| "Shattered Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
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Reviewed By: margyy On: April 15, 2006 22:05 CDT
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hmm how wierd.. i just left a review but it didnt show up hmm.. well i was saying that .. LOL you forgot to kill him off? thats horrable :) btw cant wait till chapter 28!! :D
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Reviewed By: margyy On: April 15, 2006 22:01 CDT
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Reviewed By: arora_kayd [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 19:40 CDT
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Oh good. I feel better now ^-^ [curse the lack of line breaks! ah well] Chatper 28?? ::dies:: .. at least we know what to look forward to though! It shall be a happy wait indeed. Erebus is my hero. Lol. YESH!!!! Rocket Town!! Go Vincent, go!! *hee* Shera and Rude live there. *eeeeee* So excited. Another loverly chapter :] Thankies!! Glad to here you found a place. Hope the file transfers don't take too long. What a pain X3
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Reviewed By: Lord Ickarous On: April 11, 2006 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha...they are so official here! Making you fill out all this stuff just to tell you how great it was ^_^ And yet...i am sad. Not so much because of Bugehagen..(i think i spelled that wrong) dying, but Nanaki. He must be crushed, but at least he has Yuffie to fall back on. Maybe she will make a pass at him while he is vulnerable...Scratch that, that was just..evil. muhahaha.. No, but seriously, when is Cid going to find Vincent...er..Raven...maybe it was Zack? *shrugs* whoever he is at the moment, when is he going to find him? I feel horrible JUST HORRIBLE reading about how alone he is. Our poor Cid is making himself sick! Sorry...i am sure he will return (or not) when you feel it is time. The very last line, bit of it...i am not sure what it is..did i miss something? Most likely... You know how slow i am. I miss your forum. but this will due till you get another. You rock Draco!
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Reviewed By: arora_kayd [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 02:39 CDT
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Had totally ment to mention this on the forum .. but then it went away ;.; ... isn't is supposed to be 6-months, not three? Or am I forgetting something (that most likely. All the more reason to re-read the first 17 chapters! W00)
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Reviewed By: arora_kayd [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 02:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was this close to crying ... Cid needs a gorram hug! Nanaki too ... but he's got Yuffie. Yay for all the N/Y bits, btw :] Geh! Cid you were *so* close. Forever so close, and yet so far. I really hope he doesn't need lotsa smokes soon .. but i'm sure he will. Such is the nature of Angst (how I love it though!) Twas a brilliant and Loverly as ever. Can't wait for ch 19 and I hope you are able to fix the website drama soon ^-^
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Reviewed By: margyy On: April 10, 2006 23:52 CDT
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woow...i cant believed Buganhagen died... that was totally unexpected..but im sure you had a good reason (i hope) :\ and PLEASE have Cid find Vinny sooon :)
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Reviewed By: margyy On: April 07, 2006 21:03 CDT
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hmm Seraph.. that was a great chapter! update sooon!
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Reviewed By: margyy On: April 03, 2006 00:00 CDT
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that was totally awsome, yo. :p i just wanna squeze carbunkle >.< ..but the whole bahamut reeves thing confuse me since it popped up so fast, update soon, yo!
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat (too lazy to sign in) On: March 28, 2006 16:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These latest chapters are fantastic. You have me on the edge of my seat. BTW is "Eban" from the "13th Warrior"?
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Reviewed By: margyy On: March 16, 2006 02:37 CST
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ohh that was cool ^__^ hurray for Sephy! (i mean Seraph lol) but plleasee post about "raven" and cid soon ;-;
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Reviewed By: margyy On: March 16, 2006 02:10 CST
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ooohh icant wait to read this new chapter >.< im getting all quesy/butterflys in tummy ness (but in a good way ^^)
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Reviewed By: margyy On: March 14, 2006 02:53 CST
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ooh! i hope they meet up!! :D i reeallly dooooOO!!
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Reviewed By: margyy On: March 03, 2006 01:05 CST
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heyy awsome chapter ^__^ im glad u added more, is it tifa??? and im cnfused, dose this take place before the chapter u sent me??
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 21:15 CST
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I love what you've written so far. Do you post anywhere else?
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