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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 08:51 CST
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So i think everyone can agree that inuyasha's being an ass. What i'm really really curious about is how you're going to write kikyo. I know the majority of people hate her, but i firmly believe that if they were to finish the anime and catch up on the manga, they would feel much differently. But a good writer can characterize her as a complete bitch, and i'll go along with that too. Anyway, i'm still very very excited to see how sesshoumaru's going to react to kagome's offer of help. Will the promise of the curse being lifted be enough to risk being indebted to her yet again? And i have the feeling that this isn't the kind of debt that will be satisfied by a few jewel shards. Not by sesshy's reckoning, anyway. Oh yeah! There were a few lines in this chappie i absolutely adored, what with the way they showed such subtle sarcasm. One that comes to mind is the whole "i'll even let you help me carry what i buy!" line. That totally made me laugh out loud, it is such spot-on brother/sister interaction. Whelp, i think that's all for now, except of course, the requisite Update Soon!!
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Title: To Be Cursed
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: To Be Cursed
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is well written and interesting. I can't wait to see what you do next.
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 16:59 CST
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Once again, great job. my reviews may be a bit monotonous, but truly, you are doing a wonderful job. I like the fact that your sesshy doesn't seem to be the "love/lust at first sight" kind. That bit of resistance he had to even thinking of kagome as beautiful gives me hope that he'll be pretty in character. Well, i guess that's it for now, update soon!
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Title: To Be Cursed
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 08:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: kitty_girl
Reviewed By: kitty_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 05:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good story so far I hope you will update soon. I love the way this story is going so far. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 14:18 CST
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Eh keh!? Evil, evil cliffy! Although, if you keep updating as often as you have been, i think i'll be able to last. There was something in this chapter that i really really like: you don't have kagome using her powers to solve every problem. Simply bandaging rin's arm was very practical and makes me think better of kagome, and of you for writing her that way. I do agree with the reviewer that suggested the small change for the ofudas. As with the healing she did, simpler is better. Just for future refrence. I do think it's great the way it is, too. Anyway, i am absolutely loving this fic. Keep up the spectacular work!
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Title: To Be Cursed
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 13:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 11:06 CST
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I'm enjoying your story. I would like to suggest a small change. Instead of the barrier made by the ofuda to fall to either Kagome or Sesshomaru, maybe Kagome could instruct Rin in how to take it down. For example, by removing one of the ofuda. She is human and capable of something so simple. Kagome's ofuda would probably not be strong enough to keep Seshomaru out, but would be unpleasant. Please consider it. ^_^ I look forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 20:36 CST
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Spectacular! And i love the prompt update. Ask and you shall recieve fanfic. But really, i am sitting on the edge of my seat here, waiting with bated breath for kag and sess to have their confrontation. I'm sure it's going to be a doozy. After all, can you really see sesshoumaru accepting help from his half-brother's wench? i think not. Well, just wanted to drop by and tell you how well you're doing, boost the ol' ego a bit, and i've done that. so update for me!
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Title: To Be Cursed
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 19:50 CST
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Very very intrigued over here. I love the way you've written Inu no Taisho. Not sure exactly what it is, but i just...really like it. I can't wait to see where you go with this, and i know i don't have to worry about it being good, since all of your stories are fantastic. Keep up the awesome writing!
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Title: I love it!
Reviewed By: badkitty0404 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 03:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love where this story is going. I love all your stories as I am a big crossover fan. I can't believe you only got 1 review on this site. Anyway, I love it and can't wait until the next update.
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Title: To Be Cursed
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 23:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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