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Reviewed By: Mellie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 12:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think all the authors should aspire to the level of writing that you put out. I look forward to the stories which deal with Inu/ Kag relationships the most. I do like your orig. characters, but like them to blend in with the old. I think you should focus more on the fish out of water situation that Inu finds himself in the future more. Little things such as going to the bathroom, talking to Souta ( and being clueless) I like that detail, the only flaw ( and it is minor) in your previous stories is that he fit in to quickly, I think it would be hard for anybody to change so fast. Thankyou so much for writing, I am aware how much hard work goes into it.
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: sasumiokaasan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 19:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sueric I really enjoyed your chronicles it was great and am currently reading this and purity 1 I would be honored if a great fanfictionis such as yourself read and reviewed my story I look up to you. I really like your style of writing. Deb
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 14:40 EST
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Well, I would say something, but it will spoil the surprise for all the other reviewers who haven't read this fic yet! But what an evil cliff hanger that was, but then again, they usually are all evil cliff hangers; but that's what a good author does haha!!
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Reviewed By: stardragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 11:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! What a nice treat to come home to. But man oh man, those cliff hangers are a killer! :o) I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for sharing yet another wonderful Inuyasha story.
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: December 04, 2005 03:36 EST
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oh yasha, say it aint so! :P ugh... kikyo... we love ta hate ya. ok, well maybe i wont keep reviewing... lol, i'm like the only one here.. and i'm just babbling! i'll wait till i have something interesting/intelligent to say. yeah. because... normally i just review cause it's the nice thing to do... but now... rambling. good night!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 00:23 EST
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Well, I made it through two chapters without crying, but this one just broke it...it could've been like Purity though, and bawl my eyes out on the first chapter haha!! Silenced with a kiss...the best way to be silenced!!
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: crushed by a dandelion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 18:23 EST
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You can be a tad dramatic at times. Not that I never am, but that's not the point. I, of course, am not an adult. Maybe you see something I don't. Maybe I'm just picky. Anyway. Keep writing...
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Reviewed By: ColShaLin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 14:58 EST
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Oooooh...sweet! Love the end of that chapter. You are so poetic. *Sigh*
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Reviewed By: ::Rawben:: On: December 03, 2005 14:29 EST
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...so can minnows live in water that has shampoo, conditioner, and soap in it?... just wondering.. ;) aww, this is such a nice chapter! and yeah, i've read part of this story before... but i never finished it... so i think i'll just read as you post now... ;) yey for first kisses!
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 01:59 EST
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Oh, Sue... This seems so sad. But I am already loving it. Thanks for reposting it so that people who didn't get to read it before can now. ^^ People like me, for instance. XD Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: A anime fan girl (not logged in) On: December 02, 2005 22:19 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your stories are always enjoyable, I never get tired of reading them. Whenever I read one of your stories, it's like I'm being sent into another world, where I can picture the images clearly. You are a king. The king... of fanfiction lol.
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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 04:35 EST
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okay....so I'm nuts but I'm glad I'm not going crazy....when I got the notification that you were posting a new ficcy, and that it was named 'Torrent' I sort of did a double take, scratched me head and said to myself "I could've sworn I've already read that"...much to my delight I find that it's a repost of one of my old time favs...silly me I didn't even notice it was gone....Ah well, I will certainly enjoy reading this all over again :-) woohoo! more suey goodness!
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Reviewed By: frostyshake [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 01:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I am so glad you are reposting this story! I was in mourning thinking that one of my favorite stories was gone forever.
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 01:14 EST
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Great intro chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 01:14 EST
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Ah, I love all the angst in this story, I'm glad you're reposting it!!!
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