| "Hunter's Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 14:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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totally Hot u are like one of the best fanfic writers out there. u totally spoil me toward other writings, i'm always comparing there writing to urs and they are so lacking
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 03:55 CST
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*Flails and fangurls* OHHHHHH!!! OHHHHHHH! OHHHHHH! She scarred my baby!! >.< *thinks* Hang on - I like that scar... Thumbs up to the groovy female!! ^_^ I just LOVE the way he's realising that she's no easy kill - I LOVE HER!! - do him bloody good to get a good smacking more often >.<
... What else can I say?? I adore this story, and I adore you for writing it - egads my delicious primal baby in the hands of someone who gets saiyan nature... I am a happy girl! ^_^ (Yeah, you wait for ages, and this is all you get - sorry, still feeling half dead *looks ashamed* )
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Title: Keep it Coming
Reviewed By: MaraiTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 10:37 CST
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It's so awesome! I love Bardocks reaction to his prey ^^ He's so sexily ... sexy! I reek with descriptions as you can tell.
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Title: Luv it!!!
Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: February 01, 2006 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tens across the board for a gorgeous chapter. I love the chemistry between the two and it is very amusing how much they try and deny it. Luved the chapter~~ ~Aaralyn~
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Reviewed By: bring it on On: February 01, 2006 18:03 CST
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going great rooting for ya
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Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 16:57 CST
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War Fans! I could see the battle in my head perfectly! Go Lunara! Although we all know she should jump his bones instead...bad saiyazon bad!
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: February 01, 2006 13:53 CST
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oooh... that was good... I loved the fighting and how distracted Bardock keeps getting with his little vixen...
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Reviewed By: aiyana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 07:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent! I love the progress of the story, the suspense is great and Barduck is so deadly sexy, I also like the character that you have created,the warrior Lunara. what I find brilliant in your fanfics, it is that the characterizations of your characters are very well done including the characters that you invent. They are charismatic and very realistic. I love your work.
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Reviewed By: its all good On: January 29, 2006 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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dag i can't wait for the next chapter
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Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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That is awesome! It is so cool she can shape shift!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: January 27, 2006 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, ive been reading some of your fics, you're a really great author! i love your style, please keep the good work coming =D
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Title: woohh!
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I try to be as loyal as I can to Vegeta, but hot dang! This story's got my head turning towards a certain Saiyan, who happens to be the father of my Veggiepoo's sworn enemy...Oh gosh, what am I thinking?! Bad BD! Must eliminate all lusty feelings you might have for this Adonislike Saiyan that's NOT Vegeta!!!! What an amazing beginning! Barb, you better watch out now, or you might get some serious competition for your man if Tempest continues with this story! Really, I can see the heads turning already!!! ^__^
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Reviewed By: keep it real On: January 21, 2006 09:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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u write the best ish out there
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Title: Also
Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: January 20, 2006 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As for your first chapter, *small pause* I must say that it was immensely enjoyable. Bardock's character seems to be everyone's fantasy. So many perfect muscles *stares in wonder*, and yet his strength, his ability to dominate, so unlike the timid boys now who sneak glances when they think we are not looking. Bardock's strength in comparison is a refreshing change. And in case i didn't mention, I love your story~ ~Aaralyn~
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Title: Sexy
Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: January 20, 2006 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Truly delicious. Bardock's character is almost sinful, him being the darknesstouched beast to her moontouched beauty. This story is written with so much passion, it truly draws the reader in, and for that i commend you. This story is like an inferno which draws you into it's fiery depths to seek what is truly hidden within it's mystery. I can hardly wait for your next part. ~Aaralyn~
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