| "The Sampson Effect" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre nsi On: July 10, 2006 23:06 CDT
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[accordance] //Hmmm I would suggest either "punished equal to " or "punished to correspond " Unfortunately this is kind of an awkward sentence. A good one just one that sort of fumbles every word unless you can find the ultimate 'one'.// Did you forget to take this out? It confused me for a moment! Yes! Duo can talk - I loved Wufei's reaction to him being spanked by Heero. Hilarious. And that Heero thought Duo might have brain damage...I hope an update will be appearing soon? It would be cool if Duo got kidnapped...I would love to see Heero break down over that. I think I just love tormenting him when it comes to Duo.
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Reviewed By: Carrie's love slave On: July 03, 2006 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I've recently become obsessed with fantasy stories, but this is one of the best I've read so far! Keep up the good work and update soon!!
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Reviewed By: rosefaerietalered On: June 21, 2006 12:58 CDT
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I'm ejoying the story, but I feel sorry for Duo! I like the plot and some intersting tidbits about Duo. Keep it up!
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Title: xD
Reviewed By: Nicolette On: June 21, 2006 03:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was funny! I am now also in love w/ the saying 'hes as fustrated as a one legged man in a ass kicking contest' I think its hysterical..and the part w/ wufei and how he was annoyed and hoe he wanted to sleep but at the same the minute heero found dou and dou got the hiccups heero said 'i'll get wufei if you want me to...I just sat there thinking poor wufei he'll never get sleep. T.T anyway very nice story Duo is just so cute when he writes those notes to heero.. I love how heero will try to figure out what duo is saying ..and he'll get it right but he's just so he all 'ya y'kno what just tell me later'
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre (nsi) On: June 20, 2006 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay! You updated! I hate the wait, but your chapters are well worth it. I love Duo making Heero worried by running off. I hope you throw a little bit of competition in there for Heero - maybe someone from Duo's past who was already in love with him before he became a slave? Heero jealousy and angst!
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: June 02, 2006 03:44 CDT
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yay, this is one of the best stories ever! I love it and can't wait for the next update!
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Title: refer back
Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 01:04 CDT
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your writing is good but i may suggest that you refer back to previous chapters...you mentioned before that heero was very ticklish below his belly. But in this chapter you changed. other than a few little things like that i enjoy the story and i have an idea conserning the tounge ring.^_~ keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre (nsi) On: May 31, 2006 06:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ye gods! This is a fantastic fic! I love that Duo has a tongue piercing, but I love even more how he uses it! I can't really summarize all the parts that I liked the most in this story, so rest assured in the fact that I love it all. BTW...in chapter 7, Duo is searching - to no avail - for Heero's ticklish spots, yet in a previous chapter (can't remember which) he was playfully tormenting Heero by assailing his ticklish area below his bellybutton...It got me confused a bit, or was Heero allowing Duo to tickle him to tears in the first incident? Nevermind me and my stupid questions...but! You can expect many more reviews for this story - you can't escape my lunacy! You're favourite marked...bwahaha...ahem...
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE!
Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: May 08, 2006 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please, please, please, please PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama nsi On: May 03, 2006 11:22 CDT
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yay!!! duo can sing at least. hope he gets to talk soon!!
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Reviewed By: ch. 6 On: April 30, 2006 18:32 CDT
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It's all in his vocal cords. Whether I am right or wrong. I still like this fic. There are some parts I would love to be with out but it's a very entertaining fic none the less.
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Title: Hmmm
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 11:50 CDT
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Samson effect...hmmm... I'm starting to get an idea of what's going on... ::Waits to see if he's right:: Please update soon, this is good.
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Reviewed By: Silver Harmony On: April 30, 2006 10:09 CDT
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Stumbled upon this fic ... and so far it's been great ^_^ It's interesting, well-written and quite in character too. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Codan On: April 30, 2006 05:28 CDT
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I really like the horse. You've made Chang perfectly IC, it's great amnd I thought the bit with the pregnant women was very funny. Poor Heero at the end, he really oughtn't be King.
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Reviewed By: FranceGamble [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I'm late in reviewing. Anyway, really good story thus far. I really can't wait to find out what happens! I am on the edge of my seat and also up at 2 in the morning because of the slow internet and waiting for things to load like the chapter and the review page! Arg... anyway, I'll be checking for updates on a regular basis, or at least when I'm not working another 24 hour shift. Please update soon! ^_^ Arigatou gozaimashita! ~France
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