| "Looking in a Mirror" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: Edah1011 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 02:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhh... I have long await the continuous of this story. Why do you take long time to continue?
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Reviewed By: Raedah On: April 09, 2006 05:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The last chapter are too short. Please update soon. I want to know what happen between Eric and Devan. Please...Please...Please Update. I really wanna know. Anyway, nice story. Love it. Mmmpphhh...
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Title: When?
Reviewed By: Raedah On: April 04, 2006 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I Love it. When will you continue the story? I can't wait.
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Title: YES!!
Reviewed By: U know who this is On: March 20, 2006 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good! The climax of the two way relationship has come! Nwo, ti cam only get better from here...right? RIGHT?!?!? Well, Madelyn knows what she is doing is kinda wrong whihch means she might care1 The only thing i want to say is one ting. Locigcally, someone would ask "are we breaking up?" or do you not love me any more?" as for Devan, he owuld ask Eric stright up front (since that seems to be his personality) and no matter what Derek said, he would still want to know the truth. I know you are trying to make this a conflict (and you are doinga good job!) but dont forget logic, if you do then your story will seem like god is just hating on these people and it wont seem realistic. Try and think what you would do in each of their shoes and then put it together and write from there. Still great though! ANd nice updating!
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Title: I hate this stupid review thing
Reviewed By: silver wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 21:29 CST
Comment/Review:
ignor this, I can't always see my reviews unless I put something up, it's making my mad.
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Title: Goodie!!!
Reviewed By: Me Again On: March 19, 2006 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good! I know something bad s going 2 happen since they are BOTH going to the same resteraunt..... But it could be good, you never know. Only the writter knows! And the party idea... It is a good but I know it is going to backfire... I can feel it. Or my feelings are just screwed up! But I like your fast updating! PLease update soon...but I really hate Derek more...he is going through hormones and other stuff (the big green eyes monster) but I still dislike him! Update Soon!
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Title: I hate Derke....
Reviewed By: Paper-Warrior On: March 18, 2006 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey..I dont fell like signing in but you know who I am. This chapter was great! I hate Derek even more but my new favorite character is... (drum roll) Kelise! She is a great person a friend everyone would want! Her slapping the two of them was perfect! and funny! Hopefully it will knock sense into them! LOL! The only thing I want to say is "glair" is actually spelled "Glare" thats it though! Great chapter! you better end this on a good note!
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: Me and only me On: March 13, 2006 21:53 CST
Comment/Review:
yay!
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Title: update!!
Reviewed By: Paper-Knight [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHH! How much longer till this pain is over?! Seriously could you tell me how long untill Derek relizes he is a pain in the butt r seomthnig really good happens? This is so sinfully painful! Update soon!
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Title: Checking something
Reviewed By: silver wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 10:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just seeing if this shows up 'cause wierd things are gong on with the reviews. So, that's all this is.
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Title: Suspense...
Reviewed By: Paper-Knight [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 23:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was nice.... I did understand what was going on thoug...but you are still a good writter...cant wait 2 see Devan's response!
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Title: Good!
Reviewed By: Paper-Knight [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very nice! Devan and Eric got back together so good! And Derek....he...he needs to be hit by a bus...no then Devan would prob be sad and that would amek Eric sad so maybe he should just move away. No I have a better idea! He should stick his head in a food processer! That was a good chapter and like always keep it up!
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Title: WTF
Reviewed By: Paper-Knight [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 22:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF happened? Who was "Der..." was it someone that I should know? And I'm guess his name is Derek? How could this happen?!?!?! HOW!!! But it was nice! Please update soon and when you do...kill that little loser! Kill him! Or do something!!! NOW!
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Paper-Knight [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Cries* There is no more already up... I have to wait.... That makes me sad..... Oh well, i guess I can wait...but hurry! Oh and ideas: Hmm... what is this story rated? T So no one under 13 should read it? Ok... how about....hmmm...this is gonna sound sick but molestation by some other person? Jelous person? Or a random guy? Or if you wanna take it to the next level...rape..... If not..then Jelousy (I spelt it wrong, I know) if you dont wanna take it that far! Update soon!
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Title: LUVED IT
Reviewed By: Paper-Knight [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was wonderful. Mainly the suryp scene; "Then I'll have to lick it up." That was so amazing!!! I LUVED IT! Write more! And I will ask you once more! I want another Original! PLease! I am pleading!!!!
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