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 Reviewed By: arora_kayd [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 28, 2006 01:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Go Archer! Get your flirt on! ^-^ Nuuu! Don't hurt the Highwind!! How much more pain can Balaam inflict on poor Cid??? *hee* Fluff!!!! Het!Fluff... and I love it! crazy. Very cute :] They make a great couple. If they don't they really need to start making Vin and Cid plushies. "Say Goodnight" by Beth Nielson Chapman is another great angst song. I first heard it in a Sirius/Remus vid. *wibbles*
 Reviewed By: margyy  On: April 28, 2006 00:43 CDT
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heh hehe i read the last chapter on your site, and i come back over here and BAM! it magicaly appeared ;) i gota say, this is probly one of the best fanfics ive ever read :D all the others either stop, or have evil twists where your like NOO! that cant happen >.< but i love your fics *hugs* there uber great!! oh btw did you sister ever draw you those pics of nanaki?
 Reviewed By: Lord Ickarous  On: April 27, 2006 22:13 CDT
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Yuffie Nanaki! Yuffie Nanaki! Yuffie Nanaki! yey yey yey! FINALLY! i was looking forward to this pairing..they seem to be the only het pairing i can bare...well no, i love Aries and Zack too, but that is pretty much it... i am sensing a lot of action in the next chapter? Yes? hopefully. i love the well detailed actions scenes you do! if we can't have love making then bring on the war! Wooooo!
 Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Jeredu  On: April 26, 2006 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is absolutely amazing. I love both this story and its prequel. I am especially impressed by the fact that you update so regularly, or, at least, on MediaMiner.org. I have you on my favorite authors list on fanfiction.net, along with both of these stories. You are the sort of fanfiction writer I aspire to be like- you have the creativity and skills to develop a long, intricate, and very interesting story, and the dedication to actually finish it. I am often dissappointed by the many writers out there on the 'net who leave their stories unfinished. I respect you for that, and your stories have been particularly enjoyable, to the point that I am losing sleep because I can't drag myself away from the computer. (it is 1:12 a.m. as I write this.) Keep at it! I'm impressed!
 Reviewed By: margyy  On: April 24, 2006 03:51 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
poor cid.. i feel soo bad for him.. its so heartwrenching.. :( must really hurt not have being able to tell vincent how he really felt.. it just makes me feel horrable :\ poor cid.. oh and btw seraph/zack would be great lol ;)
 Reviewed By: arora_kayd [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 24, 2006 01:07 CDT
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CID CID CID CID! *sob* it's ok!!! He'll remember you!!! Don't cry!! I'll give you hugs! And a Vin plushie!! You're so close!!! only like 5/6 more chapters!!! I very much like the details you added to that scene. Specially Cid's feelings at the end. Chapter 34?? ::dies:: I guess I can wait until then. OMG! That song fits so well! Now I won't be able to listen to it w/o thinking of this fic. Just like "The Reason" that one makes me wibble every time. I wibbled at the end of this chapter too... Cid so needs a hug!!!!
 Title: kasahios
Reviewed By: Mecam Nite [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 23, 2006 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
aw... youre totally killing cid! poor guy... he's so angsty it makes my chest ache... and bugenhagen is dead... and you brought zack to life? geez.. you really cant keep anyone dead unless you have them die yourself... hope hojo doesn't come back too.. that would be hell... anyway.. i just LOVE your series.. i read your prequel to this, and it's just--wow... ya... that's the word... wow...
 Reviewed By: Lord Ickarous  On: April 23, 2006 22:12 CDT
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... I refuse to get started on how much i love Cid and Vince. *sigh* Please Draco! Please! Don't let my poor Highwind suffer anymore! though the drama is strong and compelling (and down right addictive) i miss them. That scene is probably my favorite memory of them as well...awww..love...i love love...Such a strong love. It makes everyone elses love look like...oatmeal or something absurd. Yes, this is crazy talk, but i am going insane on behalf of Cid so he won't feel alone. Now i want to read Shattered Ice...again..for the 3 time. I want to relive all their wonderful times (and not to wonderful times) together again...Or should i just be patient and wait for you to create new wonderful times?
 Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 22, 2006 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Just stopping in to tell you how much I love this series. I had wondered if you were going to bring Zack back. I'm glad you did. I'm hoping for Sereph/Zack. I can't wait for the reunion of Vincent and Cid. I personnaly prefer Vincent/Tseng but you write Vincent/Cid so well.
 Reviewed By: margyy  On: April 21, 2006 04:43 CDT
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YEAAHH!! ZACK!! i love you for bringing him back! ^__^ he was totally my first love in FF7, and them Reno.. but hurray! XD
 Reviewed By: arora_kayd [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 21, 2006 01:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Zack!!! Ok, I take back my comment on the forum and now sense Seraph/Zack in Shattered children ^---^ And Fenrir! Yays! I shall look forward to his arrival in the main time line :] I'm thinking he's going to be the first to meet up with 'Seraph' .. or be the first to recognize him ... he could run into Cloud first ... or Aeris ... but who knows?? You are the master at keeping us guessing ^-^
 Reviewed By: Lord Ickarous  On: April 20, 2006 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Zaaaaaaaaack! I love you Dracoqueen, i LUV you! I love Zack...oh Zack. I can't look at him you know. Every time i do i get upset. The way he died was so...lame. He deserved a much more honorable death then being shot in cold blood... It made me so angry...I mean i was furious! You only get to see Zack for like 3 minutes, then poof! He is gone. And it isn't like he isn't important. He is VERY important. He deserve so much more credit...Sorry...i am rambling. I guess what i am trying to say is, Thank you for bringing him back! I have no problem with you bringing him back to life...but i keep thinking ahead and trying to figure out how you are going to make this all work...You are a brilliant mind so i know you will be able to pull it off. i just keep thinking about the end of advent children...i can never watch it. Oh ZACK! YOU DESERVE SO MUCH BETTER! *hugs screen* In the movie i always assumed that wolf that appeared ever so often was Zack...i didn't really know why it would be him the first few times i watched it, but then the more i watched the more it seemed that Zack was there to watch over Cloud...i think i am going to cry again...sorry...I can't wait until the next chapter...incredible as usual...hey wait...no...darn it, i am confused again. i think i am going to go read chapter 1 up to this point..i am so confused... yey!
 Reviewed By: margyy  On: April 18, 2006 02:40 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
LOL poor Clould's villa >:} it got destroyed hahahahaa thats makes me happy ^.^ but oh man.. so much aeris cloud fluff @_@
 Reviewed By: arora_kayd [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 17, 2006 03:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah... I was totally going to go to sleep but then you had updated... ^-^ Yay for fluff! Yay for sleep! Jeeze. Poor Reeve and Archer. And Tseng and Elena. They so win a vacation after this. Don't worry Cid! You'll find him soon! Only 7 chapters and then the reunion! W00! I liked this chapter v. muchly, just like every loverly chapter :] Thanks for updating!!
 Reviewed By: Lord Ickarous  On: April 17, 2006 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
As if i would give you anything less than a 10... i am incredibly excited...whenever the subject of everyone individual summons come up i get excited...before they just confused and they still do a little, but i am just to excited to read what's going to happen...i can't imagine where you are going with this. It bothers me a little. it isn't possible to second guess this story..(or the last one for that matter). Who is replacing Aries i wonder...does that mean she is going to die? (again). I don't knooooow...Cloud comes off as clueless at times, which is why i like him i suppose. Hopefully Reno will be back by the next chapter...oh please...somedayt get back together. This is driving me nuts, but i trust you. You know what you are doing. ^_^ p.s, sorry for not reviewing in the last chapter. I's still's love's you's!
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