| "Sever the Tie That Binds" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: inusessiluvboys On: June 22, 2006 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kagome is one selfish little girl like Inuyasha said it doesnt matter she still should have told him about his son so, what if he was with some one else he could have still helped out with his son she cant keep a guy away from his son just because he doesnt want to be with her anymore and telling other people that he abandoned her (whihc is what she told sango and miroku) once she had the child was a lie since he didnt even know and having other people accuse him of things ....if i were him i would be pissed off. kagome should take a look at all that she has done and realized she brought this all on herself by not telling him once she found out that she was pregneat he was going to have a child you cant tell someone that unless they want to be with you they cant see there child he should take her to court and she would see how wrong she was and then to come to his own home and say those things how rude.
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Reviewed By: Interesting On: June 22, 2006 16:09 CDT
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I like this story with the pacing and the drama and everything, but I do have one complaint. This last chapter--Inuyasha was right. Kagome doesn't have the right to decide whether or not Taro will find out Inuyasha's his dad. Just because he left doesn't mean he couldn't be Taro's father. People have children but aren't together everyday, and from the way you're writing, it seems as if she only wanted him to be a father if he was going to be with her as well, and that's just not right. That is their child, and she was in the wrong for not telling Inuyasha. She was and is being selfish. It isn't about Inuyasha being with her--it's about him being with his son. I think Taro deserves to know, and not telling him is not doing him any favors. Other than that, I love the story. Good job!
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Title: update
Reviewed By: liz1223 On: June 05, 2006 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i really think this srory is reallty because it almost sounds real it has a great plot to it please update soon
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Reviewed By: melba On: May 20, 2006 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story please write another chapter asap!! you made this story so creative and im always on the edge of my seat but i hate how long it takes for the new chapters to be writen... sorry to say lol i just love it so much lol please hurry wit the new chap
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Reviewed By: Charm16 On: May 16, 2006 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job with this chapter! I love the Kag/Inu touch at the end. I really hope that they'll end up together again! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 00:19 CDT
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nice...you had my heart flipping...but rather cruel cliffie. write on!
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Reviewed By: raging_toujikin On: May 15, 2006 20:22 CDT
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awesome =D plz update soon
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Reviewed By: fallingaway823 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 17:38 CDT
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NOO! Thats not right! dont leave just there!!! please continue T.T lol
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Title: WOO!
Reviewed By: obese_a_tron5000 *not logged in* On: May 14, 2006 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UHHHHHHHHH! how could you leave it there!? that was just mean! anyway! really awesome story and i hope you write again really soon, i can't wait for the next chapter!! this is really one of my favorite stories!! please write soon!
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Reviewed By: fallingaway823 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 22:43 CDT
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I love your story! I mean i just couldn't stop reading it! But um *cough* *ahem* The Little Lemon i mean Wow...lol i was just....not expecting it...yeah lets put it that way. I feel like theres more to the story that you left out. And its killing me! lol. I mean why would he just leave her like that? And he obviously still loves her. you could just tell! hm.... what is it?!! Please updat as soon as humanly possible before this whole thing just eats me up -.- lol PS. More inuyahsa and Kagome!!! :DDD
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Reviewed By: tornadotrail On: April 24, 2006 21:41 CDT
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Well what did he expect? Did Inuyasha want Kagome to be forever pining over him?
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Reviewed By: cyberdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 16:39 CDT
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i get the feeling that there's a lot more to what happened all those years ago than Inuyasha is letting on. It's pretty clear that he still wants Kagome. Why else would he be jealous of Kouga and try to rub his relationship in her face to make her jealous. Not to mention how you mentioned that he always complained to Miroku about losing Kagome in college. The fact that makes me certain of that is that he isn't married to Kikyo. He left Kagome all of a sudden for her and yet even after over 6 years, the two of them still aren't married. That seems like all i need to know that something else went on back then. I REALLY didn't like the lemon you made. I think Kagome only did it to prove to herself that she was over Inuyasha because of Naraku's words. she doesn't even know if she loves Kouga and Kagome doesn't seem like that type of woman. That is the only part i hate about this fic. Why did you need to make it? Couldn't you have implied it? The thought of Kouga and Kagome doing it is really creepy and i hate that. Update soon because i want to read more.
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Reviewed By: cm On: April 24, 2006 12:12 CDT
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alright, i found what you did to be really wierd. You know people don't like Kouga yet you made a sex scene between him and Kagome? Was it really necessary? Couldn't you have maybe implied it, or better yet not have it done at all? I think all Inu/ Kag fans deserve something for putting up with it. i know! To make up for the Kouga/ Kagome lemon maybe you can have a flashback of Inuyasha and Kagome's first time! I found one other thing wierd. When Kouga first asked Kagome out, i think you made her say yes too quickly. Maybe if given time and after talking to Kouga for a while. I think that might have worked better than having her say yes when she didn't even know him before then. All i can say now is that this was a good story, besides the lemon (glares). I want there to be less Kouga and more Inuyasha in Kagome's life.
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Title: WOO!
Reviewed By: dfgiu On: April 24, 2006 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you need to update more often!! this is one of my favorite stories!! anyway, really great story, hope you write again soooon!
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Reviewed By: inux3kagome4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 20:33 CDT
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I agree awesome chapter, but I'm really ticked at the koga/kagome lemon, anyways, can't wait for the next chap!
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