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Title: Nicely done
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another beautifully composed chapter. You continue to be engaging while moving along the plot at a comfortable pace. Well done.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Mylia_blue On: April 12, 2006 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am usually a big Inu/Kag fan but you have changed my mind completely. I absolutely love your story. It is wonderful for so many different reasons. I sat and read the entire story in one sitting. I cried and felt the angst of poor Kagome. The love that is quietly spoken between she and Sesshomaru is heart achingly beautiful. I look forward to the addition of new chaptes. Truly a work of literary art!
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 16:50 CDT
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Ok, it's official. I hate inuyasha. I just...i mean, he...argg! And the Kikyo in this story! Now, i actually like kikyo in the iy manga. I think she's really just misunderstood, and is actually a really good person. But this one? Yeeeah, no. I must say, i'm very curious as to what exactly happened with that little sesshy/inu-papa overlay you did. ... Was that anything? Hm. I guess i'll see, ne? The only thing that hit a sour note with me in this chapter was actually a grammer issue. In the second to last paragraph, first sentence, you use the present tense in a couple of phrases, where you should have really stuck with the preterite. It takes just a little bit away from the spirit of what you're saying, at least for me. But then, i've been known to be called a grammer nazi, so you might want to take that with a grain of salt. Other than that, i must say i'm left feeling a little lost with sesshoumaru's sudden change in attitude towards kagome. I mean, he's being...like, playful! I'm trying to give you a little concrit here instead of just useless praise this time. How am i doing? But really, that's all i've got. Oh yeah! update soon!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: youkos_mate_kage (this is my mediaminer account name but i'm to lazy to sign in.) On: April 11, 2006 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fic, the style of writing is perfect, and what I have seen throughout the chapters there has been no spelling or grammar mistakes; the creativity is beyond anything I could ever imagine: I enjoyed this fic so; much cuz every time I read a fic I go in the living room and play and pretend I am in the story so overall it is awesomely terrific time infinity.
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 14:37 CST
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Aww, i still have this goofy, soft smile plastered on my face. I'm not quite sure why. Maybe it's the utter and complete denial Sesshy is indulging in. Yes, i think that's it. I do have to say that i'm very very pleased that you remembered what would happen to kagome's soul(theoretically)if she were to die, especially with kikyo so close to her. Most authors forget, or ignore the fact that kagome's soul wouldn't stick around long enough for sesshoumaru to resurrect her. It really makes me happy that you remembered. It's small details like that, that really make a story. Kudos on the action scene, btw. It was awesome, like a movie playing out in my head. For some reason, the image of inuyasha turning slightly in midair to get a better angle really stuck with me. What else can i say? You're awesome at giving enough detail to paint a clear picture in the mind of the reader, but you don't bore us with unnecessary information. That takes more than a little talent. On sort of that subject *shakes head* is inuyasha just an ass, or is it possible that he's really that blind? I just don't know what to do with that boy. I've said it before, but i'm going to say it again. I really appreciate the way you are writing sesshoumaru. He's a welcome reprieve from the sesshoumarus that are running rampant, confessing their undying love to a woman that not only have they never really spent any time with, but have tried to kill on more than one occassion. I'd think that would put a damper on anyone's relationship. That slight resistance shesshy has to thinking of kagome as a potential love interest is very reasurring. How you are able, at the same time, to imply that he's already deeply in love with her is beyond me, but you're managing beautifully. Given the small sessh/kag interactions you've already given us, i'm on the edge of my seat, waiting to see what's going to happen now that they're going to be travelling with each other(i think). In case you haven't gathered it yet, i'm really enjoying this story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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Title: To Be Cursed
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: poohbear On: March 15, 2006 11:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! I can't wait for the next installmnt! keep up the good work!
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Title: review
Reviewed By: FEMALE_INUYASHA (Not logged in) On: March 14, 2006 21:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Love it can't wait to read more. Hurry up and type more! Please!
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Title: review
Reviewed By: FEMALE_INUYASHA (Not logged in) On: March 14, 2006 21:46 CST
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Love it can't wait to read more. Hurry up and type more! Please!
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Title: review
Reviewed By: FEMALE_INUYASHA (Not logged in) On: March 14, 2006 21:45 CST
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Love it can't wait to read more. Hurry up and type more! Please!
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Title: To Be Cursed
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Poor Kagome
Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 22:22 CST
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Oh, I loved the insight of Rin's thoughts on Sesshoumaru. And I really felt the sorrow that Kagome is feeling. No one should feel as she has. I like your portrayal of the Great Demon Lord. Hope that Inuyasha snaps out of the spell that on him. The poor guy. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 11:22 CST
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Yet another beautifully written chaopter. Have i mentioned that i absolutely adore your version of inu-papa? He's just....spectacular. As a matter of fact, the way you write all of the characters is amazing. You have a way of making their emotions rise from the page (or screen, in this case) and it's impossible not to sympathize with kagome, feel nothing but utter distain for inuyasha, and so on. You really amaze me. you've somehow managed to make sesshoumaru falling in love(kinda) with kagome absolutely believeable. That little soliloquy from rin was invaluable for setting the stage for future relationships. Brilliant. Hm. It seems like all i've done is praise you, doesn't it? I'm sure you'd appreciate a little concrit, but i honestly cant think of anything for this chapter at the moment. But next chapter! Next chapter i'll give you some useful feedback. Hopefully.
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Title: To Be Cursed
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Laina On: February 27, 2006 11:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this fic, it has a really nice story line behind it and I hope that you update more on it very soon.
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