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Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 13:50 EST
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wasn't this story complete and on some time ago?i KNOW i have read the entire story of this before.did you take if off the web to revise it or something? btw this is such a GREAT story like all of your other stories.:D
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Title: adamile
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 12:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love reading this the third time around (lol) thanks for posting this fic, sue.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 17:11 EST
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OOOOh I love this next chapter....it's soooo funny haha!!! It's the reason why Kagome doesn't let Inuyasha in the room with her when she's in labor the Purities haha!!!!
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Reviewed By: asdf_jkl; On: December 08, 2005 12:46 EST
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lol! oh god... i hope its a female doc... and ugh! i hope inu has to wait outside!! hahaa..
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: December 08, 2005 10:55 EST
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I love that you are posting this again.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 16:46 EST
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Ah, nothing better than to hear a confession from Inuyasha out of anger!
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Reviewed By: lostprophetX On: December 07, 2005 14:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been waiting quite some time for this to come back online. I loved reading this the first time, and so far I'm loving it again.
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Reviewed By: kiaraecko On: December 07, 2005 02:11 EST
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WOW!!! i knew Kagome was going to have a baby hehe!! this stopry is awesome!! keep up the good work!!! and thanks for the great purity stories!! purity 4 was amazing and was sad when it ended, but happy when purity 5 is taking shape its going to be amazing!!!! keep up the amazing, awesome,aweinspiring work!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cynthia Finnegan On: December 06, 2005 21:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I remember reading this on AFF a while back. I even put it on my Favorites list. Nice to see it again, Sue.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 16:46 EST
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Aww...our poor hanyou; the full moon out-smarts him haha!!
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Reviewed By: NateGrey On: December 06, 2005 14:55 EST
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You'll have to forgive me, I have a terrible memory. It took me this long to realize I have actually read this before (Shippou's comment on Kagome's scent and Myouga's explanation were the clenchers, I think), but for the life of me, I can't remember how the next chapters turn out. But I'm glad it's back at any rate. I tend to get all your stories mixed up (except for Purity, and that's because your wonderful original characters stand out so much), so it might be a while before I can offer a real comment or question for you. But know that I am here, reading along with all your other devoted fans.
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Reviewed By: ColShaLin (nsi) On: December 06, 2005 14:48 EST
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Yay...Kagome is pregnant! I always love stories that involve the two of them having children. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Mellie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 13:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a new twist, her pregnant in fuedal era. Can't wait for Sess and Kouga's reaction! Thank you for this
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Reviewed By: Shippousfriend (ffnet) On: December 05, 2005 15:31 EST
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Is Kagome pregnant? I sthat why she's sick or is it just a sweet part in the story? I'm dying here, update!! hehehe, I know you update like very day, im joking!!
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Reviewed By: Mellie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 12:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think all the authors should aspire to the level of writing that you put out. I look forward to the stories which deal with Inu/ Kag relationships the most. I do like your orig. characters, but like them to blend in with the old. I think you should focus more on the fish out of water situation that Inu finds himself in the future more. Little things such as going to the bathroom, talking to Souta ( and being clueless) I like that detail, the only flaw ( and it is minor) in your previous stories is that he fit in to quickly, I think it would be hard for anybody to change so fast. Thankyou so much for writing, I am aware how much hard work goes into it.
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