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Title: the plot thickens...
Reviewed By: MidnightsKeeper [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 01:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another amazing chapter. Simply brilliant. I just love reading your stories. Usually I won't read a story unless it's finished because I hate to read a story I'll never get to read the end of, but I know you're reliable. Sesshomaru was very good in this chapter. I just love him! I know he's sort of a villian, but I think there's more to it. I think he'll be a very dynamic character in the series. Well, enough of the blah blah blah, just wanted to say thanks and good job for another awesome chapter(s).
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 21:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah another great chapter keep it up I can't get enought!!!
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 21:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I THOUGHT FOR SHORE INUYASHA WAS GOING TO KILL HIM, I would have lol J/K Great Job!
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Title: Konnichiwa daga Docharihe
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 21:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah awsome poor Inuyashs I'm shore nobody ever wants to have to tell somone like Mrs. Higurashi somthing like that, LOL!
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Title: Konnichiwa daga docharihe
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 21:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah awomse omg that was so funny when you said every thing when dead silcent awsome! ^_^
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Title: Konnichiwa daga docharihe
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 20:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah another awsome chapter wow, great job on this one I loved it woot, poor Inuyasha I bet he'll get no sleep for weeks! LOL
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 20:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah awsome chapter woot! Aww Poor Kagome, Inuyasha will make her feel better right ^_^
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 09:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH NO INUYASHA NO BAKA YOU BETTER HAVE NOT! He better have just gone to say farewell to that bit-uhh Kikyo anyway Awsome chapter loved it WOOT!
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Title: KONNICHIWA
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 09:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah he Kissed her Woot woot! GREAT JOB!
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 09:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah nice chapter great job. your a very good writer!
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Title: Konnichiwa daga docharihe!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 09:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow Awoms first chapter! I also read your other fic Metamorphasis(sp?) I couldn't review the hcapters for some reason but concider this a review for all thoses chapter s also, GREAT JOB!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 00:10 EST
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Hmm...and so the plot thickens with Sesshoumaru's behavior. Ah, the itching of the chicken pox is a horrible thing...and the lotion that helped only seem to make the itching worse for me.
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Reviewed By: Shikon no Jedi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 18:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, that was so good! Sesshoumaru was awesome! Was he serious? Will this be a Sesshoumaru and Kagome fic? Update soon!
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Title: Torrent
Reviewed By: GgBg [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 13:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter causes you to question Sesshoumaru and his actions. What is he trying to achieve? To make Kagome see how weak humans are when it comes to their emotions? That they are fickle, and will turn to another when they feel hurt, pain or confusion? Or is it that he is lonely and longs for what Inuyasha has? A mate, companionship, someone to share intimate things with or is he questioning his devotion to Rin's needs? He has questioned his father's motives for loving humans since before his death; now that he has Rin does he finally understand his father and his brother emotions/needs now? The questions are endless and there are many possibilities with them. Great chapter by the way, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 22:53 EST
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Aww how sweet, they're back....Rin's covered with odd spots huh? Ah, I remember those days...the ichiness was horrible!!
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