"Hunter's Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Title: ~Breathtaking Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 23:57 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: My breath is absolutely gone! omg, he had better destroy that horrible thing thats following them. even barely hearing any details, it sounds wickedly scary, so he better be a strong saiyan and go kill it. ~Aaralyn~
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Title: Ah! So close!! Reviewed By: alexandraite [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 02:03 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This story is very original and VERY entertaining. I like that you gave Bardock a very strong, formidable match and not a wilting flower. I think he needs a little ass-kicking first! Your writing style is truly amazing and very sensual. Great job! Oh, and the line "He was in instant lust.". Perfect. ^-^
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Reviewed By: eshfemme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 18:07 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10 Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review: I really enjoy your writing but I don't enjoy the obvious set up of the OC... perhaps it's reading too many Mary Sue OCs but it is just too disappointing to see from an author such as you. I'm fine with PWP lemons but even this seems way too vicarious for me. I'm sorry but also, I can't help but laugh whenever I see the name, Lunara. This is all with love because I do believe you can write better. Perhaps it could have been helped if there was some warning that there was an OC (or since it might give away too much, a mention of the PWPness of it all...). Perhaps I've misinterpreted the nature of the fic too. Sorry to be the only critical review but I do feel that you can do better. Bardock is really well done-- it's just that I don't find the fic as sexy as it can be and it's hard to feel enthusiastic about the fic when Lunara is just reading like a Mary Sue.
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Title: Wow? Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 16:34 CST Comment/Review: So close yet so far. Very exciting thought. I like the pace and the beast was a really good twist. Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 14:01 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: totally Hot u are like one of the best fanfic writers out there. u totally spoil me toward other writings, i'm always comparing there writing to urs and they are so lacking
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 03:55 CST Comment/Review: *Flails and fangurls* OHHHHHH!!! OHHHHHHH! OHHHHHH! She scarred my baby!! >.< *thinks* Hang on - I like that scar... Thumbs up to the groovy female!! ^_^ I just LOVE the way he's realising that she's no easy kill - I LOVE HER!! - do him bloody good to get a good smacking more often >.<
... What else can I say?? I adore this story, and I adore you for writing it - egads my delicious primal baby in the hands of someone who gets saiyan nature... I am a happy girl! ^_^ (Yeah, you wait for ages, and this is all you get - sorry, still feeling half dead *looks ashamed* )
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Title: Keep it Coming Reviewed By: MaraiTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 10:37 CST Comment/Review: It's so awesome! I love Bardocks reaction to his prey ^^ He's so sexily ... sexy! I reek with descriptions as you can tell.
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Title: Luv it!!! Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: February 01, 2006 22:06 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Tens across the board for a gorgeous chapter. I love the chemistry between the two and it is very amusing how much they try and deny it. Luved the chapter~~ ~Aaralyn~
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Reviewed By: bring it on On: February 01, 2006 18:03 CST Comment/Review: going great rooting for ya
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Title: Cool! Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 16:57 CST Comment/Review: War Fans! I could see the battle in my head perfectly! Go Lunara! Although we all know she should jump his bones instead...bad saiyazon bad!
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: February 01, 2006 13:53 CST Comment/Review: oooh... that was good... I loved the fighting and how distracted Bardock keeps getting with his little vixen...
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Reviewed By: aiyana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 07:14 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: excellent! I love the progress of the story, the suspense is great and Barduck is so deadly sexy, I also like the character that you have created,the warrior Lunara. what I find brilliant in your fanfics, it is that the characterizations of your characters are very well done including the characters that you invent. They are charismatic and very realistic. I love your work.
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Reviewed By: its all good On: January 29, 2006 17:10 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: dag i can't wait for the next chapter
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Title: Cool! Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 19:32 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: That is awesome! It is so cool she can shape shift!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: January 27, 2006 23:47 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hey, ive been reading some of your fics, you're a really great author! i love your style, please keep the good work coming =D
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