|
| "Miles 'Foxy' Prower!" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Title: Chapter 19... was... so... totally... AWESOME!!!
Reviewed By: fairy-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 04:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, YIFFYONE!!!! *hugs* How on earth do you keep coming up with all these totally amazing, original ideas!!? I've always prided myself on my imagination but it is nothing compared to yours! This fanfic is awesome in every possible way, shape and form! Its so detailed and well written, and the plot is so deep and complex that its truly awe inspiring! Seriously, I'm not making this up just to be nice or anything, your story is brilliant beyond words! Hmmm... I'm actually running out of new ways to praise you, I hope you're not getting tired of all my reviews being so similar lol! How can you possibly think that people wouldn't like Armic? He's absolutely adorable and so very, very original! I love how you've written his character; you've balanced his strengths and weaknesses perfectly! And I love the storyline you've come up with for the history of the emeralds - its sooooooooooooooo cool! I'm glad you're proud of this chapter, you should be! It's clear that you put a whole lot of hard work into writing it since it turned out so well! The detailed descriptions, the explanations... I could imagine it all perfectly!! AND I DIDN'T GET CONFUSED AT ALL! YAY! Seriously, I bet you could write for a living! AND, on top of all that awesomeness, there was ROMANCE!!! *jumps for joy* I AM SOOOOOOOO HAPPY! THAT SCENE WHEN CREAM CAUGHT TAILS LOOKING AT HER WAS SOOOOOOOOO DAMN CUTE!!!! THANK YOU!! And I loved the part when Knuckles and Eggman were fighting and Rouge whispered something in Knux's ear to make him stop lol! I wonder what she said... maybe that's best left to the imagination. ^_~ Oh, and the way you made Armic compare Sonic to Sir Alexander was brilliant! With the neon green eyes and the spiky blue hair... oh it was just soooooooooo cool! Sonic is that knight's reincarnation isn't he? And Sonic's going to get to wield the Diablade! *goes starry eyed* SONIC WITH A SWORD! How cool!! ^_^ Right, I think I've babbled on enough for now lol. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter - I can't wait to see the gang's reaction when Shadow reveals himself! Except for Tails who's already seen him of course! Ooooooooooooooooooooooh, it's going to be soooo amazing, I can't feel it! Thank you for the wonderful chapter and please update soon Yiffy!
| Title: I am NOT logging in!
Reviewed By: Luv Shadow 14* On: March 10, 2006 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FRIGGIN A! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! IT HAS SUCH A COOL BACKGROUND AND STUFF TO IT! YAYZ! I DIDN'T GET CONFUSED! GO ME! LOL OK, I'M GONNA STOP NOW... BUT, NO, I DIDN'T GET CONFUSED, AND THAT'S THE GOOD PART ABOUT ALL THIS. I LOVE THE STORY AND I DIDN'T GET CONFUSED BY IT! AT ALL! I LOVE THE WAY YOU EXPLAINED ALL WHAT HAPPENED IN THE PAST AND STUFF WITH THE CHAOS EMERALDS AND THE MASTER EMERALD. IT CREATED A REALLY COOL IMAGE INSIDE MY HEAD AS I READ IT! CONGRATS! AND THE WAY YOU DESCRIBED SIR ALEXANDER, MY GOSH, HOW TO SAY IT... IT WAS FRIGGIN SWEET! AND I LIKE HOW YOU HAD ARMIC COMPARE HIM TO SONIC, IN THE SENSE