| "Hunter's Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2006 14:20 CST
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Pampered servitude ha she obviously doesn't know she is dealing with a saiyan. haha! This will be interesting.
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: January 20, 2006 10:23 CST
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oh... can't wait to see more of this character... Can't wait for more... ^_^
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2006 09:57 CST
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Ohhhhh You made her strong!!! *worships Tempest* (again) (I'd get used to this if I were you) She wants to jump him just from his scent!! She's MY kinda gal!! ^_^ Third Chapter!!! Third Chapter NOW!!!... Pleeeeease?? *bats eyelashes*
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Reviewed By: El On: January 19, 2006 22:55 CST
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Boy is she in for a shock.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac again On: January 17, 2006 23:39 CST
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I meant to say his lack of attire!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac - NLI On: January 17, 2006 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um... Bardock dear, I think you missed a spot. Here, let me help. Wow - very nicely written so far. It was so easy to envision Bardock in his attire, slathering on the oil... jeez, what's it going to be like if you actually add lemon to the story? I can't imagine who his Prey is going to be. Lucky jerk.
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde (not logged in) On: January 15, 2006 12:13 CST
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Wow...so sensually appealing... All my senses feel awake. Damn girl, you are a master at story-telling.
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: January 15, 2006 00:17 CST
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Tempest I'm willing to read anything you write and this looks like it will be far from dissappointing... keep it up... ^_^ Barb seems very happy... good job...
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Reviewed By: EleneK *not logged in* On: January 14, 2006 13:41 CST
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Spectacular!!! The pace was great. I also liked the refrence to the beast as opposed to Bardock himself. Something tell me that that last hunt into manhood is not supposed to kill anything.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan not logged in On: January 14, 2006 11:21 CST
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WHERE'S CHAPTER TWOOOOOOO? *cries This little bit is so well done it's humbling. Sexy without any sex! @.@
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 05:30 CST
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(Notice how I review this faster than I did MDSL... *blushes* ) OHHHHH *flails wildly* beast-within-Bardock in a leather loin cloth!! THAT'S my kinda story!! *Big heart eyes* He's all primal and manly and... ohhhhh. I have all these wonderful images of him all oiled up and near-naked (Mostly because I made him oil up and wear a loin cloth ^_^) So much sex coursing throughout this chapter and he hasn't even got into his stride yet!! *Worships Tempest* (You do realise that it's all made me even less coherent than normal, don't you??) Please, please for the love of Bardock post the 2nd chapter soooooon!!! *Annoyingly large puppy/anime eyes*
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