sucker. Don't be mean' just cause you don't like this particular fic!! *mutters under breath* Wouldn't you be upset if you had a fic YOU liked and someone kept on flaming YOU? I know I'd be majorly miffed. Mrs. cake
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Reviewed By: Kohara InuFan/ NarFan Takahashi On: January 22, 2006 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic! It's awesome! I could really get into something like this! So well written, so awesome! SOO COOL! I can't wait for the next chapter to out! Hope to read more! -Kohara
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Reviewed By: Honor [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 15:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seems so much better than the other Inuyasha/Naruto Crossovers I've read. Just as a consideration, you should state in the summary that its AU and that your not upto date with the canon,so you won't get bugged as much.
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Title: try this.
Reviewed By: T,T On: January 16, 2006 21:34 CST
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read bloodttears (if i rember it right on ff.net) it's in a diffrent anima section but is the only thing i can compare with how angsty/well wrritting this is. (evangelion)
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Reviewed By: speedshark On: January 16, 2006 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i gave this story this raitingt because you are one of the few athors that try and go the extra mile in therewritting it dosnt feel ushed but hart felt (and the 2 voices have to be kagome and maby sango or mirko)
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Reviewed By: ShiShiMaru On: January 16, 2006 05:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow...nice IYNaruto crossover fic...oh and of course it was obvious that the voice belonged to Kagome. =P
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Reviewed By: sexysesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is one of the best I've read, I'd put it in my top 3, and I see kagome is finally coming into the story, so update soon
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Reviewed By: Kaze Spirit On: January 15, 2006 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome fanfic, tough I think the Naruto-Kagome pairing is wierd. Oh and another thing, after a little comment someone amde a while ago about Naruto being reincarnated, well, let me just tell you that if Naurto and Shippo don't have a connection then I'll just eat the rock in the corner of my back yard. Two thumbs up anyway.
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Reviewed By: ebit333 On: January 15, 2006 17:39 CST
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i love this stoire please hurry with the new chappie PLEASE I BEG YOU ( ok i'm better)
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Title: review
Reviewed By: FEMALE_INUYASHA [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 16:17 CST
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I love your story and i can't wait to read more please hurry up and write some more i can't wait.
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Reviewed By: asha112 On: January 14, 2006 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the way u write.It seems so real.PLZ update soon.
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Reviewed By: AstralKyuubi On: January 14, 2006 10:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg I loved this, I think I liked the first chapter best because I don't really like when anime merges, but that's just me, can't wait for the next chapter! This is the only merging anime fic that was enjoyable! Thank you and I hope this doesn't die like almost everything else does on this site! Oh and you should start a forum that you could post your stories and we can have more interactive chats! If yah do that email me at jparfitt@felsted.org please!
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Reviewed By: Chantel On: January 14, 2006 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
ynow Mkiko_Yoru. I really dont mean to anger you. but the author has to take contsructive critism. Its a way of life. and i dont see you as the author of this fanfiction. You really shouldnt take anything that personally. It makes you look like a fool. And for your information I am highly talented in creative writing and have a degree in it. HieiIsMineToGlomp07 you have a beautiful choice of words when you write. I am just saying that I really don't agree with the bass of this story. I did not mean to upset anyone. But I think I can write a review in peace whithout being shot at for stating my opinion like you have. Just because I don't LOVE it and I didn't CRY it dosen't mean I deserve that.
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