| "Nothing Left to Lose" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Title: Simply enthralling
Reviewed By: Aiko Fujiwara On: December 21, 2005 04:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've thoroughly enjoyed your fic, taking no consideration what so ever to the fact that it is your first. It makes me smile and frown the way a good story should, and is believable the way anything worth reading is. My compliments and highest regards to the author. Post script: Arigato (the last letter is often time left unpronounced in the Japanese language) Sesshomaru: The Killing Perfection, from the root word "maru" or "of death". Just thought I'd throw that out there... Best wishes for the rest of your story Aiko Fujiwara
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Title: Nothing Left to Lose
Reviewed By: lashaun [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 11:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the fic it's origanel and I can't what tell the next one cames out keep them coming. p.s how did SESSHOMARU get his arm back?
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Title: Still awesome!
Reviewed By: xAyameKaiousx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2005 13:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a awesome chapter I'm grateful you updated so soon! yay! lol this chapter was great too, and I'm glad your not rushing Sesshomaru and Kagome being together but don't take TOO slowly =) Anyway update as soon as you can! I look foward to the next chapter but hey I'm a writer too I know you have a life =) ♥
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Title: SO AWESOME!
Reviewed By: xAyameKaiousx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore this story! Please update soon it's so brillant I honestly look foward to the next chapter so please do keep it up.
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Reviewed By: gtolady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 14:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Darkjewel, I Really like your story, Really - Really!! It started out like a lot of other stories out there but in chapter three and four you departed from the standard 'oh poor, poor Kagome' routine, Thank God! I don't think you should worry about the 'ooc' thing especially with Sesshomaru, we get to see so little about his 'character' in the anime that it really leaves it pretty open for interpretation. And I think your characterization of Kagome is Great. I am really enjoying your story so don't let a lack of reviews get you down. I've noticed before that a story on mediaminer will get a lot less reviews than the same story on fanfiction.net or even a Single Spark, so don't feel bad about not having a lot of reviews. Blame it instead on mediaminer readers who can't type or something. Anxiously awaiting more…. Tara Hall - gtolady@aaahawk.com ps - ahhh, now I maybe know another reason you don't have more reviews - I had to register before it would let me leave a review. In other words you are set up to only receive reviews from registered members. Just in case you didn't know….
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Reviewed By: ReMbY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 18:23 CST
Comment/Review:
I am loveing your story i like4 how the charaters are not all that nuch OOC hope to see more from you.
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover4life [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 11:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love ur story i cant wait until u right more i wont to see what happens
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Title: I am intrigued.
Reviewed By: harpersong [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 03:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I hate when Sess/Kag fics bash InuYasha so badly, I love how you handled it. I think you've got a good start for a good story, and I shall be waiting for your updates eagerly. One question though...how did Sess get his arm back? It's driving me nuts(I hate picking at people's stories, I'm just curious)...maybe an author's note or a flashback to explain? *puppy eyes* I hope you get a few more reviews to encourage you to keep going. As I said, I really like what you've started. Good luck. =)
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