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Reviewed By: Vulcana On: February 08, 2006 08:37 CST
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Chapter 6: (Ok I've been negligent in the review department. Sorry) It is interesting that Kagome is probably more stressed about herself being mortal than Sesshoumaru is though he is still stressed he seems resigned to his fate where as Kagome still wants to fight it. A difference between Youkai and Humans? It is cute that Mizuki wants to be so helpful. That is typical of children her age. Good Job
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Reviewed By: Dyquem1 On: February 07, 2006 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please keep it up. I'm surprised you have so few reviews, but you can't stop it at this point. What would Rin do? I know. . . she's going to elope with the next assassin, the dragon's eldest son. . . (just kidding.} I would NOT want to see that happen. too cliche. I think Merkamou is right for her. He's known her longer. He never had any prejudices against humans, and he honestly likes and respects her as a person. His history with her is deeper & richer. He is older and ready to settle down. Isamu may be 90 years old, but he is emotionally still a kid.
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe in the morning On: February 05, 2006 06:03 CST
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I had your story confused with a story from cindygirl. Sorry. I'm also hoping for a Rin/Merkamou pairing.
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Title: great job!
Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 18:28 CST
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I really like the story and I love the way that you have decided to portray Rin. I can't imagine that sesshy would want to keep her weak. I also really enjoy your originaly characte "Merkamou". Alot of times I see that an original character can't be added without it sometimes (not all the time) being cheesey. But in this case I actually really enjoy this character. I'm routing for him to end up with Rin. I know that you've now introduced the the "snow leapord" but I'm still crossing my fingers for a Rin/Merkamou pairing. Well good luck I hope you update soon. :)
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe at work On: February 02, 2006 08:56 CST
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What he has a crush on her? No no... Didn't spar long enough for me.... Did you have something about pure heart miko's will live as long as the mate in the first story?
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe was logged in On: February 01, 2006 21:03 CST
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Does Rin get to fight him next chapter?
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Reviewed By: Vulcana On: January 30, 2006 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 5: Rin wanting to dress up... Cute. Merkamou's and Rin's deal is very cute. They are looking out for mates for each other. I can just see how unsucessful that will be. Also good is Sesshoumaru's amusement and lack of sympathy for his ally. Good Job
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uhoh... looks like things are starting to heat up between two certain fighters, lol. Keep up the good work...^_~
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Reviewed By: Vulcana On: January 28, 2006 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a good one too. I can see how you are setting the two of them up. I wonder how long it will take for them to start clueing into the fact that not only are they themselves attracted but the other is as well
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Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope you hook up Merkamou and Rin... Awwww that would be so cute and awsome. Well keep up the good work. ryl (review you later)... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Vulcana On: January 25, 2006 00:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 3: What better way to get the creative juices going than a good review right? Anyhow this chapter had several laugh out loud points. (mind you I was home alone so I could get away with the evil cackle) General amusement is Merkamou looking for a mate with fire. Line worth a snicker "She isn't alone. She has a trainee." Kagome bit back who the trainee was. `Let Merkamou figure it out on his own.' (lovely description of the fight by the way) Line worth the evil cackle Absolute shock. That was the only way Kagome could describe the look on Merkamou's face. Mind numbing amazement ran a close second. That was definately worth it. I think I see where you are going with this one and it looks like it will be a fun ride. Sesshoumaru's little sarcastic thoughts are good too (ie looking back on dull with fondness) The best and most amusing of the lot of sarcastic thoughts has to be "You would have better luck asking Kagome, she has more of an interest in such things." The dead pan expression gave away nothing of Sesshomaru's amusement. `She is already plotting your demise, foolish one. And you will walk into that trap with open arms.' Anyhow good job
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Title: me again
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, as always... I like the way this is going. Nice touch with the letters and flowers by the way... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 21:00 CST
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You have done very well. I am really enjoying your story. I need to get back to writing my own.
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Reviewed By: Vulcana On: January 21, 2006 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 1: Very cute I rather enjoy this continuation of your previous story. The title is very appropriate. It looks like this will be a fun story
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Reviewed By: Vulcana On: January 21, 2006 20:08 CST
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Lets hope this one goes through better than the last one. Another very goo chapter. I like the intrigue that you have going now. Good Job
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