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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just finished reading thei story and i have to tell you i loved it i can berly wate to start reading the sequel
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Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 13:21 CDT
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*jumps up and down* YAHOOOOOOOO!
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Title: ;_;
Reviewed By: Little Sis On: March 04, 2006 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That Was Soo Awsome!Sorry I haven't Reviewed In Awhile But Busy Busy.Loved It.Glad Your Writing A Sequel.TTYL!
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Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 11:28 CST
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love the epilog. i knew they couldn't stay away from each other for long. so the next story is all about the kid and if it's zanatos' kid or not. well... that's gonna be tense. either way, i'm sure that alex and brittney will love the kid and show it a better life than zanatos could ever do. but... then the teaser you posted hinted to their deaths. isn't this the same thing that happened to alcadan? did scion live? how did alex even survive their fight? oh, there are so many questions. kudos and, as always, thank you for posting this story. i've enjoyed it tremendously. ^_^
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Title: *waves and blows nose*
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
curse you scion! and you seperated them... FOR A LONG TIME NOW! that's so not air. yes, you have another story to crank out. it can't be left this way. i mean, while i like endings such as these, it would be really sweet if you could continue. granted that school and life must come first. i totally understand there. this was a magnificent story. thank you so much for posting it. kudos! ^_^!
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Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 10:31 CST
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*sniff* i'm almost afraid to click on the next chapter link... i don't want any of them to die. ok... here goes. *closes eyes and moves mouse*
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Title: he's a WHAT!!!
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 10:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh that was a good plot twist! i always wondered why the same spell that would hurt the wraiths would hurt alex. i always figured it was because of him having a human form or something like that. so... is he the combination of several dark beings or what? guess i'll have to continue to read to find out! ^_~ Kudos!
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Reviewed By: Sonyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 12:24 CST
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oh and another thing is the girls name that was fiends with Britney, Holly or Aurora? thats ben confusing me soo much cause you kep going back and forth.
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Reviewed By: Sonyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 12:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there again, i love this story and the ending was soo sad. i want to read the eploge, and a second story for this woul dbe awsome. this story was awsome all the way through. if so i would say this shoud be published into a real book. well, i hope you make he second story. ill be reading all the way through ^_^ well please get back soon. love ya Ja Ne =^_^=
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Reviewed By: Inu-kag15(not signed in) On: February 25, 2006 20:52 CST
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I'm only on chapter 39 but man, it was funny when you made Alex tell Brittany he trusted her with his very heart when just a few minutes ago she had accidently blurted out some of his secret to Holly. Funny, I couldn't help but laugh, even though that is a bit of foreshadowing. I can't wait to catch up with the rest of the chapters, on to chapter 40...finally!
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Title: *slapps forehead*
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
duh! i should have seen it. well... i thought that alex might have been the original lord's son and didn't know it... but to BE the original lord. well that was totally unexpected. i'm really excited about these latest chapters. they were well planned and presented. i love the battle scenes. so descriptive. very nice. and brittney was wonderful. she stood by alex the whole time and supported him. that was a nice touch as well. all in all, it's been a great story so far. i can't wait for the next chapter. Kudos!
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Title: YAHOOO!
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
alright! go alex! get your game on! but... wait... you said not all endings are happy. brittney's gonna die cause she's human and can't take alex's power, huh? did you watch "The House of Flying Daggers" or something? Are all the lovers gonna die and Zanatos wins? that's like totally ... ARG! *takes a deep breath* i'm ok. really... *wipes tear away* don't let my outburst change the ending in any way. it's your story and i'm loveing it not matter what! kudos and a big hug. you've got me at the edge of my set now. ^_^!
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Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
right now it's a toss up on the description thing. i really want to find out what happens really quick but don't want to sacrifice any important details due to my impatient attitude. that's how i feel about it. and alex is HUMAN! oh, i did NOT see that comming. nice twist! GO KICK ASS BRITTNEY!
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Title: he did WHAT!?!
Reviewed By: Me... again ^_^! [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 21:23 CST
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*blinks* um... destruction? if it's alex's power, shouldn't he be able to absorb it or something? or at least bond with brittney to help her control it? either way, zanatos is gonna die and alex and brittney will live... right? and brittney won't get pregnant by zanatos... that would be WAY wrong. please don't tell me you have that in mind. *shudders* massive kudos!
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Reviewed By: me... ^_~ On: February 21, 2006 21:19 CST
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whoa... i thought kiba and the others had fallen off their rockers for a minute there. at least it worked. yeah, he'd better be pissed. and the first one he should kill is that rylus guy. yup. or at least let shadow and aurora finish what they started. *grins wickedly* kudos!
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