THAT HE LOOKED LIKE HIM AND STUFF, AND HOW HE SAID THAT IT WAS HIS "DESTINY" TO FIND THE RIGHT PERSON TO TAKE THE "DIABLADE" (OSM NAME BY THE WAY). IT CREATED SUCH AN AWESOME PICTURE IN MY HEAD OF IT AND I CAN'T STRESS ENOUGH HOW YOUR WORDS JUST, STIMULATE (COULDN'T FIND THE WORD) ME AND MY MIND. IT WAS AS IF I WAS WATCHING A MOVIE IN MY HEAD. IT WAS JUST THERE, AND IT WAS SO COOL! AS I SAID BEFORE, THE IMAGERY AND THE WAY YOU EXPLAIN THE EVENTS THAT ARE OCCURRING IN THE STORY, THEY JUST POP INTO MY BRAIN AND HELP ME TO UNDERSTAND THE STORY BETTER... ONE THING I NEED TO WORK ON IN MY STORIES... OK, WELL, ANYWAYS, I FELT BAD FOR LEAVING ALL THESE SHORT REVIEWS AND STUFF ON SUCH A GREAT STORY (AND, YES, IT REALLY IS A GREAT STORY, DON'T START ALL THAT "OH, NO IT'S NOT, YOU'RE JUST SAYING THAT BECAUSE YOU'RE NICE..." 1. YES, I AM NICE. 2. DON'T BE SO MODEST! IT IS A GREAT STORY, ACCEPT THE FACT THAT PEOPLE LOVE THIS STORY ALMOST AS MUCH AS I LOVE FOOD. AND THAT'S SAYING SOMETHING!) I'M TRYING (KEY WORD "TRYING") TO USE ALL OF THE CHARACTERS, BUT I'M NOWHERE NEAR BEING TO THE END OF IT. LOL WELL, LIKE I SAID BEFORE, A THOUSAND TIMES OVER, AND I'LL SAY IT AGAIN... I LOVE THIS STORY AND I SWEAR TO GOSH IF THEY DELETE IT OFF OF THIS SITE, TOO, I WILL TAKE THE LONGEST BUTCHER KNIFE IN MY KITCHEN AND I WILL SLIT WHOEVER RUNS THIS SITE'S THROAT! THAT IS, IF THEY DELETE IT. OTHER THAN THAT, I AM SO HAPPY WITH THIS STORY SO FAR. IT HAS INSPIRED ME IN SO MANY WAYS, I CAN'T EXPLAIN! AND, YES, ARMIC IS LIKE, THE COOLEST OC EVER! YEAH, I'M GONNA GO NOW, BECAUSE I HAVE NOTHING ELSE TO SAY AND I AM SO VERY TIRED RIGHT NOW... YEAH, NYQUIL DOES KNOCK YOU OUT FOR AN INCREDIBLY LONG PERIOD OF TIME... OH, WELL... YEAH, AND YOU NEVER TOLD ME WHY YOU WERE OUT OF SCHOOL TODAY AND NEXT MONDAY... OH WELL, YOU CAN TELL ME LATER! LOL AND I WILL SEE TO IT THAT I CONCEAL THIS INFORMATION INSIDE MY LARGE BRAIN BUT RATHER AVERAGE-SIZED HEAD... THAT WAS SO UNCALLED FOR! OH, WELL, I'M JUST IN THAT KIND OF MOOD RIGHT NOW... WELL, I'VE SAID THIS MORE THAN A THOUSAND TIMES NOW... I THINK THIS MAKES 1,001... LOL I LOVE THIS STORY, AND IT IS SO WELL WRITTEN! YES, IT IS, AND I SAID EARLIER NOT TO START THAT CRAP WITH ME! LOL GREAT STORY, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND UPDATE SOON OR WHENEVER YOU CAN! I KNOW, YOU ARE VERY BUSY WITH A LOT OF STUFF, LIKE WRITING YOUR STORY, EDITING MY STORY, (HINT, HINT, WINK, WINK, NUDGE, NUDGE), AND WHATEVER ELSE YOU MAY BE DOING UP IN THAT STATE OF YOUR'S... WELL, TECHNICALLY IT'S NOT YOUR'S BECAUSE YOU DON'T OWN IT, YOU JUST LIVE THERE... OH WELL... AND I SWEAR, IF THIS WEBSITE FUCKS UP MY REVIEW, I'LL BE PISSED, BECAUSE I POURED MY HEART INTO THIS... AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!! I KNEW IT! I KNEW THIS WOULD HAPPEN... IT SO TOTALLY FUCKED IT UP! I HATE THIS! I HAD WAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY MORE TO THIS REVIEW, BUT NO, THE SITE HAD TO GO AND FUCK IT UP TO MAKE IT SO THAT I CAN'T REMEMBER WHAT I WROTE TO WRITE IT AGAIN... OH WELL... GREAT STORY. GREAT JOB. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK... UPDATE SOON... ALL THAT GAY CRAP THAT I ALWAYS PUT IN MY REVIEWS... I'M NOT GONNA MAKE THE SAME MISTAKE AGAIN... ALMOST DOWN TO ZERO! OK, TALK TO YOU LATER! 0
| Title: Great story!!
