| "Only Heartbroken" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Title: Mistake
Reviewed By: Sedona On: April 16, 2006 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice work, nice work. Although, instead of 'cure' your put cur...which is actually kind of funny since this story is about Inuyasha heh heh.. Anyways, upsate soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 10:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bY 'TALK ABOUT HIS EARS' I mean talk about the fact he's a hanyou, 1/2 demon, half-breed, however the hell you wanna say it.
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool dance off!!!!!!!! Make Inuyasha talk to Kagome about his ears or tell her that he loves her then talk about his ears. PPPPPPPPPPPLLLLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEE!! I'm begging you update soon.!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: It's Me!
Reviewed By: Izayoi On: April 04, 2006 19:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, I finally read the tenth chapter and it was very good! Well, I can't wait til' you post up the NEXT chapter!
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Reviewed By: DarkMikoShaelyn On: March 27, 2006 19:01 CST
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I love it with a passion but i just need to tell you that in the chapter "Kagome's cure part3-dance off" you already have "Kagome's cure part 3- Karakoe" I just wanted to tell ya ^^ Any ways... you are the shizit!! Keep on going!!
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Reviewed By: speedy_turtle [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 02:26 CST
Comment/Review:
hi!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Izayoi On: March 08, 2006 19:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Ohmygosh! That chapter was like so good! I can't wait til' you write the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: je suis100 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome!keep up the good work, and update soon.
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Reviewed By: speedy_turtle On: March 08, 2006 15:42 CST
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i love this.it brightens my dark soul.inuyasha would be a natural at the bloody chicken dance.who the hell came up with that anyway?oh well.uodate a.s.a.p.!
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Reviewed By: DarkangelShaelyn On: March 07, 2006 19:51 CST
Comment/Review:
oh my gods!!! I love it your awsome!!! keep on going please!!
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Title: Love it
Reviewed By: Inukag_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 19:26 CST
Comment/Review:
I still love it, gotta say!! lol anywho, update soon!!
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Reviewed By: lostheartx On: March 06, 2006 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
mwahahaha, i love this story. so awesome. keep up the good work. (:
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: March 06, 2006 21:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Inuyasha loves Kagome. Inuyasha loves Kagome. Ahhhhhh! Anyway Kagome and Sango outfits are hecka cute. I can't wait to see what the boys are going to have on.
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Title: Last Three
Reviewed By: Daddy-O On: March 05, 2006 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok. I finally read chapters 6-8. VERY nice. I am really looking forward to the next chapter. Your story telling continues to be riveting!!! Keep up the good work!!!.......now I can go to bed. Love you.
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Title: Romance is so cool
Reviewed By: casadebeto [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very romantic cliffy...can;t wait to see if he tells her he is 1/2 demon and that he LOVES her---
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