| "Hunter's Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: soulfulgray On: December 18, 2007 00:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. Totally awesome. There just aren't enough fics out there about Bardock. This was so well written and I loved how much you highlighted their animal natures and their need to mate. I wonder, also... Lunara, I assume, made it back to her homeworld. Well, she escaped because she didn't want to take a mate, and most animals, when in heat, mate in order to procreate. Methinks of the possibility that Gokou/Kakkarot could have a half-brother, somewhere out there in the black yonder of space. It's just a thought tickling at my senses and I think the idea could make an awesome fic if you wrote it. Ach, anyhar, like I said, this was wonderful.
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Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 21:56 CDT
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Lunara is an awesome character and I am sad her and Bardock cannot be together, but that explains his scars and where you left it was perfect.
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Title: noo!!! I want a sequel
Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: July 31, 2006 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He cut off her hair!@ What a bitch; that's so mean. no seriously thou i want a sequel where they get back togethr! Luved it though~~ ~Aaralyn~
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 18:11 CDT
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*Looks shifty* Of course I've reviewed every chapter!! It's just that Media Miner didn't post them, as they were so witty and insightful and literary... *whistles* It's because I beta, you know - I tell you what I think of the chapter then forget to review *blushes* I'm as crap a friend as I am a beta!! It's why people love me... ^_^ As you know, I adored this chapter - fair broke my heart it did - although I'm thinking Lunara would be a bit of a third wheel in our home... O.o Bardock seems pretty keen on the idea, but that's Bardock for you >.<
I adored this fic *big heart eyes* Truly loved it, and you have my heartfelt thanks for writing it. I think I'll have to send Bardock back over to show you the extent of my gratitude... *grins* You never know, it might inspire you to write more Bardock fics... *bats eyelashes* Anyway *bows* Wonderful fic - it was a real treat to see my baby in the hands of someone who gets saiyan nature - and I expect it was a treat for you to have Bardock in your hands! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: May 21, 2006 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god he is so sexy. and he has a brain.. he's too perfect. I love the description of them; vivid enough to draw you into the story, and enough to keep you completely hooked. Can't wait until the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so hot keep the great work
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Title: hot
Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There is nothing to say but that that was hot, and gorgeous. I can't wait until the next chapter~ I love your writing; it is some of the best that i have found on Mediaminer. ~Aaralyn~
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Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 18:37 CDT
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Is jealous of Lunara. Good job.
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep doin ur thing
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Reviewed By: just breath On: March 27, 2006 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
luven it
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: March 27, 2006 16:17 CST
Comment/Review:
dont be mean, I wanna know what happens! hehe.
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Title: ~Breathtaking
Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My breath is absolutely gone! omg, he had better destroy that horrible thing thats following them. even barely hearing any details, it sounds wickedly scary, so he better be a strong saiyan and go kill it. ~Aaralyn~
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Title: Ah! So close!!
Reviewed By: alexandraite [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 02:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very original and VERY entertaining. I like that you gave Bardock a very strong, formidable match and not a wilting flower. I think he needs a little ass-kicking first! Your writing style is truly amazing and very sensual. Great job! Oh, and the line "He was in instant lust.". Perfect. ^-^
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Reviewed By: eshfemme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your writing but I don't enjoy the obvious set up of the OC... perhaps it's reading too many Mary Sue OCs but it is just too disappointing to see from an author such as you. I'm fine with PWP lemons but even this seems way too vicarious for me. I'm sorry but also, I can't help but laugh whenever I see the name, Lunara. This is all with love because I do believe you can write better. Perhaps it could have been helped if there was some warning that there was an OC (or since it might give away too much, a mention of the PWPness of it all...). Perhaps I've misinterpreted the nature of the fic too. Sorry to be the only critical review but I do feel that you can do better. Bardock is really well done-- it's just that I don't find the fic as sexy as it can be and it's hard to feel enthusiastic about the fic when Lunara is just reading like a Mary Sue.
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Title: Wow?
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 16:34 CST
Comment/Review:
So close yet so far. Very exciting thought. I like the pace and the beast was a really good twist. Keep writing.
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