|
| "Miles 'Foxy' Prower!" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Reviewed By: Kaimen On: April 16, 2006 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best stories ever. it's better than the t.v. series. in fact they should make a t.v. series out of this, that's how good it is. i sincerely hope the author writes tons more!
| Title: Chapter 21
Reviewed By: fairy-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOHOO! Yiffy, you've done it again! This chapter was unbelievable! First of all, the opening was perfect, it really was. You portrayed the menacing atmosphere of Bacillus's rampage flawlessly, to the extent that I could actually sense the soldiers' fear as they realised that the situation was hopeless and that resistance was futile. Bringing back not one, but a great number of Chaos creatures was brilliant! It makes me wonder though... you now have the master emerald and Chaos... Is there any chance of Tikal making an appearance? I only ask because I like Tikal and she could help Sonic's group to deal with the Chaos. If not then it doesn't matter, I will continue to love your story regardless!! It truly is completely AWESOME!!! Now for the new OCs: WOW!!! More of your cool original characters! And they're from another galaxy! I really loved the way you introduced them little by little, building the suspense as to who exactly the strange foreigners were the whole time! They sound really interesting, especially with their pointed ears and all their alien technology! Did you just think that up all on your own or did you do some research? Either way it was amazing! I can't wait to find out more about them! And I was very interested to hear that Bacillus is in fact an escaped convict... And if your new OCs are hunting him that would make them bounty hunters, no? Oooooooooooooooh, that's so cool!! I was also glad to see my favourite Fox getting back in on the act, though I did find it very funny when he stole Shadows idea then interrupted him to tell everyone lol! Poor Shadow, he's finally got his voice back and now no one wants to listen. Though I have to wonder about plan B. Surely plan A is too simple to work first time and besides, plan B is all about Sonic and the Diablde right? *goes starry eyed* That is way to good a storyline to miss out!! The adorable Armic was as cute as ever, not knowing what a cell phone was! And I very much liked how the whole crystal magic worked, especially the fact that Armic just made up that cool little rhyme just to show off lol! And now Rouge wants to learn this magic of his... I'm looking forward to reading about that! I always knew that Rouge loved precious gems for a reason! Don't worry about your story being to hard to understand - it makes sense to me! The depth, the elaborate detail and the wonderfully original storyline are why I adore this fic so much! As well as all the plot twists! I never know what to expect with your writing Yiff. ^_^ Once again you've delivered another stunning chapter to add to the collection! Thank you and please keep up the brilliant work!!
| Reviewed By: Tails11 On: April 16, 2006 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting OCs. Shadow and Tails seem to have similar thought processes, which I quite like. And, correct me if I'm wrong, but Shadow got his voice back, permanently! I was wondering if you were going to stick with the sign language or not. One last thing before I finish this review off. Call me paranoid, but it seems to me that plan A is to easy. Armic is going to have to resort to plan B, thats my geuss at any rate. Update as soon as you can!
| Reviewed By: Speciall Ed [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Great chapter. The OCs look really interestingand the growing issue with Bacillus is so in depth, it's very well written.
| Reviewed By: Watch For Stars* On: April 16, 2006 08:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wyatt is AWESOME! I like the way you described him and Tiffany! At first, when I raed about their ears, I was thinking, "They're elves? WTF?" But I kept reading and got it. lol Yeah, I'm slow... It's early, leave me alone! The way you can just make up technology and crap is AMAZING! lol So, who's gonna be the one to recite the chant? Hmm? I'm thinkin' it's gonna be Cream! I mean, who's more pure than her? Armic may be an innocent kinda guy, but he's still done smioe pretty bad things because of Baccilus! (Told ya it's early... I can't remember how to spell his name...) Okay, keep it up, Josh! ~_^
| Title: YO
Reviewed By: Luv Shadow 14* On: April 15, 2006 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE, I'M TELLING YOU, YOU COULD WRITE A FRIGGIN BOOK, THIS THING IS SO LONG! MAN... BUT IT'S SO GOOD. SHADOW GOT HIS VOICE BACK, OH YEAH! BOO-YAH, BITCH! LOL OK, DUDE, THIS IS LIKE THE BEST STORY I'VE READ! AND IT'S SO LONG! I LOVE THE LONGNESS... IF THAT'S EVEN A WORD, WHICH I DOUBT IT IS... JUST SOME MADE UP WORD FROM YOUR'S TRULY... LOL BUT DUDE (AND I NEED TO STOP SAYING "DUDE") THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER! I LOVE IT! AND SHADOW'S THE BEST, BTW... HE GETS HIS VOICE BACK... *TEAR* LOL KK, LIKE I ALWAYS SAY, GREAT JOB! LOVE IT! AAAAAAND ALL THAT OTHER SHIT... LOL ~LUV SHADOW 14~ ;)
| Reviewed By: DIPLOMATIC_FOX [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 16:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
sweet please add more and finish up asap or when ever ypu feel like it
| Title: tazkol master of emeralds
Reviewed By: tazkol master of emeralds [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
perfect! i like where tails is going with this. but hey! where are the super emeralds? just asking.
