| "Sever the Tie That Binds" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: cyberdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 16:39 CDT
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i get the feeling that there's a lot more to what happened all those years ago than Inuyasha is letting on. It's pretty clear that he still wants Kagome. Why else would he be jealous of Kouga and try to rub his relationship in her face to make her jealous. Not to mention how you mentioned that he always complained to Miroku about losing Kagome in college. The fact that makes me certain of that is that he isn't married to Kikyo. He left Kagome all of a sudden for her and yet even after over 6 years, the two of them still aren't married. That seems like all i need to know that something else went on back then. I REALLY didn't like the lemon you made. I think Kagome only did it to prove to herself that she was over Inuyasha because of Naraku's words. she doesn't even know if she loves Kouga and Kagome doesn't seem like that type of woman. That is the only part i hate about this fic. Why did you need to make it? Couldn't you have implied it? The thought of Kouga and Kagome doing it is really creepy and i hate that. Update soon because i want to read more.
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Reviewed By: cm On: April 24, 2006 12:12 CDT
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alright, i found what you did to be really wierd. You know people don't like Kouga yet you made a sex scene between him and Kagome? Was it really necessary? Couldn't you have maybe implied it, or better yet not have it done at all? I think all Inu/ Kag fans deserve something for putting up with it. i know! To make up for the Kouga/ Kagome lemon maybe you can have a flashback of Inuyasha and Kagome's first time! I found one other thing wierd. When Kouga first asked Kagome out, i think you made her say yes too quickly. Maybe if given time and after talking to Kouga for a while. I think that might have worked better than having her say yes when she didn't even know him before then. All i can say now is that this was a good story, besides the lemon (glares). I want there to be less Kouga and more Inuyasha in Kagome's life.
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Title: WOO!
Reviewed By: dfgiu On: April 24, 2006 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you need to update more often!! this is one of my favorite stories!! anyway, really great story, hope you write again soooon!
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Reviewed By: inux3kagome4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 20:33 CDT
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I agree awesome chapter, but I'm really ticked at the koga/kagome lemon, anyways, can't wait for the next chap!
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 12:10 CDT
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Yea I can't wait to see what happens next please update soon
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 04:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter!!!! I thought it was really good how they were sort of challenging each other on the dance floor. Great chapter and story!! I can't wait for the next update!!! ;-)
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP (not logged in) On: April 23, 2006 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya know its not fair, how InuYasha gets to do that. Ya know go be with Kinky-hoe while Kagome suffurs. Then he comes back when he fells like it and gets her back. But thats how life is. Sad. Oh well!Ya had some writers block huh? Please update.
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: April 23, 2006 00:30 CDT
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Inuyasha is a complete and utter asshole,he left Kagome so why the hell is he getting jealous about Kouga. I hope he is miserable with Kikyo and that he is just with her because of a business contract.I really hope he breaks up with that skank soon, and grovels at Kaogome's feet for a long time after what he did to her,and I hope Kagome doesn't yake him back immediately forgiving every hurtful thing he has ever done.
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Reviewed By: fudge On: April 22, 2006 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing!!! Your story is really creative and entertaining! hope you update soon, keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Charm16 On: April 22, 2006 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter! I'm a bit disappointed with Inuyasha though. And the part with Kouga was definitely not a happy one, but still, I guess it would only lead to a more intense dramatic feeling. I do hope that Inuyasha and Kagome will get together in the end. Pleae update soon!
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Reviewed By: inu_kag_san On: April 22, 2006 14:32 CDT
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Please let Kagome and Inuyasha end up together.
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 18:59 CST
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Please PLease you have to update I have to know what happens
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Reviewed By: Tenshi19 On: March 20, 2006 23:21 CST
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Great job with the fanfic! I really hope you update soon because I can't wait to see what happens next. I really do hope that Inuyasha and Kagome get back together because I don't like Kouga that much. Good luck and please please update soon!
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Reviewed By: eagle7 On: February 24, 2006 08:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My friends and I love your story! We hope you update soon because we're really anxious to see what will happen next! Please update!
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Reviewed By: InuyahasChic [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 10:16 CST
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the fic rocks update soon plz!
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