| "And The Sky Mourns" Reviews/Comments [ 127 ] |
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Reviewed By: sexysesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is one of the best I've read, I'd put it in my top 3, and I see kagome is finally coming into the story, so update soon
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Reviewed By: Kaze Spirit On: January 15, 2006 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome fanfic, tough I think the Naruto-Kagome pairing is wierd. Oh and another thing, after a little comment someone amde a while ago about Naruto being reincarnated, well, let me just tell you that if Naurto and Shippo don't have a connection then I'll just eat the rock in the corner of my back yard. Two thumbs up anyway.
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Reviewed By: ebit333 On: January 15, 2006 17:39 CST
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i love this stoire please hurry with the new chappie PLEASE I BEG YOU ( ok i'm better)
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Title: review
Reviewed By: FEMALE_INUYASHA [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 16:17 CST
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I love your story and i can't wait to read more please hurry up and write some more i can't wait.
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Reviewed By: asha112 On: January 14, 2006 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the way u write.It seems so real.PLZ update soon.
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Reviewed By: AstralKyuubi On: January 14, 2006 10:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg I loved this, I think I liked the first chapter best because I don't really like when anime merges, but that's just me, can't wait for the next chapter! This is the only merging anime fic that was enjoyable! Thank you and I hope this doesn't die like almost everything else does on this site! Oh and you should start a forum that you could post your stories and we can have more interactive chats! If yah do that email me at jparfitt@felsted.org please!
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Title: ....
Reviewed By: Chantel On: January 14, 2006 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
ynow Mkiko_Yoru. I really dont mean to anger you. but the author has to take contsructive critism. Its a way of life. and i dont see you as the author of this fanfiction. You really shouldnt take anything that personally. It makes you look like a fool. And for your information I am highly talented in creative writing and have a degree in it. HieiIsMineToGlomp07 you have a beautiful choice of words when you write. I am just saying that I really don't agree with the bass of this story. I did not mean to upset anyone. But I think I can write a review in peace whithout being shot at for stating my opinion like you have. Just because I don't LOVE it and I didn't CRY it dosen't mean I deserve that.
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Title: a good fic!
Reviewed By: Tatsudoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 00:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic! You MUST update soon! I hope NAruto and Kagome go back to Konoha and secretly visit the Hokage to let her know he's alright. She also loved him afterall. I would also have loved to see the looks on the others faces when Kakashi, Sakura, and Sasuke tell the villagers that Naruto really DID save them! That would be great! Well, update soon please!
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 20:18 CST
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I...i think i love you. Thank you, thank you so much for writing a story that is such a welcome respite from the sugary, inprobable, cliche scenarios that are overtaking both the IY and naruto fandoms. I am completely in love with your version of the kistune youkai, and am very very impressed with the way you are writing naruto. Not many authors can write such angst without making it tedious. Far from being the depressing mess it could have been, i get a great sense of strength and perserverance from naruto. I really don't know what else to say about your characterization of him, other than it's one of the best i've ever read. Perhaps not exactly true to the cannon, but wonderful nonetheless. This is one of the best fanfics i've run across in a long time, and i had just about given up on finding any descent naruto/iy crossovers. I'm not going to push you to update quickly. Rather, take your time, and treat us to another chapter as fantastic as the first two.
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Reviewed By: Mkiko_Yoru (not signed in) On: January 12, 2006 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
go injured angel!!!!!! this is one of the best!!!!! Oh yea, chantel if you dont like the fucking story dont read it ya bitch. if you think your sooooo damn perfect come up with a fucking story! but with your certain...bitchyness... all you probably could come up with is crap!!!!!!!!! and leave hieiisminetoglomp out of this. not her fault your such a bitch. ahh im very satisfied with this...i think ive made my point clear but if you dont know its "CHANTEL IS A BIG FAT BITCHY ATTENTION WHORE!!!!"
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (not signed in) On: January 12, 2006 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought the first chapter was great but you came with an equaly awsome second chapter. Can't wait to see the changes in Naruto and how kags effects him. Keep up the good work and update soon. You have half as many reviews as my one story, but my story's chapters are in the teens. Heck i know stories that are longer than mine that don't have as many reviews as yours. So you know you got a good fan base. Be proud... ^_~
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Reviewed By: ...i didn't do it On: January 11, 2006 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this. the writing style was totally unique and i liked how you included little snippets of songs instead of in big blocks. that always annoys me in songfics. you should up date asap and get kagome in there. i can't wait and i'll probably be checking daily.
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Reviewed By: kage ryu On: January 11, 2006 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon please! another totally awesome chapter! is one of the voices kagome's? please update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: sashagsged On: January 11, 2006 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kagomes voice. good story please continue
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Reviewed By: madame shannon On: January 10, 2006 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow thank you for the update! i was really looking forward to it and you did not disapoint. please update again, don't give up on the story. that would make me cry (and trust me thats not pretty) here, you deserve a rose @--^---
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