| Title: loneriver
Reviewed By: Rach123454321 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 09:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL the rhyme was just something he made up? Go figure XD!Your story rocks, but you are getting bored of writing it? :( I think it should get more reviews, at least there isn't a lot of flamming(flameing? I don't think I spelt it right) right? Keep updating =D if you don't get too bored of it, xD can't wait till next chapter =D
| Reviewed By: Tails11 On: April 14, 2006 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have truly outdone yourself on this chapter, I have got to say. Sonic's jokes, though rather tackless but thats Sonic when it come to jokes, were pretty good. Your cliffhangers are what keep the story going, keep the rest of us wating for more, and you do a masterful job with them. Also, i'm not sure if i've said this yet or not, but I really like Armic. He seems so... innocent and full of wisdom beyond what one would think he had. A very nice OC. That about wraps it up for my review. Here's hoping you continue soon! Keep it up and going. And going and going and going...
| Title: omg...
Reviewed By: Luv Shadow 14* On: April 13, 2006 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I FRIGGIN HATE YOU! WHY THE HELL DO YOU HAVE TO STOP RIGHT THERE?! SERIOUSLY THOUGH... I'M CRYING NOW... I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! HURRY UP! LOL JK BUT SERIOUSLY... THIS IS LIKE, ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE EVER READ IN MY LIFE! I LOVE IT! OMG! YOU MUST GET THE NEXT CHAPTER UP SOON! ~LUV SHADOW 14~ ;)
| Title: tazkol master of emeralds
Reviewed By: tazkol master of emeralds [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wish i could say i could some this up in one word genius but frankly that doesn't cover it so i'll rate it this way out of 7 choas emeralds i give you total choas control!!!x5 to the power of 600,000,000,000
| Title: Your....darlings?
Reviewed By: Watch For Stars* On: April 13, 2006 16:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
lol Yeah, I read the a/n. lol When do I not? lol Anywayz... SHADOW GETS HIS VOICE BACK?! Flippin' Sweet! And WTF did you mean when you wrote that it may not be permanent? HUH?! What?! >.< You'd BETTER tell me, Josh! I will hunt you down! You will feel my squirrely wrath! BTW, Foamy is awesome!!!!! lol Okay, *showers Josh with love* Update soon like you said! The end of the week is fast approaching! Or did you forget it's Thursday? lol
| Reviewed By: DIPLOMATIC_FOX [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 14:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
sweet yor are one of the best wrighters i read so far i wont name names just to be nice
| Title: Sorry for posting again.. my last post got sut off :/
Reviewed By: Rach123454321 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*phew* I thought you stopped the story, I am glad it was just writers block, incredibly LONG writers block... =D YAY!!!!!!! Shadow was finally found out! O.o;; how did you come up with that rhyme though? The one Armic said to his rock. I am horrible at rhymes :P Oh yeah and YAY I am one of your favorite reviewers.. at least on the fanfic xD. Update soon! (Which I am sure you will!) xD Your story rocks, as always! But adding shadow did help.. xD Ehh sorry for doing part of the same review twice, but my last review got cut off and I wanted it to be finished.. they should put an edit button for a person's reviews..
| | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] |
|
|