Reviewed By: Tails in Chaos Armor On: March 05, 2006 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. on fanfiction.net my story got removed can someone tell me why? anyway I need to stop talking continue with your great story.
| Title: Erm...
Reviewed By: Cobalt Blue On: March 05, 2006 15:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmm... After rereading my review, I realized I was a bit mean to those who like OCs. :P Anyways, I should've said: I generally dislike OCs, as they tend to get annoying, Mary-Sueish, overly powerful, or any combination. The Emeralds being actual beings (can't really say people ;D) was a great idea. Hopefully, I won't be murdered by OC lovers. Signed, Cobalt
| Title: I love this Fic!
Reviewed By: Cobalt Blue On: March 05, 2006 13:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*glomps you* I hate FF.net as well... *waves MediaMiner flag* Anyways... the only problem I have with this fic is... well, I get a little lost. It's just... all the PoV changes get me confused. Other than that, it is hilarious, and you have one of the best story ideas I've ever seen. Poor Tails... Everybody was trying to... erk. Vampy Shadow = Uber. ^_^ Eggman... he's actually acting like I've imagined him to act. Like an idiot. Poor Knuckles! ;_; He's blind in one eye. >.< Everybody seems quite in character, and you've created the first OC that I don't forking hate. I was just wondering... why does Tails wear the vest and shorts? Not that I mind... do Sonic and Knuckles wear clothes of some sort, too? But I digress... Best Fic Ever!Sincerely, Cobalt ^_^ ...P.S. Update! :P
| Title: I forgot my password
Reviewed By: Rach1234567 On: March 03, 2006 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your stories picking up! Lol I dont mind if you use curses or not ^^. I forgot my password so I cant sign on so this will do. YAY you missed me! :D *rates story 10 everything* Cant wait for your next fan fic! (Please dont make me wait because of all the other irrisponsible viewers.. ;-;) Gah its making say why I like your story... I likes it because, its origanal ummm *tried to think up random things* I just like it.. lol
| Reviewed By: Tails11 On: March 03, 2006 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interactive Nano Hologram. That's something i haven't heard of before. Extra points for originality! Keep it up, I look forward to your next update!
| Title: LOL
Reviewed By: Luv Shadow(not logging in) On: March 02, 2006 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO...FRIGGIN...SWEET! I LOVE THIS STORY! YAY! TOOK YA LONG ENOUGH...JKJKJKJKJK. I KNOW YOU WERE BUSY, ALL WITH TALKING TO US AND CRAP. YEAH, AND HER STORY SHOULD BE SO TOTALLY COOL! YAYZ! LOL BUT YEAH, THIS STORY IS SO FRIGGIN FUNNY, I MEAN, IT'S JUST FUNNY, HILARIOUS, ROFLMAO HILARIOUS! LOL YEAH, I WON'T BE LEAVING A LONG REVIEW LIKE STAR DID, CUZ WELL, I DON'T FEEL LIKE IT TODAY, AND PLUS I'VE LEFT YOU 2 REVIEWS THAT WERE 4000 CHARACTERS LONG ALREADY. SO, I WIN! LOL SORRY IT TOOK ME SO LONG TO READ IT... I'VE BEEN BUSY, JUST LIKE YOU HAVE. SO, YEAH, BUT I READ IT AND IT WAS SO TOTALLY OSM! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, ALTHOUGH I DON'T REALLY HAVE TO SAY THAT CUZ I KNOW YOU WILL! GREAT JOB, YET AGAIN. I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY! LOL YAYNESS! UPDATE SOON, OR WHENEVER YOU GET THE CHANCE TO WRITE, OBVIOUSLY! BYES! LOVE YA LOTS ;) AMES
| Title: WOOT AGAIN!
