| "When in Egypt" Reviews/Comments [ 103 ] |
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Title: Random arabic!
Reviewed By: olesialove [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
And you, sadly, got it wrong. "misaa' el kher", yeah, does mean something similar to good afternoon / good evening, but that's the front part of the greeting. The response to that would be, as you'd probably write it, "misaa' en'nuur". Good morning would be "sabaah el kher" and, in response, "sabaah en'nuur" where the "kh", by the way, sounds like you're halfway into hacking out your tonsils. Actually, scratch that, it sounds like a cat about to vomit on clean carpet. Also, in the prologue, Pharaohs wouldn't be cremated and thus wouldn't have urns or ashes. For how popular this story appears to be, it really doesn't seem very engaging.
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Title: sequel to when in egypt??
Reviewed By: sliders245 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 05:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Please write sequel and I love When in Egypt story its great!!
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: animefairy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 11:28 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i rate your story 10 out of 10! it's a great story1 Really! i enjoyed it and i hope to read more of your stories too...i haven't finished reading the story yet but i'm at ch 20 and i love it so far!!!!! See ya!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 12:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chaptrer. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Daisuke14 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS THE MOST AWESOME FIC I HAVE EVER READ!!! The only things that're bugging me right now are that 1) You didn't have Yugi and Joey speak Japanese in Egypt or Egyptian in Japan when they didn't want to be heard by other people and 2) You didn't have Yugi and Joey tell Atemu and Seto about the whole thing in the past, especially when Atemu proposed. Otherwise, THAT WAS THE BEST THING I HAVE READ IN MY LIFE!!!!!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Aniras [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 03:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there! Took meh like 3 days to read everything, but was greatly worth it! I just wanted to say this was a really great story, Ah enjoyed it very much, n just wanna say Ah can't wait ta read more a ur stuff!! ^.^ C ya round laters! OUT!! ~Aniras >]
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Title: wahhh it's over.....
Reviewed By: Chibi Hikiri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 15:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
......it's over..... but i can't wait for ya next fic!
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Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 21:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
great i can't wait for the newest fanfic you'll make. what's the name gonna be called?
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sweet. I'm glad it all worked out for all of them, nice touch with the ring by the way ^_^ it made it sweeter...Thanks for a great read...
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 08:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am so glad they found each other again. I'm glad Yugi saved Atemu. I really loved it.
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Title: yayness!
Reviewed By: Chibi Hikiri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 01:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
yeah i don't have to dell with the baka anymore! (baka=boyfriend)
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Reviewed By: FourthYami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, and as kagomegirl21 said, it'd be interesting if Atemu caught a glipse of Yugi's drawings. ^.^
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Reviewed By: FourthYami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Their all back together again! *Dances* Update soon, damnit! *Throws you a cookie*
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Reviewed By: kagomegirl21 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ooh i cant wait to see what Atemu says when he sees all of Yugi's drawings of Antient Egypt!! update again soon!!
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay! they're back together...It's a shame this is almost over, what am I gonna do?
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Title: OMG!!!!
Reviewed By: Chibi Hikiri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 10:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
was that girl haley in the chap based of me?
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Title: Oh no! You do not get to end this without a sequel!!
Reviewed By: redconvoy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 09:00 CDT
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They are finally reunited with their loves! Cool! I would hate to see this end! WAAAAHHH!!! I love this!!!!
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Title: Great.
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 04:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, their hearts do remember. Poor Atemu feeling so alone and depressed. Now that he has Yugi I hope that will change. Good chapter.
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Title: cries
Reviewed By: tania2273 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 14:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
when are you going to update the fic. its been more than two weeks.... i'm crying right know... "sniff"
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 08:03 CDT
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God chapter. I feel bad that they had to separate, but hopefully they will meet again, soon.
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Title: sequel?
Reviewed By: sliders245 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 06:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story and are you going to write sequel to when in egypt?
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 00:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
OK I admit it I cried....It was well written I only hope that things work out well for the four of them... *sniff* Someone pass the tissues please.
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Reviewed By: yokihsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 23:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
more? -looks hopeful-
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Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 21:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
luv the new chapters!! is there more coming? r they gonna meet again in their time? i just can't wait!!
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Title: funny
Reviewed By: Chibi Hikiri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 19:26 CDT
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*giggles* they forgot there p.j's *chuckles* i forgot about them that what makes it so funny *dies of laughter*
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Reviewed By: Midnight_Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD Yay there is more!!!*does the happy dance* that totally made my day i was sorta sad to think that was the end. But yay two more chapters. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Midnight_Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww that was such a sweet chapter. lol i love your lil beginning and ending thing...you know you could always take Ryou from him if he didnt give your book back XD i mean seriously who wouldnt take Ryou over a book any day? lol Keep up the great work i cant wait to read more of this wonderful story.
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: Chibi Hikiri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 16:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
this fic is almost over sooooo not fair *cries*
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 15:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I'm glad they finally got together and I hope Yugi doesn't go home at sunrise. Great story.
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this!!!! I'm so happy they finally got together and I'm really glad you didn't do a 'wham-bam' type of thing but kept the feelings there...way to go! great keep it up. More please and soon ^_^
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