| "Only Heartbroken" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Title: I HATE CLIFFYS!!
Reviewed By: Inu&Kag forever!! On: February 08, 2006 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!! its cute but i almost cried *sniff* but i dont hate Koga but hes annoying >.< i mean Kagome obviously doesnt love Koga and he goes on fantasizing about him and Kagome getting maried and all that i mean what a dork. (ok enough of Koga) But seriously WHY A CLIFFY!!!! IF THERE WERENT ANY CLIFFYS IN STORIES THIS WORLD WOULD BE A MUCH BETTER PLACE!! ok well anyways good story update alot plz. JANE!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 23:38 CST
Comment/Review:
She probably thinks she is seeing things. I can't believe Kogua would do that. He stabbed her. Inuyasha made it their real quick so did Sango and Miroku.
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Title: Speechless
Reviewed By: Daddy-O On: February 07, 2006 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know where to start...... Incredible writing!!.... though I must say, kind of intense for a girl your age. There are times when writers are inspired by their environment. I hope your's isn't your inspiration. Go easy, this is bordering an "R" rating....slow down a tad. A strong character in a story coveys that they have strong character by their actions. Sometimes a more "subtle" dialog can mean much more. I also wrote "extreme" things at one time...I see where you get it!! Keep it coming (at a PG-13 level).
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Title: You ROCK!!!
Reviewed By: casadebeto [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOu so totally rock, and what a cliffy... Man, you better hurry up with Ch. 6 so we can see if Kagome accepts Inu or not....we'll see, huh?!?!
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Title: Still Impressive!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Daddy-O On: February 05, 2006 11:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You continue to amaze!! Obviously, cliffhangers are designed to keep your audience wanting more....and you have accomplished this with young brilliance with the ending of the fourth chapter!! More, more, I say, more!!!!!!!
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Title: keep going
Reviewed By: yasha_21_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 19:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!! I lvoe the fourth chapter!!! But why did you have to make it a ciff hanger? I mean come on!! Well, I can't wait for the fith chapter!!! Hope to se it soon!!!!
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Title: WOW, what a cliffy...
Reviewed By: delanie On: January 31, 2006 14:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was a good cliffhanger... your very good at getting the suspense up! Can't wait until Chapter 5, hurry I am ready for the continuation of the cliffhanger---
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Izayoi On: January 30, 2006 20:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey!! I lvoe the fourth chapter!!! But why did you have to make it a ciff hanger? I mean come on!! Well, I can't wait for the fith chapter!!! Hope to se it soon!!!!
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Title: SORRY!
Reviewed By: inukagpuppylove [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay guys i'm soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooo sorry! i tried to put the 4th chapter on but it only put like half of it!!! how do i fix it?! PLEASE TELL ME!! AGGGGGHHHHH!don't kill me! don't kill me, help me! I'M SOO SORRY! please forgive me!!!
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Title: get going
Reviewed By: DarkAngle Shaelyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 23:17 CST
Comment/Review:
I MEAN REALY GET GOING! I WANNA READ MORE AND SOME LEMONS PLZ KEEP GOING!
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Title: Daddy-O
Reviewed By: Daddy-O On: January 23, 2006 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say I am extremely impressed!!! You have a unique writing style that rivals published authors. It appears I have slightly underestimated your ability to transfer thoughts to paper....or keyboards. You should actually write the stories for the cartoons and show those no talent hacks how a real author tells a story. Keep up the good work!!I'm very proud of you. I love you. :)
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Title: KEEP GOING
Reviewed By: DarkAngle Shaelyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 21:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEEP ON WRIGHTING FOR GOD SAKES IM GOING CRAZY HERE *whimpers* PLEASE KEEP ON WRIGHTING!! and just mabe a little longer...
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Reviewed By: Inu_FMA_luvr On: January 18, 2006 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story! I can't wait for you te review. I have a fanfic called UNDER THE COVER OF DARKNESS at animespiral.com. Please read it. if you do I'll review more.
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Title: WOW!!
Reviewed By: inuyasha luvs kagome 4eva long On: January 13, 2006 05:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! U r keeping me in so muchie suspense... U have got a thingy in u that makes u write so well huh... I am juz too lousy in writing.. unlike u!
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: inuyasha luvs kagome 4eva long On: January 13, 2006 05:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! U r keeping me in so muchie suspense... U have got a thingy in u that makes u write so well huh... I am juz too lousy in writing.. unlike u!
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