| "To Be Cursed" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 18:26 CST
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this is great, i cant wait to find out what happens when sessy touches the jewel
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Reviewed By: Sasori-sama On: August 20, 2006 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story you have here, I hope that you'll update it soon! Sasori
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Title: chapter 11
Reviewed By: ptbear@cableone.net On: June 28, 2006 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. Update soon. Can't wait to see how Kagome restores Sesshomaru's arm. If Inuyasha finally sees Kikyou for what she really is.
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Reviewed By: RockyGlrL [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 18:56 CDT
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got done readin it all and i must say very good. you kept me interested in the story. Theres alot of Shesh/Kag stories that drag, and then get very slow or almost seems to stop.. To me, this story keeps you on your toes. Not knowin whats goin to happen next. Brava!
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Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 15:18 CDT
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Yay, I'm completely caught up! Finally. ^_^ Excellent so far, but you got my hopes up with the "new chapter". I think you accidentally loaded chapter ten again; or did you do that on purpose? I dunno. If I'm not mistaken, didn't you have another story as well? It's not on here, but I seem to recall a Youko x Kagome fanfic as well. It was only three chapters long when I first read it. Okay, I'm done rambling. Please, continue all your marvelous works!
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Title: Wonderful addition
Reviewed By: mylia_blue [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this chapter. I really feel the connection between Kagome and Sesshomaru. I just hope that you place the two together. The need each other. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 05:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was nice I hope you update soon
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Title: Nicely done
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another beautifully composed chapter. You continue to be engaging while moving along the plot at a comfortable pace. Well done.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Mylia_blue On: April 12, 2006 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am usually a big Inu/Kag fan but you have changed my mind completely. I absolutely love your story. It is wonderful for so many different reasons. I sat and read the entire story in one sitting. I cried and felt the angst of poor Kagome. The love that is quietly spoken between she and Sesshomaru is heart achingly beautiful. I look forward to the addition of new chaptes. Truly a work of literary art!
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 16:50 CDT
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Ok, it's official. I hate inuyasha. I just...i mean, he...argg! And the Kikyo in this story! Now, i actually like kikyo in the iy manga. I think she's really just misunderstood, and is actually a really good person. But this one? Yeeeah, no. I must say, i'm very curious as to what exactly happened with that little sesshy/inu-papa overlay you did. ... Was that anything? Hm. I guess i'll see, ne? The only thing that hit a sour note with me in this chapter was actually a grammer issue. In the second to last paragraph, first sentence, you use the present tense in a couple of phrases, where you should have really stuck with the preterite. It takes just a little bit away from the spirit of what you're saying, at least for me. But then, i've been known to be called a grammer nazi, so you might want to take that with a grain of salt. Other than that, i must say i'm left feeling a little lost with sesshoumaru's sudden change in attitude towards kagome. I mean, he's being...like, playful! I'm trying to give you a little concrit here instead of just useless praise this time. How am i doing? But really, that's all i've got. Oh yeah! update soon!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: youkos_mate_kage (this is my mediaminer account name but i'm to lazy to sign in.) On: April 11, 2006 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fic, the style of writing is perfect, and what I have seen throughout the chapters there has been no spelling or grammar mistakes; the creativity is beyond anything I could ever imagine: I enjoyed this fic so; much cuz every time I read a fic I go in the living room and play and pretend I am in the story so overall it is awesomely terrific time infinity.
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 14:37 CST
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Aww, i still have this goofy, soft smile plastered on my face. I'm not quite sure why. Maybe it's the utter and complete denial Sesshy is indulging in. Yes, i think that's it. I do have to say that i'm very very pleased that you remembered what would happen to kagome's soul(theoretically)if she were to die, especially with kikyo so close to her. Most authors forget, or ignore the fact that kagome's soul wouldn't stick around long enough for sesshoumaru to resurrect her. It really makes me happy that you remembered. It's small details like that, that really make a story. Kudos on the action scene, btw. It was awesome, like a movie playing out in my head. For some reason, the image of inuyasha turning slightly in midair to get a better angle really stuck with me. What else can i say? You're awesome at giving enough detail to paint a clear picture in the mind of the reader, but you don't bore us with unnecessary information. That takes more than a little talent. On sort of that subject *shakes head* is inuyasha just an ass, or is it possible that he's really that blind? I just don't know what to do with that boy. I've said it before, but i'm going to say it again. I really appreciate the way you are writing sesshoumaru. He's a welcome reprieve from the sesshoumarus that are running rampant, confessing their undying love to a woman that not only have they never really spent any time with, but have tried to kill on more than one occassion. I'd think that would put a damper on anyone's relationship. That slight resistance shesshy has to thinking of kagome as a potential love interest is very reasurring. How you are able, at the same time, to imply that he's already deeply in love with her is beyond me, but you're managing beautifully. Given the small sessh/kag interactions you've already given us, i'm on the edge of my seat, waiting to see what's going to happen now that they're going to be travelling with each other(i think). In case you haven't gathered it yet, i'm really enjoying this story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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Title: To Be Cursed
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: poohbear On: March 15, 2006 11:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! I can't wait for the next installmnt! keep up the good work!
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Title: review
Reviewed By: FEMALE_INUYASHA (Not logged in) On: March 14, 2006 21:46 CST
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Love it can't wait to read more. Hurry up and type more! Please!
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