Reviewed By: Watch For Stars [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol YOU CAN'T END THE CHAPTER THERE! GOD! .....but you did and there's nothing I can do about it... *pouts* Anywayz! YAY! You gave "Reality Check" free press! lol Well, we did the same for you, so....yeah. lol I shouldn't be surprised! ~_^ You ARE the world's greatest editor after all! ^_^ *bows* Okay, that's enough of that. Jeez, I'm not your slave! Makin' me bow...Oh..yeah...you didn't... Must think of something intelligent to type to turn attention away from the stupidity... I'd delet it, but that Backspace button is so far away...GAK! MORE STUPIDITY! lol Must stop the stupididty...Screw it...I give up... A peanut sat on a railroad track; it's heart was all aflutter! Along came a choo-choo train! TOOT~ TOOT! Peanut butter! lmao Hologram idea was genius! PURE GENIUS! But you already knew that, as did all of your fans! HEY PEOPLES! READ "Reality Check" m'kay? YiffyOne here is the brilliant editor behind it all, so you know you'll like it! lol Sorry, couldn't resist...FREE PRESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You know what? I think I may just try to use up all of the space I have on this review... .....BUT I CAN'T THINK OF ANYTHING!!!!!!! So fuggedaboudet... BUT!... Damn... I forgot again... You should be used to this! It's the blonde in me... Sonic was portrayed SO WELL! FINALLY! A fic that doesn't OOC him into being a complete and total asshole! WOOT! I just realized something... You know how people know the speed of light and all that? OK, so what's the speed of dark? I mean... How can we know the speed of light, but not the speed of dark? ...I thikin' I'll give that line to Amy or something in "Reality Check" MORE FREE PRESS! Okay, this review is gettin' kinda stupid... Inner Me: Whaddya meamn 'gettin' stupid'? This thing's been stupid... Now, me, that's no way to talk to me Inner Me: I'm not talking... I'm inside you... I can't talk >.< God, that sounds nasty... OKAY! Everyone that's reading this knows they wanna laugh! SO LAUGH!!!! *twitch* Sorry, it's me evil side again... *twitch* The wheels on the short bus go round and round, round and round, ROUND AND ROUND! The wheels on the short bus go round and round, ALL THROUGH THE TOWN! ...That's a song my last physchiatrist taught me... It calms me down... *twitch* This has to be the longest review I've ever written in my life... AWESOME! ME LIKEY! lmao Yeah, I'm hyper, how'd ya guess? SUGAR SUGAR SUGAR SUGAR!!! That sounds like something Charmy would say... OOOH! I can't WAIT until ch 19!!! I can tell it's gonna be a good one, but, then again, aren't they all? You are a genius! Unlike Eggman... Lord, I'm so dain bramaged... HEY! I spelt that all wierd and stuff... Can't... reach... backspace! GAK! *fizzle sound* Do-Do-Doo! We're sorry. If you'd like to leave a message. Please hang up and call again...BEEP! *click* CRAP! I hung up on myself! God, I'm such a jerk... Wait, what? Anywayz!! You know you're all laughing your butts off at this. I know you know you are! I know you know you know I know you know you are! Try to figure that one out!!! I love Shadow being a vampire. It's all so cool! You'd expect it to be OOC, which it is in a way, but it's not in a way! The more imporatant way. Now, how the heck do I explain what I just typed? He still is the same Shadow, mentally. He still thinks the way one would expect him to and such. Man, it'd be funny if I hit 0 on the characters left thing and the interet blew up... You're right about that. 476 left BE-YOTCH! WOOT AGAIN... AGAIN! Hmmm... How to use up those characters... Hmmm... *lightbulb* I think I may have an idea! Okay, first I'll type more random crap like what I'm doing now. Second, I'll... *lightbulb goes out* I LOST IT! CRAP! WHY MUST I LOSE THE ENTERTAINING STUFF?! WHY?! lol 170 characters left! COUNTDOWN! lol No, that would take too long and it'd confuse me... Which isn't hard to do... This is so much fun.. Okay, update soon! My review is done.
