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Title: review
Reviewed By: FEMALE_INUYASHA (Not logged in) On: March 14, 2006 21:46 CST
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Love it can't wait to read more. Hurry up and type more! Please!
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Title: review
Reviewed By: FEMALE_INUYASHA (Not logged in) On: March 14, 2006 21:45 CST
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Love it can't wait to read more. Hurry up and type more! Please!
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Title: To Be Cursed
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Poor Kagome
Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 22:22 CST
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Oh, I loved the insight of Rin's thoughts on Sesshoumaru. And I really felt the sorrow that Kagome is feeling. No one should feel as she has. I like your portrayal of the Great Demon Lord. Hope that Inuyasha snaps out of the spell that on him. The poor guy. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 11:22 CST
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Yet another beautifully written chaopter. Have i mentioned that i absolutely adore your version of inu-papa? He's just....spectacular. As a matter of fact, the way you write all of the characters is amazing. You have a way of making their emotions rise from the page (or screen, in this case) and it's impossible not to sympathize with kagome, feel nothing but utter distain for inuyasha, and so on. You really amaze me. you've somehow managed to make sesshoumaru falling in love(kinda) with kagome absolutely believeable. That little soliloquy from rin was invaluable for setting the stage for future relationships. Brilliant. Hm. It seems like all i've done is praise you, doesn't it? I'm sure you'd appreciate a little concrit, but i honestly cant think of anything for this chapter at the moment. But next chapter! Next chapter i'll give you some useful feedback. Hopefully.
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Title: To Be Cursed
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Laina On: February 27, 2006 11:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this fic, it has a really nice story line behind it and I hope that you update more on it very soon.
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 08:51 CST
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So i think everyone can agree that inuyasha's being an ass. What i'm really really curious about is how you're going to write kikyo. I know the majority of people hate her, but i firmly believe that if they were to finish the anime and catch up on the manga, they would feel much differently. But a good writer can characterize her as a complete bitch, and i'll go along with that too. Anyway, i'm still very very excited to see how sesshoumaru's going to react to kagome's offer of help. Will the promise of the curse being lifted be enough to risk being indebted to her yet again? And i have the feeling that this isn't the kind of debt that will be satisfied by a few jewel shards. Not by sesshy's reckoning, anyway. Oh yeah! There were a few lines in this chappie i absolutely adored, what with the way they showed such subtle sarcasm. One that comes to mind is the whole "i'll even let you help me carry what i buy!" line. That totally made me laugh out loud, it is such spot-on brother/sister interaction. Whelp, i think that's all for now, except of course, the requisite Update Soon!!
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Title: To Be Cursed
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: To Be Cursed
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is well written and interesting. I can't wait to see what you do next.
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 16:59 CST
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Once again, great job. my reviews may be a bit monotonous, but truly, you are doing a wonderful job. I like the fact that your sesshy doesn't seem to be the "love/lust at first sight" kind. That bit of resistance he had to even thinking of kagome as beautiful gives me hope that he'll be pretty in character. Well, i guess that's it for now, update soon!
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Title: To Be Cursed
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 08:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: kitty_girl
Reviewed By: kitty_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 05:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good story so far I hope you will update soon. I love the way this story is going so far. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 14:18 CST
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Eh keh!? Evil, evil cliffy! Although, if you keep updating as often as you have been, i think i'll be able to last. There was something in this chapter that i really really like: you don't have kagome using her powers to solve every problem. Simply bandaging rin's arm was very practical and makes me think better of kagome, and of you for writing her that way. I do agree with the reviewer that suggested the small change for the ofudas. As with the healing she did, simpler is better. Just for future refrence. I do think it's great the way it is, too. Anyway, i am absolutely loving this fic. Keep up the spectacular work!
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