| "Sever the Tie That Binds" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: cm On: June 24, 2006 01:49 CDT
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I have to agree with Kagome. Inu and kikyo must not have much of a relationship if they aren't married or living together after six years. I can't really help but wonder why Inuyasha made the sudden decision to get together with Kikyo now. maybe he was forced to break up with Kagome for her own safety. so he chose Kikyo instead. I personally think that would make a lot of sense considering all the info about Inu's current life and feelings. I definitely have to side with Kagome on this. He breaks up with her, shatters her heart, runs off with another woman after having sex with kagome and getting her pregnant. He deserves to suffer but i can't help but feel sympathy for him. Then again, i feel Kagome deserves to suffer for sleeping with Kouga when she's not even in love with him and only to prove, and fail apparently, that she was over Inuyasha. Get an Inu/Kag lemon in soon because the Kouga/ Kagome lemon damn near burned my eyes out even though i tried to just skip over it. Be quick with the next update and have Inu break up with Kikyo or Kagome break up with Kouga soon because i hate seeing the two of them with anyone but each other.
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Reviewed By: Kelle917 On: June 23, 2006 11:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautifully written, very heartfelt... It brought tears to me eyes! I love it! Please continue writing! GREAT WORK!
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: June 22, 2006 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is an excellent story. It is well worth the wait between updates. I, for one, would like to read a chapter in Inuyasha's point of view. Like what was he thinking when he left Kagome all those years ago. And why did he regret it. At least he sounded like he had regrets about leaving her at the end of this latest chapter. Does he only regret things because of the child? Enquiring minds want to know. Please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: June 22, 2006 18:41 CDT
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I'm siding with Kagome on this one. Yeah okay Inuyasha is Taro's father, but Kagome made the right decision. If Inuyasha could have left Kagome so easily than what would have happened if he did stay with her out of guilt, they would have made each other miserable, and end up resenting each other. The truth is Inuyasha was not trustworthy back then and he would not have been capable of being a father. And Kagome is right to want to take things slowly in introducing Inuyasha to his son by gradually involving him in Taro's life. Then it would not be such a shock to Taro when he finds out that Inuyasha is his dad. Inu really does have to respect Kagome's wishes, after all she is Taro's mother, and knows him the best, she would know how to handle such a situation in a way that would not emotionally damage her son.
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Reviewed By: inusessiluvboys On: June 22, 2006 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kagome is one selfish little girl like Inuyasha said it doesnt matter she still should have told him about his son so, what if he was with some one else he could have still helped out with his son she cant keep a guy away from his son just because he doesnt want to be with her anymore and telling other people that he abandoned her (whihc is what she told sango and miroku) once she had the child was a lie since he didnt even know and having other people accuse him of things ....if i were him i would be pissed off. kagome should take a look at all that she has done and realized she brought this all on herself by not telling him once she found out that she was pregneat he was going to have a child you cant tell someone that unless they want to be with you they cant see there child he should take her to court and she would see how wrong she was and then to come to his own home and say those things how rude.
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Reviewed By: Interesting On: June 22, 2006 16:09 CDT
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I like this story with the pacing and the drama and everything, but I do have one complaint. This last chapter--Inuyasha was right. Kagome doesn't have the right to decide whether or not Taro will find out Inuyasha's his dad. Just because he left doesn't mean he couldn't be Taro's father. People have children but aren't together everyday, and from the way you're writing, it seems as if she only wanted him to be a father if he was going to be with her as well, and that's just not right. That is their child, and she was in the wrong for not telling Inuyasha. She was and is being selfish. It isn't about Inuyasha being with her--it's about him being with his son. I think Taro deserves to know, and not telling him is not doing him any favors. Other than that, I love the story. Good job!
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Title: update
Reviewed By: liz1223 On: June 05, 2006 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i really think this srory is reallty because it almost sounds real it has a great plot to it please update soon
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Reviewed By: melba On: May 20, 2006 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story please write another chapter asap!! you made this story so creative and im always on the edge of my seat but i hate how long it takes for the new chapters to be writen... sorry to say lol i just love it so much lol please hurry wit the new chap
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Reviewed By: Charm16 On: May 16, 2006 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job with this chapter! I love the Kag/Inu touch at the end. I really hope that they'll end up together again! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 00:19 CDT
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nice...you had my heart flipping...but rather cruel cliffie. write on!
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Reviewed By: raging_toujikin On: May 15, 2006 20:22 CDT
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awesome =D plz update soon
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Reviewed By: fallingaway823 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 17:38 CDT
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NOO! Thats not right! dont leave just there!!! please continue T.T lol
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Title: WOO!
Reviewed By: obese_a_tron5000 *not logged in* On: May 14, 2006 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UHHHHHHHHH! how could you leave it there!? that was just mean! anyway! really awesome story and i hope you write again really soon, i can't wait for the next chapter!! this is really one of my favorite stories!! please write soon!
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Reviewed By: fallingaway823 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 22:43 CDT
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I love your story! I mean i just couldn't stop reading it! But um *cough* *ahem* The Little Lemon i mean Wow...lol i was just....not expecting it...yeah lets put it that way. I feel like theres more to the story that you left out. And its killing me! lol. I mean why would he just leave her like that? And he obviously still loves her. you could just tell! hm.... what is it?!! Please updat as soon as humanly possible before this whole thing just eats me up -.- lol PS. More inuyahsa and Kagome!!! :DDD
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Reviewed By: tornadotrail On: April 24, 2006 21:41 CDT
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Well what did he expect? Did Inuyasha want Kagome to be forever pining over him?
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