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| "beatiful soul" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2008 03:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have a few words for you: Spell check, punctuation, grammar, re-read. All of which you should brush up on and do. Your stories have good ideas but they REALLY need to be paragraphed, ESPECIALLY "Reflection Between Worlds". Seriously. Also, before you write a title of a story or the summary, make sure to write them in Microsoft word or something and spell check them before putting them up. You spelled "Beautiful" wrong. Your stories would be pretty damn good if not for these silly mistakes. I hope you take my advice to heart.
| Title: Beatiful Soul
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
| Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 14:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Though I've seen lots of Sess/Kag?? or Inu/Kag?? fics; yours is unique in the fact that Inu didn't do something to make Kags run away but rather Sess took her. I don't know what your pairings are going to be yet but it's a nice start. One bit of constructive critisism, the emotional changes you're putting your characters through seems a bit rushed. If you put them through a couple more situations before they reveal new found feelings, it will feel more natural. Still though, it's a good start.
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