| Reviewed By: Speciall Ed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very funny! The best part of the chapter was definitely the jokes about Eggman. Those were great.
| Title: Chapter 18
Reviewed By: fairy-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Runs up and hugs YiffyOne* YOU UPDATED!!! Thank you very, very much! Ah, another excellent chapter to add to the collection, your story updates make me happy. ^_^ There were so many funny parts of this chapter that it would take me forever to list them all, and I won't bore you by doing that because, lets face it, you already know what they are - you wrote them lol! On the other hand, I enjoy writing detailed reviews about my favourite stories so I'll list just a few ok? First of all: Yay! The hilarity of the immature Eggman continues! I laughed so hard at the thought of Eggy having a tantrum just because Tails insulted him a bit and can invent better gadgets than he can! Go Tails go! Tails rules lol. Oh, and I absolutely adored the part with Amy and Sonic when the blue hedgie first wakes up! It was just so damn cute!!! *_* Thank you, thank you, thank you! Oh, and the way you made Sonic so cool with his winks and funny replies even though he was injured was brilliant! Oh, and vampire Shadow is still awesome! Er... I think that's it for now lol. Keep up the great work Yiffy! I'm dying to know what happens next!
| Reviewed By: Cyberbanjo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 22:48 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a good chapter. Sorry if I haven't reviewed recently, but I've been very busy. Poor Cream... I feel sorry for her, not knowing Tail's predicament and all. Oh, by the way, have you ever played Tales of Symphonia, because the wings of Chaos remind me a lot of that game.
| Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: fairy-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 12:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I AM SOOOOOOO HAPPY!!!! Thank you so much for updating! You had me worried there for a while, I thought you weren't going to post the next chapter for ages, which would have been... *shudders* ...horrible. But you did update! You did! And for a short time all is right and well in the world! (At least in my world lol!) This is the first time I've read chapter 17, and (as usual) I thought it was absolutely brilliant!!!! *becomes hyper* Ok, ok, deep breaths... I'm now going to list everything I loved about this chapter: 1. The Knuckles/Rouge part at the beginning was so cute and funny! Those two are made for each other, even if they refuse to admit it lol! In fact, you could almost say it was romance!!! *hugs YiffyOne* Thank you! 2. Even though I feel bad for poor Cream after Tails rejected her offer, *sighs happily* it just proves that cute fox boy really does like her! He's just scared to confront his feelings for her!! Awww, the ultimate cuteness of it all! ^_^ 3. Lets face it, vampire Shadow is awesome! Nuff said. 4. The scene with Amy and Armic was sooooo sweet! I loved it so much! And I really love Armic; he's just so adorable in that little brother kind of way! I really much congratulate you on that amazing imagination of yours, out of all the fanfics I've ever read only 2 people have every made me truly love their OCs - and you're one of them! That little Chaos boy of yours is wonderful and I really like the way you've made him see Amy in such a good light. I love Amy; she's one of my favourite characters (Apart from Tails and Cream of course!) and I don't think that people give her enough credit most of the time. Oh, and I'm glad that Armic finally got the 'Wings of Chaos', I was wondering when they'd finally show up again! All in all, just in case you haven't already guessed it, I LOVE THIS STORY!!! It literally just keeps getting better and better! Now I just hope that Sonic will be ok... I can't wait to find out! Bring on the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Speciall Ed [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is still as great as ever. Most stories I read get worse as time goes by. This still remains brilliant.
| Reviewed By: STILLblah On: February 22, 2006 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was good!!! keep going.. fanfaction sucks!!!! ^.- ya i dunno why i still go to it though.... still ur good and update soon!!!!!
| | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] |
|
|
