| "Flight of Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: Seraphim Rebel On: March 01, 2002 22:55 CST
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Kawaii! I want to snuggle with Frieza too! hehe, this story is very good actually. More, pleaz?
I hate school to. School sucks. |
Reviewed By: Dignugs On: February 26, 2002 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me tell you what, I've read this fic several times and it just keeps on getting better. Ya know you should probably post this on fanfiction.net cause then more people would see it. Just the other day one of my friends was bitching about the lack of good frieza stories. Shes gonna flip when she sees this ::thumbs up:: |
Reviewed By: Lacquestar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2002 17:52 CST
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Oh Gawd this story is becoming the highlight of my day! get home from a sucky day at work, but happiness awaits as Frieza's girl has added yet another chapter! Yay! But then chapter ends in horrible cliffhanger...but it's okay because you will update again soon, right? Right? Gateway's right though, you really have improved with your spelling and stuff. If you ever need someone to beta this story I would be more than happy to do so since my computer is one of those high-tech models with spellcheck ^_^. And hey ::nudge nudge wink wink:: what's going on with Suisuka and Koola hmm? And I can just see the sparks flying between Frieza and Suicune. great job as always |
Reviewed By: Gateway To Infinity On: February 24, 2002 15:49 CST
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!! You can't stop there! AAAAAAH AAAAH AAAAAHHHH!!!!!! *has a heart attack and falls out of her chair* ^.^ I noticed you cleaned up 80% of your typos....good work! It keeps getting better with each chapter. |
Reviewed By: Lacquestar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2002 15:19 CST
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Another great chapter, the story just keeps getting better and better. I like how you are portraying Frieza here, how he can seem both neurotic and caring at the same time. Well done. And more of the romance stuff!!!! |
Reviewed By: Gateway To Infinity On: February 23, 2002 09:59 CST
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I'm really enjoying this! The mispellings and typos are still a small problem, but the storyline is very addictive :) |
Reviewed By: Isis On: February 21, 2002 18:09 CST
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Still doing well story wise, but you need to work on your spelling. Use spell check. I saw a lot of careless mis-spellings and typos that made the story look sloppy. |
Reviewed By: Lacquestar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2002 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story sounds good and the main character Seicune sounds intriguing. Plus it's a Frieza and Koola story (well only a little of Koola, but still good).I like how you slipped the names Ramoth and Caneth in there from Anne MaCaffrey's Pern stories. You better continue with this story because I want to know what happens, and why Seicune looks like a Super Saiyan and isn't one. The only problem was the spelling part, but hell, everyone has problems with spelling. Definatly not my strong suit either ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Gateway To Infinity [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2002 11:17 CST
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Ahhh....it's good to see Frieza fics out there, especially romances. There just aren't enough of 'em! *Gives you a thumbs up and bounces out* |
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