| "Sever the Tie That Binds" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Title: I LOVE IT!
Reviewed By: Obese_a_tron5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 23:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my! I love it. It made me do that thing when you read something really sweet or sad and the back of your thoat gets all clenched up and your eyes water. I oe it, please update as soon as possible!!
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Reviewed By: Chokoreto On: January 08, 2006 23:12 CST
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once again another well done chapter. akk i cant believe inuyasha was that blunt..its kind of scary actually lol. i wonder, what if kagome let kouga stayed at her apartment while inuyasha was there... ah anyways..keep it upp! :D
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Reviewed By: Tanya Casey, your cousin On: January 08, 2006 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, let me start by saying I never new you could write so well, I am really surprised. However there are a few things of advice for you. Be careful with your time frames, ex you went from picking up the little boy in the morning to having one conversation then putting him to bed. Another thing when you are describing her new found love use another word other than cute, you have to think she isn't in highschool anymore, she is about my age, so think of sexy, handsome, something a little more sophisticated. And another thing, it kind of made me laugh, but remember people my age don't ask each other if they want to be boyfriend and girlfriend, it kinda just happens. And maybe another thing, they moved kinda fast into the relationship after two dates. Plus remember the little boy is only five, he isn't as intelligent yet as you are making him out to be, think of Kaitlynn and how she sees thing. But I absolutely love the way you describe thing, set the scene, that is well written, I am impressed, I have to say I am only were her ex just walked in the room and I want to finish the story but it is 9pm and it is past my bedtime, so I am going to try to finish it tonight, I guess no sex again, what am I marrying this is soooo sad, love ya I'll talk to ya later.
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Reviewed By: jules26 On: January 08, 2006 20:09 CST
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Oi...nasty cliffhanger. :glares: Once again, I want to say how much I enjoy this story. She's not to forgiving of Inu yet and she isn't denying him the opportunity to know his son while battling with her own feelings. That's our Kagome! Now...to patiently await the next update. :)
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Title: Love it so MUCH!!!!
Reviewed By: 3760 On: January 07, 2006 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story you did a great job and you made them human nobody does thet thanyou! Please Please update soon make a new chapter This is 1 of the best stories i have resd! You left the story at the music stoped PELASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!InuYasha shouldn't try to kiss her.He left her.It was his falt.I wouldn't tell my boyfriend if he was leaving me after all of that.He was could of been partying in college when she could't even go.She was still hooked on him and had a kid in her hands.She has strength.I admire that.Please update.
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 08:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter. I really like your story. Please keep writing!
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Title: Knarly
Reviewed By: inux3kagome4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 14:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter *(as always ;)* and it just so happens that I'm a HUGE Elvis fan and "Fools rush in" is my all time favorite Elvis song 0___o .. so extra brownie points!
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Reviewed By: bricks435 On: January 03, 2006 05:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Awesome!!! Thanks for your fast update. ^_^ cya
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Reviewed By: jules26 On: January 03, 2006 00:27 CST
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Excellent story. I like how Kag isn't just letting Inu back into her life without making him suffer first and then hopefully earn it yet she is still the Kag we all know and love as she isn't denying her son the chance to meet/get to know his father.
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Reviewed By: Chokoreto On: January 02, 2006 12:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are so creative! The plot, originality, and how you write out your story are really planned out well. I was hooked on this story just like that, also seeing how I haven't read angst story in a long time,I'm slowly falling for reading angst story once again. Thanks for taking your time to write this and I hope everything eventually turn out a happy ending for Kagome, Inuyasha, and Taro.
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Reviewed By: Daonia On: January 02, 2006 09:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic....love it...please update soon...(please get Koga out of there...lol)
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Reviewed By: bricks435 On: January 02, 2006 08:33 CST
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The story started really good. Poor Kagome.... I wanna know what Sango and Miroku mean in chapter 4 when they say Inu. always complained about his ex and it was his own fault? Does it mean he regrets loosing her? Anyway, continue the same way, hope to see ya soon.bricks
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Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 02:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww poor kagome!! This is a really good story and i hope u update Soon plz!! cant wait to see wat will happen nexts. Or what koga(sp?) will do when he finds out!!!!! Oh cant wait so plz update soon :-D!!!
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Title: neat - o!
Reviewed By: inux3kagome4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 23:56 CST
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this is starting to sound like a really good fic (as long as she doesn't get together with Koga lol) anyways ... really good tear-jerker!
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